OS after Precap! *UPDATED!* Chapter 2! PG.4! - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dushturain

this is really nice!! loved it!...

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Loved that you enjoyed it. Will be updating tomorrow so don't forget to check it out 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AMEKHA

Beautiful story. Pls continue



Thank you for your kind words 😃
I will be updating tomorrow so stay tuned 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: navk

wow this is awesome
plz do contii




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks ! Was amazin...plz plz update soon the remainin chapters 😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was simply fabulous
plz updt nxt part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this is amazing..pls continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm loving it...👍🏼
But don't let her get him so easily...make our drama queen sweat to get him back😃...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manan_aRMAAN

I'm loving it...👍🏼

But don't let her get him so easily...make our drama queen sweat to get him back😃...




Thank you!! 😊
Love the suggestion btw I will take it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I updated guys!
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I stood there helplessly staring at Manik who was still fuming with anger. He banged the door several times, not caring at all that his hand was injured not too long ago, by the same incident. Oh the irony. Manik better not dare to slam the door again. He would have to see the worst of me then.
" Manik don't you dare think of doing what you did earlier" I walked towards him and glared rigidly. I could see the dried blood and the fresh color of red still on his hand.
" Who are you to tell me what I should do and not?! " He screamed filling the silence hovering our locked room. This is my only chance. Neither of us can escape here, not for long.
" I at least have the right to!" I replied back with the same force that hit me. His expressions changed very rapidly to agony and hurt. I placed the palms of my hands against his cheek, and walked closer to fill the gap between us. Manik was motionless, not responding back. His body against the wall. Oh how the tables have turned! His left cheek and forehead was my next agenda. I stood there placing a gentle peck on Manik's left cheek. Manik's eyes remained shut and barely responding back to me. I took the initiative to place a gentle kiss on his forehead. My body struggles as he was at least 4 inches taller. Seconds past by and our lips were barely touching. Manik shot his eyes open and hastily pushed me back before I could do what I wanted for so long, To feel him. To feel the intense emotions driving this man crazy.
" Stop. Nandani I think you have forgotten the hate that is still engraved in my heart for you." Manik barely catching his dried up voice struggling to enunciate every word blurted out. My heart felt like it was getting ripped up several times and getting beaten every now and then. I know what he just blurted out was nothing but his brain talking. My throat dried up and I took a second to head to the corner of the room, trying to hide the embarrassment, disappointment, hell I don't even know what I was feeling. I felt nauseous and wanted to throw up. But I wasn't going to throw away this chance. I'm here to fight for Manik. For our love. I was up against the floor now seated, barely uttering a word. Silence roamed the atmosphere. I looked at Manik, his face clueless and lost looking down at the ground. I've never seen him like this. I wanted to hug him, hug him till he grasps for air. I took this chance to find the answers to my question.
" Manik I've had enough of this bullshit. Your bullshit! We can't be standing like this especially because not long ago did you proclaim your feelings for me?! We both know we can't stay away from each other!! Manik don't tell me that you've never made mistakes? Because I'll have you know it was not too long ago you did everyday?! " I shouted against my lungs fighting for air, but I didn't care I wanted Manik to know. I saw Manik's eyebrows furrowing and barely containing his anger.
" Mistakes?! Nandani this isn't about mistakes anymore! It's about godamnn betrayal. You betrayed me and my trust! Even if the world was against me, I'd hope you'd at least protect me, shine for me. But those were all just talks and games wasn't it Nandani?! I still cant fathom the fact that you would think I would commit murder and that too of a psycho?!" He shouted back towering my petite height. I was in no mood to let him take over. Not now.
" Manik betrayal? Betrayal is when you deliberately try to hurt someone. This was not intentional and in no way was it betrayal! I'm not perfect Manik! As much as it seems like it, I can lose my shit sometimes just like you do, just like humans do. I make mistakes and I'm more then happy to learn from these mistakes and move on! Manik trust is in no doubt the ultimate foundation of a relationship, but there are other basis to, like compromising, forgiveness?? You messed up too Manik? What happen when you fiddled with my trust? Took advantage of my naivety? I gave you chances though, and that is exactly I'm asking you to do Manik! If I wasn't alive now, please tell me would you or would you not do something to Soha?!!" I don't care who was hearing, I wanted Manik to know loud and clear, I wasn't giving up on him. Manik's face shot up abruptly and he couldn't hold any expressions. His face softened and almost gave up. I took few steps towards him. My body was urging to go and collide with his and that's what I did. My hands holding tightly around the nape of his neck, and my face burrowing inside his chest. I never wanted to let go of him, ever. I felt Manik's hands wrapped around mines momentarily after. My body leaped in joy.
" Yes Nandani I would kill anyone for you" Manik's raspy voice whispered in my ear. The answer to my question was answered, and I couldn't be happier. We stood in this position for many moments. I didn't want it to end, his hands clenching tightly around my waist. I didn't care who won today, but it was very evident that Manik's heart won this time.

Guys I hope you enjoyed it! I may not reply to all your wonderful replies but I appreciate each and one of them!
Btw I soo wish this happens in Monday's episode!😳
Edited by lorina24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Love it dear...every part of it...awesome job with our drama queen...love the question you put
"If I wasn't alive now, please tell me would you or would you not do something to Soha?!!"

Don't hate me for it...but before reading your answer from Manik...the answer came to my mind that Manik would say...
"You are right Nandini ...I can kill anyone for you...but if ...that...(he cannot say "happened")...I would have not killed Soha...I would make her suffer rest of her life..."

[🤔 side effects of continuously writing/thinking dialog on Manik for FF]
...Another idea...😛add the dialog...make them fight again..this time cute one...and continue...😆




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