Os Ego v/s Love part 3 uploaded pg 1

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Concept :
. Nandini and Manik both are heart broken, and suffering from a lot of pain after their break up. While Manik behaves rudely with Nandini. But in same time wants to help Nandini but doesn't show concern to her when she is around.
. Pandit has a soft corner on his student so he will try to get intimate on Nandini. He will try to get break Manan.
Part 1
Manik is sitting in his house and remember his last encounter with his shining star.
Manik POV: She was so cute when she made me remembered our moments.
Manik takes out his phone and sees the wall paper where his Nandini's shining.
He puts a kiss on her.
Someone is ringing. First he thinks it's his shining star but feels impossible because of his behavior. He hears someone footsteps.
Manik: Kabir tum yah aa?
Kabir: Haan because I was boring alone in flat so I thought to come here?
Manik: Take a place I will give u a beer.
When he leaves, Kabir takes out his phone and send a message to someone.

Navya comes to Nandini and she is about to ring when she hears her phone, it's a message from Kabir : I am with Manik now ur turn.

Navya POV: I have to convince her, now it will be difficult. Matarani help me.
Suddenly, the door opens.
It was chachi.
Chachi : Navya?
Navya : Hi I want to meet Nandini.
Chachi : But she is preparing her luggage.
Navya : Luggage but why?
Chachi : She is going to Mangalore with Rishab in three hours.
Navya POV: What the hell? I have to send a msg about it to Kabir.
In climbing stairs she text Kabir about it.

Navya knocks on Nandini's door.

Nandini: Come chachi.
Navya: I know that I am pregnant but not married.
Nandini: Sorry Navya I thought it's chachi.
Navya: So u leave for Mangalore?
Nandini : Yes I missed so much my Ammi's.
Navya : Tell the truth what happened with Manik and u in last time. And please
don't try to lie u can't.
Nandini tells her about how she tries to make him feels their love but he just says to not see him again and to be away.
Navya : So u want to go away?
Nandini stays silent.
Nandini: I love him he knows that very well but his ego makes him to hear his mind not his heart.
You know Navya I don't want to hurt him anymore. I will live with our non-erasable memories. Maybe one day when he will more calm we will meet again.
Navya: Or after app dono ka shaadi and batcha hoogi hai naa?
Nandini sees her strangely 😕.
Navya : Toh kya yaar? Ur man is here, u love him desperately instead of to change is mind u wanted to walk away. Wait wait can I ask u something?
Nandini: Why u are asking? Tell me.
Navya: What happened the night before Musicana?
Nandini thinks this horrible night.
Navya : Tell naa.
Nandini : Manik for Dhruv's love walked away, suno Navya it's past.
Navya: Not at all u do the same thing. Instead of to make him realize the truth
about Soha's death u want to quit him.
Nandini : But he ask me?
Navya : U don't remember I think but u also asked the same. But Monster
Manik has successful to convince you. He changed himself for you.
Nandini: Stop it Navya why u tried to stir the past. Over it's over. Now if u want help me otherwise u can go.
They hear chachi voice : Nandini and Navya come for dinner. It just two hours before ur bus Nandini so come fast.
Nandini hugs Navya 🤪: Sorry if I was bit rude with u. Come chelo we will eat what is special dish by chachi today?
Navya takes her hand : Go I will join u after bathroom.
She waits that Nandini goes downstairs and Navya calls kabir.

Their conversation:

Kabir : Bolo kya waa?
Navya : First go somewhere else for that Manik's can't hear.
Kabir to Manik: Sorry Manik it's urgent call. I come back.
Kabir to Navya: I am going to garden. Tell.
Navya: So Nandini prepared her luggage for Mangalore.
Kabir: What?
Navya: Yes yaar she is so sad to see her Monster like that.
Kabir: When she will leave.
Navya : In one hour she will leave for the bus.
Navya continues : So tell me the plan.
Kabir : Patta nai let me think and go before she gets doubts.
Navya joins Nandini for dinner.
Nandini : Rishab todassa kalo mere liye.
Rishab doesn't want.
Chachi : Usko kya waa?
Rishab goes and hugs chachi.
He has tears.
Chachi : Kya waa usko Nandu?
Nandini smiles: He doesn't want to leave you chachi.
Chachi sees Rishab gives him kiss on his forehead : Mere bacha don't be sad soon u will return hai naa Nandu?
Nandini nods.
Rishab suddenly has attack. Navya is shocked.
Navya: Kya waa usko?
Nandini panicked tries to calm his. So she starts to sing a song. He doesn't stop.
Chachi : Nandini gives me ur phone.
She tends her phone.
Nandini: Who u will call?
Chachi: Manik last time he was successful to calm ur brother.
Nandini : Likin.
Too late chachi dials his number.
Manil on the other hand sees the call: What the hell she wants now?
Manik picks up the call in anger.
Manik :Why u disturb me?
Chachi: Sorry beta can u come to the city hospital?
Manik is afraid : Kya waa Nandini ko kuch?
Chachi : Nai beta it's for Rishab we can't control him.
Manik: Ok I will come in ten minutes don't worry but in ur house.
Manik to Kabir: Come we have to go. Kabir follows him with an auto.

Recap : Manan discovers the truth about Soha. Manik feels guilty so he stands away from Nandini but Nandini's misunderstanding his behavior. Pandit ji calls Nandini to his house.

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Part 2


Manik and Kabir come to Nandini's house.
Kabir is also shocked like Navya to see Rishab in this condition. Nandini tries to hold his arms.
Manik approaches them : Chachi what happened?
Chachi: I don't know beta he was sad and suddenly he gets attack. Manik sees Nandini in tears.
Manik: Chachi lets go to the hospital.
All step out of the house.
Kabir : Navya and me will take an auto and follow you.
Manik nods.
Manik makes Rishab lay on the car. Nandini sits beside Rishab and takes his head on her laps.
Manik can't bear Nandinis tears. Suddenly they bang on the sidewalk.
Chachi: Kya waa Manik?
Manik: Kuch nai.
Chachi: Be careful beta.
He starts again.

They arrived to the hospital. Manan holds Rishab arms.
Doctor: Nurse takes in the room. Don't worry I will check him.
But Rishab doesn't leave Nandu's hand.
Nandini: I am here Rishab, please let doctor treat you.
Nurse takes him.
Nandini cries a lot.
Manik can't support her tears but he stays silent.
Navya to Kabir slowly : What all this yaar? Rishab and attacks?
Kabir: I don't know but it's perfect time kyu ki normally in one hour they have their bus.
A nurse run to Rishab's room and asks doctor to come fast kyu ki burning patient is in critical situation.
Kabir thinks: It's strange burning patient.
Navya sees a old man also running behind doctor.
Navya follows with Kabir.
They are shocked to see Khurana's trying to see inside the ICU room.
Navya : Kabir iski matlaab Soha's, we have to prevent others.
Navya and Kabir run to Manan.
Manik: What happened to both of u?
Kabir : Soha... Khurana...
Nandini: What?
Navya : I think Soha's alive?
Manik : What are u mad? Or drunk?
Kabir takes Navya's side : She says the truth if u don't believe us, then see by ur eyes.
Chachi stays here with Rishab while the four others come to ICU.
Manan are speechless to see Khurana here.
A nurse comes out, Kabir catches her hand. Before she shouts he puts his hand on her mouth.
Kabir: What is the name of the patient inside?
Nurse: It's professional secrecy.
Manik loses his patience.
Manik: If u don't say believe me u will regret.
Nandini holds his hand.
Nandini: Sister I promise that no one will denounce you if u cooperate.
Nurse has no choice: She is Soha Khurana.
All are dumb.
Kabir: How can u be judged for something that u didn't do???!!
Manik is lost.
Nandini approaches Khurana.
Nandini: Very good sir, I am happy that u don't lost someone like me.
Khurana panicked : What are u doing here?
He tries to grab her hand but Manik comes.
Manik: How u can file a complaint againt me if ur daughter is alive?
Khurana tries to cover himself : Soha's dead inside the icu it's someone else.
Manik smirks and enters in the room. All follow.
Manik takes scissors beside Soha's bed and puts on her neck.
Khurana : Leave her.
Manik : Tell the whole truth warna ur daughter will be die truly.
Khurana in tears tells the whole story, how Nyonika and him did their plan.
Manik : She is not a woman but I gave u a chance the last day before performance.
Khurana turns himself toward Nandini : It's all because of u, if u did all my instructions to go away from Manik. Nothing would have happened.
Nandini sees Manik : U are right M. Khurana if I left I would not lost my Manik.
Manik to doctor : How u can give to him a rapport like what Soha's die?
Doctor sees the ground.
Manik lost his temper: All play a drama between Fab 5 and Nandini. All will pay the consequences. Khurana call immediately Nyonika but don't stay about us.

After some time Nyonika enters in the ICU.
Nyonika : Manik what are u doing here?
Manik : Tell first.
Nyonika tries to cover herself : I come here for checkup.
Kabir : Don't lie ur associate told the whole truth.
Manik : So now all listen me clearly. Khurana call the inspector and take back ur complaint. Nyonika u will give back Nandini her seat in college.
Kabir takes out his phone.
Kabir: I recorded everything Manik.
Manik : So if in ten minutes all the tasks are not completed. I will send this record to the press.
Khurana and Nyonika do their task.
Manik takes the scissors : Nyonika how u can did that? U are so shameless. Believe me I will return all the pain.
Manik quits the room. Nandini, Kabir and Navya follow him.
Chachi : Where were you?
Nandini sees Rishab's opening his eyes. He does some gestures.
Chachi: What he needs?
Nandini : U chachi
Chachi cries and embraces him : Don't worry Rishab u will stay with me. U will not go for Mangalore. Nandini if u want u can go alone.
Nandini hugs them.
Manik is shocked to learn that Nandini was ready to leave because of his words.
Chachi: Thank u boys.
Kabir: It's ok chachi. Manik it's better to go now.
Manik sees Nandini.
Nandini POV : U are not ready to forgive me. I never thought that our love is so weak.
Manik and Kabir quit.
She receives a mail from Pandit ji for a practice in his house.
She answers: I am coming.
Nandini asks Navya : Can u stay here please? I have a practice.
Navya: Likin it's too late. I don't think it's a good idea.
Nandini doesn't listen her and steps out from the hospital.
Navya sends this information to Kabir but Kabir's phone it's Manik's hand.
Manik reads the message and is shocked.
Manik with Kabir traces Nandini's phone.

Nandini enters in Pandit's house.
Pandit : Come Nandini.
Nandini's shocked to see Pandit with alcohol.
Nandini: Can we start the practice?
Pandit: Why u are so in a hurry?
He approaches her and puts his hand on her shoulder.
Nandini afraid : What are u doing sir?
Pandit : Why u can just do with Manik not with me? I want you just for a night.
Nandini slaps him.
Nandini: U are my guru issliye without thinking twice I came here. But u are a coward.
She tries to slap him again but he holds her hand and carry her until his bed.
Pandit: If I have u I will accomplish my desire and more I will have my revenge against Manik.
Nandini panic: Please let me go.
Pandit removes his shirt.
Manik and Kabir enter.
Manik beats Pandit while Kabir comes to nandini and comfort her.
Pandit : What both of u are doing here?
Manik : Why we disturb you?
He clobbers him more.
Nandini: We have to stop him.
Kabir tries to stop him but he pushes Kabir.
Nandini holds his hand : Stop he is unconscious.
Manik: No way Nandini how he can touch you? I will kill him today.
Nandini: Ok kill him after go to the jail.
Manik leaves him.
Manik puts his hand on her cheek.
Nandini shoves his hand : Manik u can't control ur anger see his situation. So when the last time magistrate asked him about Soha, I said the truth that I was unconscious. For a second I had a doubt when I remembered ur interaction with Harshad.
Manik tries to hold her again.
Nandini: What did u said last time, I can die for u but can't kill someone. So what did u said five minutes before? U are not capable to control urself. U said I don't trust u hai naa Manik. I trust u always issliye when u said u play with my feelings for Musicana, I trusted u. And u know I was right the night of hospital, we are not mean to be together. Thank u Ayyappa to prove my words. So after now Manik I will be concentrate in my life. I hope that we will stay away from each other. It's better for everyone. Kabir call an ambulance for him and accompagn me to the hospital.
Manik can't believe his ears. He stays here like a statue while Nandini goes outside and wait for Kabir.

Part 3

Kabir leaves Nandini to the hospital.
Kabir: Ek minute Nandini, I know that u are hurt, but it's not a good decision to keep u away for Manik.
Kabir : No Kabir, I am right just if we think two minutes it's clearly proved that this relation is not good. One time it's me and next it's him he is very hurt and that the other tries to patch up. I am stubborn and he has a big ego, so we can be together. And please Kabir doesn't try to patch up us. It's better for everyone.
Kabir smiles to her while she steps to the hospital.

Kabir calls Navya and says that he is waiting for her outside.
Navya comes to Kabir : Why she seems upset but relieve?
Kabir tells her the whole story.
Navya is shocked : But she doesn't say about it.
Kabir : She wants to turn chapter with Manik and she prevents me to not interfere in their matters
Navya : So what will u do now?
Kabir kaughs : How course we will interfere and u will help me!
Navya : Me? Nai baba nai. She will kill me.
Kabir : Yes like that I will have the flat just for me.
Navya crushes his feet: If I die who will cook?
Kabir : I can live without your dishes. Now can we go home
They go to their flat.

Manik comes fast to the college. He sees Nandini going to the library. He follows her.
Nandini tries to take the veenai but can't.
"Excuse me can I help u?" Nandini is about to fall of scale when the guy carries her.
Nandini : Can u put me down?
Guy : Sorry sorry.
He tends the veenai to her.
Nandini without looking him : Thanks
Guy : Wait a minute, its u who talk last time to this hulk.
Nandini glares him.
Guy : I mean Manik, he is so evil.
Nandini : Mind ur tongue, it's not because u help me that I can bear ur words on him. He did a mistake but it's past. Now if u can move.
Nandini leaves from here.
Guy : Strange he pushes her last time byt she defends. Anyway she is very cute and innocent.
Manik hears his sentences. Even if he is angry, he is happy kyu ki she defends him.
Manik : I will win u back at any cost mere shining star.

Nandini is shocked to see Pandit here.
Pandit : I am sorry Nandini for the last time, I was drunk mudje mafkardo.
Nandini steps out. Pandit stops her.
Nandini : Pls let me go.
Pandit : I did a big mistake but please don't spoil ur career for it. In two days we have to prepare for the fusion concert with this new student.
Nandini : tum yah aa? U are a real classical musician.
Guy : Haan why? It's not because I am hot that I can't play classical instruments.
He enters in the room and plays the veenai really good.
Guy : So miss how is my music.
Nandini is dumb.

Nandini receives a call from Navya.
Nandini : Haan bolo Navya.
Navya : Come fast to the corridor, I am in pain.
Nandini panicked : I will be here in one minute.
She leaves the class in a hurry.
Nandini finds Navya squats she holds her back and march away for the infirmary.
Manik and Kabir were also here, doctor, bandage his hand.
Kabir : Madhubala ji app yah aa?
Nandini : Doctor she has a lot of pain.
Doctor Make her lays on the bed. I am soon finish with Manik.
Nandini follows his instruction.
Nandini : Bring me pasta.
Nandini : What!! It's 9 am and u want pasta.
Navya : Not me but my baby.
Navya touches her belly.
Nandini : Okay give me two minutes.
Nandini runs to the cafeteria.
Navya wiks to Manik. He leaves the place.
Manik catches Nandini's hand.
He drags her to a room.
Nandini furious : Leave me Monster Manik.
Manik : No way my shining star.
She was happy to her pick name by his voice.
Manik approaches his lips toward her.
Manik: U are dreaming about me while I am in front of u?
Nandini recovers her sense: I told u naa it's over Manik so why u come again to me.
He holds her waist and she crushes on chest.
Manik : But I can't over u, never and ever.
She pushes him : U don't say this last week.
Manik: I am sorry. Please forgive ur monster.
Nandini : No way Manik. Without u, I am happy.
Manik holds her chin. They look each other.
Nandini I promise that before Holi I will win u back. Have u dare to accept my challenge? If u won I will never cross ur path again. It's ur Monster Manik promise.
He leaves her and tends his hand. She shakes his hand.
Nandini : Ok
He turns her hand and kisses it.
She quits the room for canteen.

To be continued? Tell naa. 😳
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