MaNan FF ::I'll love you...hamesha:: part 3 pg4(21/02) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice begining
cont asap and pm plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratulations for a new story..
Nandu went back forever..
I hope Cabir tells Manik before it's too late..
Continue Soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start
would love to read more
so do continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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6 months later.

She was gone never to come back to him. When he came to know his world turned up side down. As soon as Cabir came to know Nandini went to US he told Manik but before Manik could reach she had gone.
He was back to being Monster Manik,but when he was alone he would let his emotions flow.


You,do yoy remember me
Like I remember you
Do you spend your life
Going back in your mind to that time.
Cauz I,I walk the streets alone
And I hate being on my own
And everyone can see that i really fell
And im going through hell
Thinking about you with somebody else.

He sang his heart out and Cabir stood at the door looking at him helplessly. Cabir blamed himself several times thinking if he had told Manik that Nandini had gone to Mangalore.Today they would have been together.

Somebody wants you
Somebody needs you
Somebody dreams about every single night
Somebody cant breath,without you its lonely
Somebody hopes that one you'll see
That somebody's me
That somebody's me.


A lone tear trickled down Manik's cheek.
" pls come back..Nandini" He cried out.

"Sorry Manik its all my fault.." Cabir said.
Manik wiped his tears and looked at Cabir.Cabir hugged him.
"Sorry Manik...only of I had not promised Nandini.."He said.
"Its ok Cabir.its not you fault it was all my fault. I didn't even try to understand her and maybe this is what i deserve." He said breaking the hug.
"Par...Manik.."
"No Cabir. When she was with me...I would always hurt her but she understood me and didn't complain..but me...huh..I have lost her forever...she deserves someone way better than ne..who would keep her happy..hamesha..but I'll love her...Hamesha."Manik took his guitar and left.
Cabir stood there thinking about how in 6 months everything was changed.

5 years later..
Alya and Dhurv were together and Fab3 well aware of it. Abhi was cured and was with Mukti. Cabir had become the most popluar RJ.
Fab4 were happy though they would be the happiest if Manik had moved on.
He remained the same.
Fab5 were at Maniks house chit chatting.
Cabir got a call and it was Navya.
"Navya?"he questioned himslef.
He excussed himslef and picked up the call.
"Cabir..Navya here.."
"Madhubala...how are you..where have you been these days?"
"Leave all that...I just got a call from Nandini.." She said.
"NANDINI...?"He almost screamed.
"Haan Nandini..she's back to a India..shes in Mangalore and day after She'll come to Mumbai to meet me so if you could bring Manik..."
"Oh my god...Navya...I'll bring him...dont worry." Cabir said all happy.
He felt someone standing back of him
He turned back to see Manik.
"Why are you so happy...cabir?" he asked
"Manik...I'm so happy.."Cabir said and went away and Manik stood there confused.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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its going great so far 👏
cant wait to read your next update! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh...so sweet...beautiful part...can't wait ...to read next part...pls pls continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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fab update
loved it
very nicely written
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Navya and Cabir wanted this day to be perfect. They wanted Manik and Nandini to sort all the problems.They wanted to see Mnaik and Nandini to smile.
"Navya..everything is ready na?",Cabir asked.
"Haan..Cabir..Maatarani ke kripa se sab theek ho jayega. Nandini will be here soon Manik and you leave now."Navya said.
"Ok...but i haven't told Manik about Nandini..i just told him i wanted to meet you and he's just come along l."
"cabir,once he sees Nandini he'll forget everything... Just come fast.Ok hum rakte hai.Bye."
Navya cut the call to turn back and see Nandini.Her eyes red and a tear trickling down her cheek.
"Woh...Nandini.."
"Meine tumse kaha tha na...i told na..not to tell him... With lot of difficulty I'm trying to forget him..and you Navya..??"Nandini almost screamed out.
"Cabir and me just wanted to...Nandini we just want to see you both happy and we know you love each other a lot.'Navya tried making Nandini understand.
"Love?huh?"he said with a fake smile.
"I was an idiot..pyaar,stars,firefliea inn sab mein believe karti thi,but now i realized all this happens only in fairy tales where you have a happily ever after but my life isnt a fairy tale.."
Nandini said almost breaking down.
Before Navya could speak she started to speak again
"And Navya...i have moved on in life..and i guess even Manik must have moved on..."
"Nandini...thumare liye move on ka matlab kya hai? Putting on a fake smile and trying to prove to the world that you are alright?huh? And Manik...he's is in the same state when you left him almost 6 years back."Navya said angrily.
"I left him?seriously Navya? I tried talking to him and tried to make.him understand but he didn't when want to see my face.
Even destiny doesn't want us together... We aren't meant to be..qe always hurt each other being together...and i can't see him going through hell because of me..."

"So Nandini..you think he is happy without you? You think he's enjoying life?"Cabir siad standing near the door.

*****
Hey guys..
Not able to send PMs...so.pls bear with me.



Edited by ToralRas - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely update
loved it
very nicely written
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsome update...loved it...pls continue soon...yaar...eagerly waiting for manan scenes...

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