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AAVANI

@vani86

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Posted: 10 years ago

#211

fabulous update...with equally painful and beautiful emotions...
would love to read more...pls continue as soon as possible..
take care...

Edited by aavani - 10 years ago

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Barbiebarbie11

@Barbiebarbie11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: Natashaaa

jyada bol mat bhut bust rehti h aaj kal tym nhi h na mujhse bat krne ka

i think its u ,who is busy nowadays n thats y u didnt even replied to my p.m

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Natashaaaaa

@Natashaaaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: Ainahbarbie
i think its u ,who is busy nowadays n thats y u didnt even replied to my p.m

which pm be
maine har pm ka ryply kia

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1030053

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Posted: 10 years ago

#214

U r the writer and it is ur choice for the plot..

It is just what i feel is ki MaNan don't fit in this story!

It is toi melodramatic and cliched

I mean seriously Nyonika can never influence Manik's opinion and Manik can never distrust Nandini

The day i started reading this os i find mystery and read all updates just to know ki what happened with them...but seriously i am not pointing that the story is bad but i just can't connect MaNan with it ..!

This story what i feel is no different from all the daily soap over dramatic sagas which i find cheesy..!

No offences!

Just putting my thoughts..!

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Barbiebarbie11

@Barbiebarbie11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: Natashaaa

which pm be
maine har pm ka ryply kia

chk out my last pm ,khud pata chalega

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Barbiebarbie11

@Barbiebarbie11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: MaNanFF
U r the writer and it is ur choice for the plot..
It is just what i feel is ki MaNan don't fit in this story!
It is toi melodramatic and cliched
I mean seriously Nyonika can never influence Manik's opinion and Manik can never distrust Nandini
The day i started reading this os i find mystery and read all updates just to know ki what happened with them...but seriously i am not pointing that the story is bad but i just can't connect MaNan with it ..!
This story what i feel is no different from all the daily soap over dramatic sagas which i find cheesy..!
No offences!
Just putting my thoughts..!

well i respects ur thoughts
but how can u judge my story ? Wen i hav not even revealed their past conflict
i have not revealed their past yet,that was jus a part after thr conflict

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1030053

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Posted: 10 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: Ainahbarbie
well i respects ur thoughts
but how can u judge my story ? Wen i hav not even revealed their past conflict
i have not revealed their past yet,that was jus a part after thr conflict

Whatever is their past bit through ur writing one can easily get that there was a conflict between them becoz Manik distrusted Nandini and accused of betraying him and he even thought that Nandini loves someone else? Like really?..whatever may be the reason but ur story's Manik did that and Manik can never ever do that...!

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Barbiebarbie11

@Barbiebarbie11

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: MaNanFF

Whatever is their past bit through ur writing one can easily get that there was a conflict between them becoz Manik distrusted Nandini and accused of betraying him and he even thought that Nandini loves someone else? Like really?..whatever may be the reason but ur story's Manik did that and Manik can never ever do that...!

let the time decide