Manik and Nandini The Fire Between Us!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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It flickered between them, that very instant when her tiny fists made music with his smirking face.

The flame, it kindled ever so lightly, ever so strongly, ever so instantaneously whenever they crossed paths. And crossed paths they did.

The fire that lay in wait, that lay awaiting acknowledgement from either of then sparked again in a cold dingy storeroom bereft of warmth.

She started the fire, he fanned the flames and then there was no looking back for either of them.No looking back.

He tried to douse it out many times but to no avail.It lay in wait, in darkness and in light with a smouldering fiery breath.

The flames they rise high in a raging intensity the night before Musicana only to overwhelm him and her in a ring of sacrificial fire.

But some fires they can't be put out, it rages, it chases, the slivers of a slow seducing flame, tantalising, breath-taking, awe-inspiring.

Some fires are just meant to blaze. Just blaze through the night.

Apologies in advance for the formatting, typing from the phone.
And thank you if you are reading this self indulgent piece of writing.
I was meant to write on fire as a metaphor but it had a life and voice of its own.

Edited by AnomanderRake - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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CC this is radiant elegance.. shimmering with warmth and love and yet smouldering with passion and poetry.. Nicely done😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this is very beautiful. their feelings defined well with fire as a metaphor.
that you got right, their feelings, their paths leading to and leading away from each other, their touch, their eye-locks, their pulling and pushing, ALL FIERY!!!!

Well writtien ...
thank you
Kashish
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow beautifully written👏


Just finished watching the epi and the precap scene as he literally walked over the flames was playing in my mind as I read this lovely post...you've worded it so beautifully.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful. Got goosebumps reading it. So perfect so..so...so.. Loss for words.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written.
A flame in the beginning turning into all consuming, unquenchable blaze.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written!
The flicker gradually turned into blazing fire both literally as well as in terms of their feelings 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written.. the smoldering flame just ignited into a blaze full of passion
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Posted: 10 years ago
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My first reaction when I read 'blaze' was...Harlequin. 😛 Le sigh. All my hopes just got doused in PaNi.
No but seriously, this was a great way of explaining that metaphor, Adhi. Fire, light - these have been constants in the MaNan story since the beginning, and the progression has been shown beautifully. A hero rescuing his girl from a fire is nothing new- has been done to death across all mediums. But it's the hows and the whys and the story behind this sequence which elevates MaNan to a different level altogether- gives us the 'feels' as we say it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is for you 🤗 , for making this meaningful post.
Forum needs these kind of posts badly 😳
She ignited fire to clear the darkness, at that time.Today he realized his true love for her,
for the first time in presence of same fire.what a beautiful metaphor used by cvs, brilliant. 👏
Edited by sadhanager. - 10 years ago

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