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First of I want to thank all of your replies! Thank you it means a lot especially since it's my first two shot. I may not reply to every single one but thank you for liking it. This is the last part so I hope you enjoy it!


Knuckles were vigorously banging on the door. The close proximity and intimicy me and Parth shared was all erased now.

" Niti?!! Are you in there??"Shashanked demanded but very softy
" uhh yes I'm yes I-I wil be there " my voice shook as I struggled to enunciate every word. My words all jumbled up and stuttered. What just happened? My heart my mind couldn't grasp this all at once. Aldrenaline soon catched up. Parth stared at my flushed face and did not utter a word. We both stood like this for momments. Silence could be captured.
" Niti speak. Say something. Clearly this was meant to be happening. You and I " Parth towering over me started walking a few steps close. You and I. His eyes searched for my answer as he said you and I. Oh how I wanted to hug him but nothing was ever this easy. Silence was shared between us for a few momments
" oh parth what do you think? You can just flick me on and off like a light switch me? Adorn me today and throw me the way the next? I have had enough parth. Nothing can happen between us. Ever" my voice stern as ever but somehow I could feel the tears streaming down and ghushing out any second. My heart felt torn out by wolves and ready to be used for ones benefit. I didn't dare to look Parth in the eye whilst saying this. I couldn't.
" Niti just hear me out for once I - " Parth's sentence was abruptly cut and never had a chance to finish.
" You know what I don't care. Let's get this scene over with!" I swayed my hands and grabed a couple of tissues just in case my eyes appeared hurt of any sort. Just like that I slammed the door and exit out whilst my heart never left.


" OKAY! shot 1 here we go"Shashank yelled through the mic.
My scene wasn't going to be perfect. I would have to manage not collapse while performing the scene. I would have to avoid meeting Parth's eyes.
" Nandini. Okay I have a plan..." Parth was playing his character each words said peiercing through my soul.

During shoots were the worst momments of my life. I still remained in awe about how I could pull myself through during the whole day.
" okay pack up guys! Niti great job! And listen sweety today was hectic and yes parth is going to intimidate you but listen don't risk the fame you have achieved. You have come so far and just please don't. Just do whatever you can to sort whatever issues you and parth are having. Okay?" Shashanks eyes full of hope and reassurance. I wanted to slap and slap until he would shut up. Does everything revolve around Parth? I nodded my head and carried the big tense in my shoulders.
" Hey Niti. You must be tired. Let's catch up and and get coffee? What's say?" Zain quietly asked and eyes big as ever.
" I'm sorry zain. I can't I'm feeling so tired and sleepy. But maybe next time" I gave him reassurance and headed off to the parking lot. My thoughts flooded around Parth numerous times. I cursed and depised myself for being like this. I felt uneasy around the dull space of my car and went to reach my keys. Unaware of the shadow behind me strong firm bands gripped the back of my hips. Oh no. " You really think I will let you go away like this.never" Parth's low raspy voice sent chills through my spines as his lips were close to my ears. I wanted to turn back and hit his guts with all the force in the world. Unexpectedly I turned and saw those eyes. Those nutmeg beautiful eyes. Parth's eyes continuously forwarding back to my lips then eyes. I gave up.
" what do you want?" I asked softly aware our lips were nearly touching. Parth have his grips up and went down on his knee. Oh no.
" Niti taylor. I love you. I love you. I love you. No world can measure the amount of love I have for you. Your the sun when it rains. Your the light in the dark. You complete me in every way possible. I'm such a dork a asshole everything in the dictionary for acting like a pretentious prick.But I want you to know I will always be your prick. Please accept me as your beloved please. I need you" Parth stood and stood on his knees trying to gain any reaction. I watched in awe and tried to comprehend what was happening but my mind jumbled. I delayed no further and let my heart be the lead. Parth stood up my small figure and took couple of inches towards me. I simply let loose and dug into his hair and our lips collided and took lead. I tasted all of this wants and hunger. I was against the car and soon on top and intertwined my legs with his. Our lips brushed ever so delicately and took charge. This moment was the moment nothing can be replaced with. I knew Parth was mines and only mines.


Thank you guys for reading. This is the last part and I worked hard and once again thanks. Love you guys lol!!'-'-'-
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ScaryAngel thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Read both the parts in one go great job dear. Loved your style of writing.
Keep writing more :)
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God is it hot in here?you are a awesome writer.i love your writing style.its one of a kind.its beautiful.do write more and more.
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Originally posted by: bloodfortears

God is it hot in here?you are a awesome writer.i love your writing style.its one of a kind.its beautiful.do write more and more.


Thank you soo much! Especially for taking the time to comment on my work. Thanks for the compliments and I will soon.😆
Posted: 10 years ago
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DT NOTE:

As much as we appreciate you bringing your imagination into words making a wonderful story for our members to read. Please refrain from using actual persons in your stories. Fan fiction is basically only reel character in a show not actual person that exist real life.
If such stories continue then those threads will be closed.

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