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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow.. It ws very beautiful.. Loved it.. U r showing manan tlking.. Tht gud.. Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res...
Me nt d first one today... :(

Will unres soon... :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update...manan scenes was awsome...this kind of trust is necessary in relationships...
pls continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manan_flab

Res...

Me nt d first one today... :(

Will unres soon... :)


Finally i voted fr d first time today.. n now here i m to reply on dis beautiful update...

To start wid do i have to say all dat again... dat i really love uh n ur story...

Well koi nai i will say it again... being a LU writer i know how it feels when someone praises ur work.. dats y i always try to give some long feedback everytime since its ur first attempt...

So now coming to d update...

I so loved d idea of dat dinner thingy wid fab5 n yaa my sherni is rocking in each update d way she teasef dat bloody karam jali i just loved dat... n den those manan moments... dey r so simple yet so beautiful... n again i cud imagine all dat... aww my balma has gt tears in his eyes... uh made him cry but still i love uh fr doing so cz he just have to do it... d things he was holding back it has to come out some day... n finally he did it... bursted out everything n dat too just infront of her...

Dese two are d new definition of love fr me.. n u r showing dat in such a beautiful way...

N hey uh made cabira my cupid once again... i so love mananbir n i want more of dem now...😳

Carry on wid it... n edit soon yaar m always waiting fr dem...

Love ya n love ur wrk gal... 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
both updates were amazing loveed them
bs ab tu mila du unko ache sa and soha ka poha bhe bna du can't wait for it 😉😉

keep it up 👏

update soon 😉

thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manan_flab


Finally i voted fr d first time today.. n now here i m to reply on dis beautiful update...

To start wid do i have to say all dat again... dat i really love uh n ur story...

Well koi nai i will say it again... being a LU writer i know how it feels when someone praises ur work.. dats y i always try to give some long feedback everytime since its ur first attempt...

So now coming to d update...

I so loved d idea of dat dinner thingy wid fab5 n yaa my sherni is rocking in each update d way she teasef dat bloody karam jali i just loved dat... n den those manan moments... dey r so simple yet so beautiful... n again i cud imagine all dat... aww my balma has gt tears in his eyes... uh made him cry but still i love uh fr doing so cz he just have to do it... d things he was holding back it has to come out some day... n finally he did it... bursted out everything n dat too just infront of her...

Dese two are d new definition of love fr me.. n u r showing dat in such a beautiful way...

N hey uh made cabira my cupid once again... i so love mananbir n i want more of dem now...😳

Carry on wid it... n edit soon yaar m always waiting fr dem...

Love ya n love ur wrk gal... 😳


ur the sweetest person ever. love u so much for giving me an awesome feedback every time. its ok even though u r nit first this time u r always special to me coz u always leave an awesome feed back and u always support me. lots of love from richie 😊🤗❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: richarius


ur the sweetest person ever. love u so much for giving me an awesome feedback every time. its ok even though u r nit first this time u r always special to me coz u always leave an awesome feed back and u always support me. lots of love from richie 😊🤗❤️


haye allah inni tareef sunne ki aadat ni hai meko... ☺️

n ya i will always be der...
but for now where is my next update... 😈
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manan_flab


haye allah inni tareef sunne ki aadat ni hai meko... ☺️

n ya i will always be der...
but for now where is my next update... 😈


hehehe will update it soon before i go to bed
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update!!!
loved it..

Pls continue soon ..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Here is the next part guys. Hope u like it

Now it's evening time as it's time to go to the restaurant. So everyone was waiting for Nandini downstairs and Nandini came down wearing a gorgeous dress Manik just kept staring at her and Chudail got so jealous so she's like Manik how do I look? Manik is u look ok. And Nandini and Cabir just scoffed.

They go to the restaurant and as per plan Nandini sits next to one side of Manik and Cabir sits on the other side Soha was so upset due to this but she couldn't do anything. So everyone just started to enjoy them selves. Since Nandini booked the VIP area so it's only fab5 Nandini and soha. So dhrulya and Mukti are on one side talking while Cabir and Manik is with Nandini. And chudail is thinking a way to get Manik to her selves. More to the fact she just wanted Manik to get away from Nandini. So she takes a fork and stabs her hand, which was noticed by Cabir and Nandini. She's like Manik I'm so hurt. Pls take me home. And Nandini knows it's her stupid plan so she's like of course Soha. U should go home and she called her drivers and asked them to take Soha home. She like no it's ok Nandini ill stay here. And Nandini is like. No soha. Ur a guest and ur hurt and Pls do home. Nandini literally forced her to get into the car.

Finally everyone was so relieved that Soha left. After that Dhrulya was busy while Cabir gave company to Mukti. And it's nearly 11:55. 5 more minutes till Manik's birthday. However Manik told them last year that he doesn't want to celebrate his Birthday coz of Nandini but no one knew the reasons except Cabir Since everyone was busy Nandini asks Manik to come with her. She takes her to a place where it's perfect for stargazing and it was beautifully decorated. But nearly all the lights are off. And even Manik forgot his own birthday. Manik was like Nandini where r u and why did u bring me here. And when the clock strikes 12 Nandini turned on the lights. And it said happy birthday Manik and it looked so pretty. Manik was so shocked that she remembered his birthday and his love for stars. And Nandini brought a cake and made him cut it. He feed the cake to Nandini and got overwhelmed by everything. He's like Nandini thank u so much for everything. Since u did everything for me I guess I owe u the explanation on why I broke up with u. The secret is killing me. I just want to be honest abt everything. As I don't want to loose u. Manik told her everything. Coz of the video that he had to break up. And tells her how she blackmailed him. He's like I wanted to tell u as I soon I as get the video from her. Coz otherwise you'll be broken. And as soon I got the video I came to meet u and was going to tell u everything but sadly all u were gone

Nandini do u know what happened after u left. I lost everything. The only I ever wanted in my life. The only thing that made me happy. That made me felt I belong somewhere. That feeling that someone loves me. That my happiness matters to someone more than his or her own happiness. U know Nandini u were that person. The one who took my darkness away. But after u left the darkness came back and consumed me. I couldn't get out o that coz my star wasn't there to me take me out of it or to shine for me. I lost interest in everything. Without u Nandini Manik doesn't exist. Coz I need to see u everyday. Without seeing Ur face I can't function Nandini. Pls forgive me. I didn't mean to hurt u like that. All I wanted u to be happy so I hid it from u. But that's the thing that cost me and made me loose u. Nandini is like Manik just shush. I understand Manik and she was in tears. She hugged him so tightly and Manik kissed her forehead. They just stared at the stars for some time and they all left the restaurant.

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Edited by richarius - 10 years ago

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