OS: The other me..(Part 1 updated)

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dushturain

@dushturain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Loved it Forever19!! your writing is beautiful, i can feel their excitement and all the buzz going on!!

waiting for next part!

though i dont know where this story is going i mean a is there a Nandini in this story?? even if she is, Manik will be unlikely to discuss her in a chat show!!

and is this story only based on chat show?? or we will get to know outside it as well??

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Aparajita

@apardh_ba

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Wonderful first part. Great lines, love all of their dialo. Esp dhruv's line and how they all hs taken his side. Do cont soon. keep writing

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Forever19

@Forever19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: navi04vet
Is Nandu and manik together in this story?? Or is it after he broke up with her on musicana

The story is set in future..and I can't divulge story details but you won't be dissappointed..:)

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Forever19

@Forever19

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: dushturain
Loved it Forever19!! your writing is beautiful, i can feel their excitement and all the buzz going on!!
waiting for next part!

though i dont know where this story is going i mean a is there a Nandini in this story?? even if she is, Manik will be unlikely to discuss her in a chat show!!

and is this story only based on chat show?? or we will get to know outside it as well??

call me Ann brishty..:)..manik is incomplete without Nandini...haina?

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Ilvmanan

@Ilvmanan

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Wonderful 👏

Update soon ... 😊

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piyu008

@piyu008

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

loved d update as well as idea ..cont. soon👏

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shravya

@shravya.kr

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Very very nicely written...awesome u write😊😊

Thanks for the pm

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BornInFire

@BornInFire

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Nice concept. Update soon! 😃 👏

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SehrMemon

@sehrmemon

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

sounds good 😉 continue soon and possible PM me 😊

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

What a wonderful concept... i love this idea- thanks so much for the PM!

Love the FAB5 unity and answers and I am really interested to see where you are going to take this story.

Terrific job, as always- can't wait for the next part!😊

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