Manan OS 'Tune jo na kaha' Part 5 on pg 15 feb 6th - Page 9

Originally posted by: babita_14388

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Originally posted by: appy111

Hey are u NT goin to update dis??!!

will b updating dear...bt itz nt yet ready..

Originally posted by: prati_25

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Manan OS "Tune jo na kaha" Part 4:

Manik was about to enter the audi just then he realized that they were guests who were listening to her..in fact there was some selection going on...so manik silently entered without nandu noticing him and sat at the corner in dark...All the while he was just feeling guilty and restless listening to her and seeing the hurt in her eyes...After the song ended more than nandu manik was happy listening to the accolades given by the mentors...nandu just gave a faint smile and replied saying "thnq" and left towards backstage... Manik tried following her but missed cause of the rush there for the audition..

Backstage nandu was greeted by a lady named Mrs.Dixit she was one of the mentors..infact the classical singing maestro's wife.

Mrs.dixit: hello pretty ...how u doin...ur song took me all the way back to my college days...20yrs back...u were too good..i could feel the every emotion u put in while singing..and it was because u were actually singing that reminiscing somebody...um...someone very close to heart and too special( she had a big smile..while saying this)

Nandini: thnq mam for the compliments...woh actually mam..

Mrs. Dixit: lets sit and talk nandini...how about we go to cafeteria ..itz my treat for this pretty awesome girl..

Nandini: Thnq mam..(she was happy abt the invite...nd then both left for cafeteria...Manik kept looking around but he couldn't find her...Just then he got a call from nyonika saying she wants him to sign few papers...initially manik refused but she gave ultimatum to meet her immediately so he just had to go)

At Cafeteria:

Mrs Dixit: So tell me abt urself nandini...from which place u are and ur family

( Before that Mrs . Dixit mentioned abt her college days..nd her how life in mumbai was and her intial days struggle...listening to that nandu slowly opened up..she told her about her parents...rishab..chacha..chachi..Nd gradually she got with flow nd started talking about her life in space how it started...navya, harshad, fab 5 and her tiffs with them and esp with monster manik...)

Mrs Dixit: So this guy..manik...monster manik..seems like he is such a ( she was actually provoking a reaction frm nandini..and unsurprisingly nandu did)

Nandini : No mam who waisa ni hai..i mean he just wanted to scare ppl away from him by showing his monster side..but he is...he is not what he appears to b..(then the rest was all about manik which she told to her..like how much his friends mean to him..to what extent he goes for the ppl he cares...and the selflessness he shows..how he his least bothered about his well being...and how he stands up for her least bothering abt others)

Mrs.Dixit : So...So..beauty and the beast...(she looked at nandu with a big grin on her face)...or shall I say lion fell in love with a lamb...(Nandini was embarrassed and her cheeks turn red as she was blushing and was trying to look away ) Soo that song was for this monster manik..haan hai na?

Nandini: woh... mam..(in a low voice)

Mrs.Dixit: look nandini...most men r like that they suck at expressing themselves...from ur description of ur monster manik..i believe he tops the list..(she laughed out loud)...aise logo k actions speak for them.. I don't knw wat happened between u both but itna kehna chahti hoon kay as long as u both cant imagine ur lives without each other then there is nothing to fret about nandini...so think about it...

Nandu was happy and relieved after her meet with Mrs.Dixit and finally they bid goodbyes to each other..and nandu left for her home.

On way to home nandu was recalling all her moments with manik..how he stood up for her in front of khuranas..was ready to throw away the album offer..nd during navya's issue how he made sure guyz present there were in their limits..and how he risks his life for her etc...

Nandini self talk(at home evening time holding his jacket) : Mam was right...lekin phir bi usne aisa kyu kaha bakhi sab irrelevant hai.. ni..ni..i knw manik more than he knws himself...may b I over reacted yesterday...yeah rishab ka attack bi ussi din hua tha..soo..i just couldn't think straight...

Just then door bell rang...chachi opened the door and called nandu

Chachi: Nandu dekh kaun aya hai...(chachi she was all smiles...) manik beta tum...aajao andar aao..baitho..

Manik entered carrying n number of shopping bags..

Chachi: Manik ye sab kya hai...(just then nandu came down stairs..she was surprised seeing manik and all those bags)

Manik (gave a casual look to nandu..): Ye sab kuch ni chahci..actually hamara album release hone wala hai..so issi khushi mein I want the thank da imp log in my life..

Listening to that chahci who was already a huge manik fan..she was on cloud 9.."kitna sona munda hai.."

Manik: Chachi iss mein rishab k liye hai art books..and sab toys hai jo usk cognitive ability ko improve karenge...aur chahci aap k liye (he handed a bag having few jewellery items) aur chachak liye (he looked around in bags) sorry lagta hai I forgot ..

Chachi (whose happiness had no bounds then ): Manik ye sab ki kya zaroorat hai...nandu k chahcha toh anniversary k din bi gift lana bhool jaate hai...kitna pyara munda hai tu(she said by pulling his cheeks)

Manik was all smiling mischeviously looking at nandu..And nandu was all thinking.."mere liye kuch ni"

Chachi : acha toh tu baith mai tere liye...(she was heading towards kitchen)

Manik : ni chahci...aap pls idar aana..aaj no kitchen work for u..aap bas aram se t.v dekhiye..kyu ki mai already dinner lekar aaya hoo..(and he mentioned the name of top hotel of Mumbai from where he got the dinner..listening to that chahchi was no longer on planet earth!!)

Just then rishab came..he just went to manik and hugged him..manik was way too happy and he sat with him and was making rishab laugh showing him all the things he bought for him...both manik and rishab were like they know each other since ages...manik was pampering him like a baby...

Chachi : rishab ko kisi se aise milte hue maine kabi ni dekha nandu..(chachi too joined them..)

Nandini who was just looking at them with happy tears..with a peaceful smile..(thinking): ye meri duniya hai... (then she glanced at her parents' pic on the wall).. I got everything back...

Just then her phone beeped..it was cabir's msg saying " hey nandu manik got to knw everything...I hope by now u guys have sorted out "

Nandu : acha manik toh mujhe manane k liye aaye hoo...phir toh thodi aur mehnat toh karni padegi...(she thought to herself..with a teasing smile)

To be conitnued...

Do let me knw if u liked it😊

awsome update yaar...i loved Mrs.Dixit...and her conversation with nandu was superb...manik & rishab was also sweet...waiting for manan scenes...so please continue soon ...take care...😊

Awesome.. Continue soon 😛

Originally posted by: aavani

awsome update yaar...i loved Mrs.Dixit...and her conversation with nandu was superb...manik & rishab was also sweet...waiting for manan scenes...so please continue soon ...take care...😊

thnq dear😊...next update will b full of manan...hope i don't disappoint u😛

Originally posted by: manan58

Awesome.. Continue soon 😛

thnq dear...will b updatn soon