MaNan SS - Tu Mera Parchawa (Collab With Texie)DISCONTINUED - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Nice and v interesting update. Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
wonderful update!!
looking forward to read more..😉
pls continue soon...

Thanks for PM:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sankadevimaha

Beautiful update.. I loved t.. especially d first part wen nandu thought abt hr dreams... she shld hav givn him a hint dt she s nt type f d person he s thnkng of.. I hope t gets cleared soon.. becoz t cn affect der relationship alot.. waiting fr der engagement nd shaadi.. 😳

take ur own tym.. becoz exams r important as well.. all the best.. do well.. 😳

Thank u 😃 I am done with my exams so i will continue soon again!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
nice and different... cntue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter four - Oh My God , Who Is She ?


"What ? U r getting married ?" Navya asked in a surprised voice pointing her eyes .

"Yes "

"It has not been even more one month u have come to this city and u r saying that u r getting married ? " Navya questioned again .

"Yes Chacha and Chachi wanted me to marry as the boy and the family is good " came the reply .

"Oh ...so who is guy huh ? Is he handsome ? "

"His name is Manik Malhotra and he ..."but before she could complete the reaction had already come .

"What Manik Malhotra ? Manik Malhorta ? U mean the lead singer of Fab Five ? God ! Nandu I just can not believe what u saying "

"Fab five lead singer ? What ? "

"Yup u know u used say that u love their songs and now u r telling me u r gonna marry their lead singer ! "

"I don believe this Navya ."

"Neither I do , if u marry Manik then maybe I will also get a chance to meet Fab Five and their drummer Cabir ! Omg ! "Navya said dreamily and Nandini smiled she knew how childish Navya was and she had this huge crush on the band fab five 's drummer Cabir .

"Okay okay now I gotta go okay bye bye see u tomorrow in the mall "and saying this Navya cut off leaving Nandini surprised . Fab five , uh huh .

...


Nandini moved towards the window gargling , cleaning her throat so that she could practice well . She looked around the house when her phone rang . She picked it up and a male voice answered from the next side .

"Hey Nandini "

"Hi Manik "she gave the reply .

"U recognise me ? How "

"Manik we just met yesterday and which boy would call me ? I m new here "

"Oh right ! Umm I just wanted to say ...umm actually ask that if u ...u know if u wanted to go on ...go on a date as it also valentine day u know " he finally said .

"What ? "

"I mean we would get to know each other na . What say ? " he asked

"Umm okay "

"So done! I will pick up at eight alright " and saying this he disconnected .

...

"Are u happy now ? "Manik asked a girl who was standing in his bedroom with folded arms .

"Umm not actually but u were okay . " the girl replied and Manik rolled his eyes .

"I asked a girl out on date whom I just met yesterday, what more do u want me to do huh ? " he asked irritated .

"Nothing ! I had not expect more than this from u . "The girl replied .

"Anyways I want the date to be perfect and u dare spoil it Manik ! "The girl continued in a demanding voice .

"God sometimes u get on my nerves "

"That's good , I should be the one to run all your systems "the girl said in a firm tone .

"What did u say ! "

The girl looked at Manik and laughed out as she ran around the room followed by Manik .

"Stop "Manik said as he chased the girl around the room.

"See I can just be like Naunika ! Look how well I acted " the girl said but Manik did not listen and moved towards her and quickly carried her in his arms .

"Okay okay I love u ! And was just joking "The girl said as Manik finally caught her . He quickly hugged her and kissed her forehead.

"I love too "he whispered in her ears and she smiled at him .

"Now bring me down okay " she demanded and Manik obeyed her.

"Have u told her about me ? About us ? " the girl asked .

"Nope " Manik shook his head .

The girl did not say anything just put her head down. Some tears made its down her eyes . Manik went near her and quickly wiped it off .

"No no please , please do not think I did not say her about u because I did not want to or was shy or reluctant to introduce u . I just did not chance okay . I will tell her tonight but please do not cry okay . I love you u get that and I m not afraid or embarrassed to tell that okay " he said and hugged her .
Suddenly she broke the hug and asked in an innocent voice , "what if she had problem with me or with us ? "

"What , why would she have a problem with u and I do not hell care if she has problem with us . I will not leave u okay not for anyone not even for my friends alright . What in world I really care about is you after that my friends and not anyone else . I would give up everything for u " Manik said bringing her into an embrace .

She smiled and asked again , "would u stay with me forever ? "

"Yes forever and forever . In any situation . "

"I love u ! please do not stop loving me like u do now . " the girl said with tears in her eyes .

"I will never stop loving u " Manik said and he was sure of that he would never stop loving her at any cost and he did not care what others said , for him she was his everything .

---TBC---
Hope u all like it and do comment back your opinions . ;)

Love
Sam

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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Finally u updated😃
that was one confusing update...
loved navya nandhu part..
but who is that girl nd plzz no broken nandhu with tears here also coz we have one in the show😆
continue soon nd change the title that u updated part 4 coz others doesnt knw that u updated
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
awsome update...but last part...so confusing...new girl??????
pls continue soon...😊thanks a lot for the pm dear...😊
Edited by aavani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
wow very interesting update with twist in the end.. 😉😉

Pls continue soon..

Thanks for PM:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Finally updated...

curious to know who is ths new girl
so plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Who the hell is this grl??
Awesome update btw😃

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