'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: prati_25

very interesting and superb story..😃😃

Pls continue soon..:)

Thanq
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: apardh_ba

Hope they realize it soon. I ws hoping smthng like this will happen in d show bt its ok. Manik is angry, nxt update tak I hope volcano shant ho jaye.Plz cont and update soon.keep writing

even i m.hoping to happen something like this in the show too...will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: manan58

Arre wah.. This is great.. Continue soon.. Hope soha gts caught.. Serial Mei to abhi time lgega fr her track to end.. At least ss Mei h sahi šŸ˜› šŸ˜‰ 😊

Hmm something interesting coming up
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: mananforever

Please give update with soha getting caught...coz serial main yeh dikhane ke liye janam lag jayenge

Sure u ll get it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: RomComFan

What a lovely update... thanks so much for the PM!

Manik got daily dose of Nandhu and Nandhu got same and they are fine🤣

So glad someone else knows about all the attempts on Nandhu and now they are finally going to try to solve it.

Really looking forward to the next piece.😊


Yes...some interesting things will cum up
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: _keertu_

nice update!!!

ManBir uff kya bromance hai yaaršŸ˜†
now finally there r on a mission to find that person..
awesome continue soon nd thnx for the PM😃

I like this pair...so i m more working on that

glad that u liked it...thanq
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

Kriti it was just awsum
This discusion about nandu atack was most awaited for m n i find it in ur os.. its fantastic...
keep wiritng. N thanks 4 pm



Yes actually i m waiting for CV's to show...but they r dragging it dont know...

so my anxiety is cuming out herešŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: topsy003

Read both the parts in one go..

šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ loved them... very well written

Please do continue soon..

Thanq😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
I have added some of the farm house part here but totally diff

MaNan's fear---part3

Next Morning...Manik gets up early n runs to Nandini's place

Manik rings the bell...Chachi opens the door

Chachi:Arre Manik...Kya baat hai itni subah subah

Manik:Chachi ...woh kal main notes lena bhool gaya tha...Nandini toh aaj clg aayegi nahi toh socha aake lelu

Chachi :Accha theek hai...tum upar jake lelo...shayad Nandini uthi nahi abtak

Manik:But...woh theek toh hai na...

Chachi:Haa theek hai par shayad dawaiyo ki wajah se

Manik goes upstairs n finds Nandini sleeping...he waits for sometime but when she doesn't get up...he takes her cell n do something n leaves

Manik leaves to College n practices in the music room

As soon as others enters...Khurana n his daughter also enters into Music room

Khurana asks for songs ...but Manik replies Songs r not ready

Khurana:Where is ur Manager...it was her responsibility

Manik:She is not well so she myt not b cmg

Khurana :Always ready with the excuses...never mind...My daughter will be ur Manager from today...let ur Ex-Manager take rest

Manik:But Mr.Khurana ...

As Khurana was influenced by His daughter...he orders

Khurana:I want songs in 3 days...so Be ready...will not take excuses anymore...n leaves the room

Ms.Khurana:So guys no need to worry...Let Nandini take rest I know she got hurt yesterday...we ll handle it...N to handle dad we ll have to make it in 3 days...So v ll move to my farm house where u can practice peacefully without any disturbance

Cabir gets a doubt that How she knows that Nandini got hurt when we asked her to leave campus...even Manik was not known...then brushes himself ...Ohh God what am I thinking...Y Ms.Khurana will do that

Mukti,Alya n Dhruv agrees...but Manik n Cabir looks at eachother n thinks abt Nandini n the incidents...n agrees with a question mark on their faces

Cabir excuses himself from the room n calls Manik to cum out

Ms.Khurana:K then...i ll move first n make the arrangements...i ll text u the address

Fab3 :Fine ...

Cabir:Yaar Manik ye toh badi gadbad hogayi...ab kya kare

Manik:I know Cabir...to hell with Khurana yaar...

Cabir:Manik...Tell Nandini to stay at home 3 days

Manik:S ...I asked her to stay today but I ll ask her to stay 2 more days till v cum back

Cabir:Cool...then I ll get our bags...n leaves

Manik tries Calling Nandini but she doesn't pick the call...Manik thinks she myt b sleeping yet

As soon as Manik n others leave the college...Nandini enters the college

Nandini reaches music room n finds no one...:These ppl I tell u...main khud late hogayi aur ye mujhse bhi late ...kaise karenge complete ye album

Nandini takes out her cell to Call Manik n finds that she has missed calls from Manik itself...

Nandini:Ohh Ayyappa...Manik called me so many times n I dint even realize...now he ll b very angry

Nandini calls Manik...

Manik stops the car n excuses himself as soon as he gets a call from Nandini...n moves a bit away from the car

Manik:Hello...

Nandini:Sorry ...sorry Manik...phone was on silent mode that's y cudn't take ur call...

Manik:I know...its k

Nandini:U know...how

Manik:I came in the mrng to meet u but u were sleeping so I kept the phn on silent mode...

Nandini:K...but where r u ppl ...i m searching for u ppl...u need to practice at this time

Manik:What...i asked u stay at home right...what r u doing at the clg

Nandini:Manik I m fine...

Manik:No...u leave the clg right now n go straight to home...n no need to cum for 2 more days...dont even step out of the house

Nandini:But Y Manik...

Manik:Listen plz do what I say...i ll explain ones I cum back

Nandini:Cum back...where u went

Manik:That Khurana has cum n asked to submit songs in 3 days...so we had to leave to Soha's farm house in hurry...rest I ll explain later

Nandini:K...but take care

Manik:Listen I ll have to cut the call varna inke sawaal shuru hojayenge...Bye ...i ll call u later but plz go home first

Nandini:K...bye

Manik gets back to car n starts driving

Mukti:Manik who was on the call...

Manik cudnt say anything

Cabir:Soha hogi Mukti aur kaun...kyu Manik

Manik:Haa...she is irritating yaar...lets just reach there fast

In college as Nandini tries to leave form college...she meets Navya

Navya:Tum yaha

Nandini:Haa woh

Navya goes all worried :Nandini ...tum marwaogi hume kisi...humne Manik ko jhooth bola kit um Mangalore gayi ho aur tum clg aagayi,,,

Nandini:...Navya...Navya...shaant hojao...Manik jaanta hai...ki main yahi hun ...use kal hi samaj aagaya tha aur who ghar pohach gaya mujhse milne

Navya:Kya ...fir toh hum pakka gaye

Nandini:Don't wory maine usse kaha ki mera plan tha...aur waise bhi who do din tak nahi aayenge clg including today...

Navya:kya ...shukar ahi mata rani ka...hum bachgaye...varna who toh hume kaccha chabajata

Nandini:who aisa nahi hai...

Navya:haa ...tumne usse badal diya hai...par fab5 ka kuch pata nahi kab badal jaye...waise hume jhooth bolne hue dar lagraha tha

Nandini:Theek hai main chalti hun...

Navya:Kaha...

Nandini:Manik ne kaha hai do din tak ghar se mat niklo...but I don't know Y he said like that aur bohat gusse me tha

Navya:Woh tumhe chot lagi hai shayad isliye...par tumhe jana chahiye ...aaram karna chahiye...chalo hum chalte hai tumhare saath bahar tak

As they reach out they finds Abhi there

Nandini n Navya both says Hi to Abhi n starts talking to him...n As usual Nandini forgets that Manik told her to leave clg n go home ASAP

Fab5 reaches at farm house...

Manik first gets down walks away from Fab4 n checks his phone...n gets angry

Manik:Ye ladki meri baat kabhi nahi sunegi

Main Farm house tak agaya but She dint reached home yet


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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Very good manipulation of current situation...interesting...!!!!

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