MaNan OS: Nandini Promise - Page 5

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit

Its was a tragically beautiful story... I love reading angst and this is one of best stories I have read...

Loved it 😊

Originally posted by: Arshirox97

Beautiful! My tears are not stopping now! This was so serene and so perfectly written!! Good job Rhea!

Originally posted by: N_Niya

aatei manhusiyat faiyla dii forum me!! 🥱
mere MaNan ko alag karwadia!!
chal nayi aayi hai issliye welcome but aayinda aisa OS likhke mainu swargvaasi na karrna! 🤢

Originally posted by: ishneetb

Shit!! You have made me cry so badly. I love Manan and this is something I can never imagine happening to them (not even in my worst dream) . But I must say your writing is amazing. This was beautifully emotional.

Keep on writing on Manan but please make it a happy one this time.
Lots of love :)

Originally posted by: riddhima11

You have written an amazing piece. My eyes welled up while reading.. Awesome job done in expressing manik's emotions... Please do write more.. Amazing writer..

Originally posted by: simran45

So sad os but very beautifully written too good

Originally posted by: twinkle10

Damn that's perfection... and perfection to the extent that I'm utterly speechless. I want to say so many things to you, but my mind is totally blank. Like I seriously don't have words. Your writing talent is truly exceptional and one that many yearn for throughout their life. The way you emote your scenes and frame the characters in the story is at such a level that it would take years for many to practice and perfect. But you my lovely, are a born natural.

The minute I started reading this piece I knew I was in for a treat and I'll be honest that I had quite high expectations. But as I progressed deeper and deeper into the piece, there was absolutely nothing left running in my mind. Your story had completely suppressed my thoughts and I could focus on nothing else but the never-ending and undying love of our Manan. Never was there a point when I felt any kind of detachment from the characters or their emotions, it was as if I wasn't reading but rather watching this episode in front of my eyes. You described each of their actions and sentiments with such precision that it all seemed too real to be a story. With every word that I read on, my heart's ache grew for the two love birds...and before I knew it, there were tear in my eyes too. You've said to me quite a few times now that I write so well, especially the dialogues i dig up for Nandini's character. But hardly dude... hardly. This was out of the world.

I really don't mind whether your next piece is a happy piece or a sad piece... but all I would say to you is that you need to write another piece asap! Like need. To some extent I feel that the use of this angst, pain and all the emotions related to anguish are your usp because you are able to simulate them with such accuracy that not everyone can do. A happy ending is a rather common, ordinary yet a pleasant wrap-up that most writers are able to script on paper but this tragedy was simply an extraordinary, thrilling and miraculous piece which you've been able to pen.

Seriously hats off to you and god bless! <3