A Fan Fiction.Chapter 4 updated. page 3.

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KY2 FAN FICTION.

This fan fiction is dedicated to the entire cast of Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan. Every character in this show is important. This piece of writing is thus giving each character the importance it truly deserves. This is not dedicated to just Manan or Dhrulya.

The story begins from the part when Navya told Harshad about her being pregnant. The next part is completely imaginary and fictional.

Harshad completed refused to accept Navya and his unborn child that she was carrying. Navya was heartbroken and she brokedown in front of Mukti, the only person she could share her pain with, the only one who knew what happened between her and Harshad on the Musicana night. Mukti was very angry and decided to confront Harshad about it but Navya didn't want anyone to know about it so she refused.

Mukti then decided to talk to Nandini about it as she knew Nandini really cared about Navya and she wont judge her if she came to know that she slept with Harshad. Nandini was shocked when she came to know about Navya and was really upset about it. Slowly the entire team of FAB5 came to know about it. They all decided to support Navya and stand by her side. Alya suggested to again send Harshad to jail and force him to accept Navya and take her responsibility. But Cabir made all of them realize that even if Harshad is forced to accept Navya, he will not take care of her and treat her ill.

Navya was shattered as her family had kicked her out of the house. On the other hand Cabir was also depressed as his mother had told him that she would allow him back to his house only when he becomes "normal". ( this is really disgusting as homosexuals are very much normal and there is nothing abnormal about them. )

So, finally Cabir has decided to marry Navya and take her responsibility. Though Navya knows they can never fall in love she was really thankful to Cabir for the decision he took and they have promised to remain best friends the rest of their life and raise the child together. Everyone is very happy with there decision. Cabir's mom is elated as her son would atlast be accepted in the society and Navya's parents were also satisfied that atlast their daughter and her child will get a name.

So, now my story will revolve around the grand wedding that these two amazing people will have...and all those happy and sad incidents that will take place during this week long wedding celebration.

this is my first piece of writing...and its just an introduction...its just a concept...only if u people like it...i will post the second part...😊😊

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cool idea pl continue it soon 😊
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😊 nice idea...
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CHAPTER 1

Today is the Mehendi ceremony at Nandini's house. Its 11 in the morning. The entire house is decorated and Nandini and Navya are getting ready in her bedroom. Suddenly they hear a car honk and Nandini recognized it and peeped through the window.

Nandini: Manik, what are you doing here ?!

Manik: Come down...I want to talk to you.

Nandini: Manik go, chachi and Navya's parents will see you...today is a ladies function...u are not supposed to be here !

Manik: No...first u come down, only then I will leave.

Nandini excuses herself from Navya and goes down. She was looking stunning in a red and golden salwar suit. Manik couldn't take his eyes off her.

Nandini: Manik what are doing here ? What did you want to say ? Say fast ! The Mehendi ceremony will soon begin.

Manik pulled her towards himself by her waist.

Nandini: Manik leave me...have you gone mad...someone will see us. Its broad daylight. Leave me now.

She tried to free herself from his grip but failed in vain.

Manik: I will leave u only when I want to...and now I don't want to. I have come here to tell you something.

Nandini: What ??!

Manik: I want you to write my name on your hands...with Mehendi...😉

Nandini started blushing.

Nandini: No...I wont...u are not that special...

Manik became angry and was about to leave when nandini held his hand.

Nandini: Wait listen to the entire thing...you are not that special...you are the most special...the most important person in my life...and to prove that I don't need to write your name on my hand...your name is written in my heart...Mehendi will slowly fade away...but no one can ever remove you from my heart...

Manik was touched by her words. He slowly came towards her and whispered in her ears.

Manik: Nandini, see that's the reason why I call you my shining star. You always know how to make me happy. I so wish I could hug you tightly right now.

Nandini whispered back in his ears.

Nandini: And I so wish I could hug you back right now...more tightly.😆

Then she pushed him away and went inside smiling to herself. Manik also smirked and left her house. Little did they realize that they both had an audience throughout the time. Navya was watching them from her room. She couldn't help but smile to herself and say

Navya: So Nandu has finally turned this monster into a human and that to a lover boy.

And then she silently prayed to god that their love does'nt get doomed like her's. Only at that moment her phone ringed and she smiled seeing the name flashing on the screen. Cabir.

Cabir on the phone: So, Madhubala all ready to marry me...

Navya: More than ever.

Cabir: You know I cant wait for you to come at my place, I have thought of so many new ways to torture you..😛

Listening to this both Cabir and Navya started laughing.😃They both had realized that they had come a long way from their fights and all the torture

TO BE CONTINUED SOON...

Please give your feedback through your comments.😳

And sorry to disappoint you if you guys didn't like it...

Edited by sahasimren - 10 years ago
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awsm concept
lovely chapter
loved it
continue soon
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😊 awsome chapter...loved it...mehendi function...wow...manan romance...
continue soon...😊
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CHAPTER 2.

Navya's Mehendi ceremony was going on. Mukti and Alya both of them had also come to the ceremony. FAB5 didn't hate Nandini and Navya anymore. They were a big happy family.

Navya: Nandini listen come here...i want to talk to you.

Nandini left Mukti and Alya's side and came to her.

Navya whispered to Nandini: Take this mehendi cone...go to your room and do what you have been asked to do.

Nandini: What ?? What are you talking about ?? Whom are you talking about ?? ( Nandini was flustered and didn't know what else to say..)😕

Navya smirked and said: I am talking about Monsterrr...ohh sorry lover boy Manik.👏

Nandini couldn't help but blush. Everytime someone mentioned his name she blushed and their was an instant smile on her face.😳

Nandini: How do you know ??

Navya: Don't ask stupid questions...just do what I am telling you to...

Mukti and Alya were wondering what were these two talking about...Alya had another thought rummaging her mind...Dhruv...yes...that was the only thought that she had on her nowadays...she had to go meet him...she had promised him...but she knew she couldn't leave the ceremony suddenly...someone would definitely get suspicious.🥱

Nandini silently went to her room. She kept smiling to herself thinking what Manik had whispered in her ears earlier that day. She drew a heart on her hand and then wrote his name on her hand. She was lost in her thoughts and she didn't realize that there was someone who had just entered her room and had seen her write "Manik" on her hands. It was none other than Alya.

Alya was surprised but not shocked. She always knew Manik was obsessed with Nandini but she had never thought that it would one day change into love...that Manik and Nandini would ever fall in love with each other...

Alya: Nandini...

Nandini turned and was shocked to see Alya, she quickly hid her hand.🥱

Alya: No need to hide it from me...and even if you hide your hand...you cant hide the love that reflects in your eyes and that smile on your lips everytime someone mentions his name..

Nandini was surprised and said: I didn't realize anyone noticed...anyway what are you doing here ??

Alya decide to tell her the truth: I am finding a way to run away from here...are there any back gate exit or something...so that I don't get caught leaving..

Nandini: but why do you want to leave ??

Alya: the same reason you wrote Manik's name on your hands. Love. My love.

Nandini was shocked beyond imagination and said: What ??! Who ?? you are in love ?? Tell me everything.

Alya started laughing: Chill Nandini...i have to go meet him right now...I promised him...he is the sweetest guy on the earth. He loves me...he trusts me and makes me feel very special.

Nandini: But who is he ??

Alya: Dhruv !!...

Nandini: WHAT ???!!! I cant believe this...you both are so different..but you know what you are very lucky...Dhruv is so sensitive and sweet...I can promise you that he will always be by your side...

Alya couldn't help but blush and said: I know...and you know what with Manik I was always the one who made the effort in the relationship. But with him its different. He is the one who keeps worrying about me...makes me smile when I am sad...makes me feel special and I guess that is all a girl wants from the man of his dreams...

Nandini was happy for Alya. She deserves to be loved.

Nandini: See Dhruv is my best friend and I m a great friend so its my responsibility to make sure that his lady love reaches to him in time.

Alya: Thank you so much Nandini...I really need your help.

Nandini: Ok listen. Some gifts are to be sent to Cabir' house for the Sangeet tomorrow and I was supposed to go...but instead of me you go...and you go to Dhruv...keeps the gifts in the car...I will send someone else to Cabir's place with them.

Alya: Nandini you are a life savior. Thank you.

Nandini: One more thing...i have a plan...don't tell Manik or Dhruv that we know each others little secret. We girls will have some fun..

Later that day Alya and Dhruv were spending some alone time at Dhruv's place.

Dhruv holding Alya's hand: Listen tomorrow is Navya and Cabir's Sangeet...I want to dance with you..and not with mukti...please.

Alya: Dhruv..no its not possible...what will we say them. I am worried. No. a big No.

Dhruv smiling : Ohh I know what are you worried about...you think while dancing with me you wont be able to resist me and will kiss me...and everyone would come to know about us.

Alya laughing: Oh my god...Dhruv you are impossible...i cant believe you can say something like this...i thought you are an innocent kid...but no You are a devil in disguise.😈

Dhruv: See...i can completely be myself only with you...because I know you wont judge me...you bring out the best in me...

He slowly took her hand and kissed it.

Even though they have been together for months and he had done the same thing a million times before...it somehow always managed to bring butterflies in her stomach.

Alya: Dhruv...I love you. ❤️You are so special for me. I wish I could dance with you tomorrow and the rest of our lives.😆

And saying that she kept her head on his shoulders and they both felt that for the first time in their life they were at the correct place with the correct person. And they both also knew that they wouldn't mind being the same way for the rest of their lives.❤️

So, here is part 2...hope you guys liked it...feel free to comment your views about it...

To know what happened in the Sangeet...😊

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awsm update
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that was a wonderful update. seriously yaar loving it
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CHAPTER 3.

Today was the day Manik was waiting for...Navya and Cabir's Sangeet ceremony. He knew today was the day he could dance with Nandini, hold her hand in front of everyone and no one would get suspicious.

The girls were getting ready upstairs in Manik's guestroom. Mukti couldn't understand what Alya and Nandini kept whispering to each other about. Their smiles and giggles made her really curious. Navya on the other hand was thinking how much her life had changed in the last three months. Though this marriage was nothing like she wanted it to be... but given the circumstances she was happy and content. She couldnt have asked for more.

But the guys downstairs were getting impatient.

Abhimanyu: Where is Mukti ?

Manik: Mukti ??😲

Abhimanyu: I meant Nandini...

Manik: NANDINI ???!!!...😡

Abhimanyu: I meant my sister Nandini...my sister Navya...my sister alya...and definitely not my sister mukti...

Cabir started laughing listening to him. He too was eager to see what happens at the Sangeet today. The boys and the girls had fought the previous day and decided to held a competition. BOYS vs GIRLS.

Manik had also thought of a surprise element at the end so that he could dance with Nandini and Dhruv could spend some quality time with Alya. Yes. He knew about Dhruv and Alya. He had forced Dhruv to tell him who he had kissed. Dhruv was then forced to tell him. But Alya had no idea that her little secret was out.

Manik was interrupted with his thoughts when Abhimanyu's phone started ringing. He saw the display name and excused himself. It was his doctor. He had again missed his treatment session. The doctor warned him that this would have an adverse effect on his health. Abhimanyu didn't care. He knew even with all the treatment he would not be able to survive. So no point wasting the last few days of his life sulking in a hospital.😲

Soon the door opened and the pretty girls descended the stairs. And yeah there she was. Manik thought. The prettiest of them all. His Nandini. His shining star. He felt like the entire house lit up just by her presence. He felt his pulse raising. The way she looked at him and blushed...made him feel like dancing.😛

Dhruv couldn't take his eyes off Alya. She looked like an angel. The way she was smiling at him...made his day.

Cabir was smirking looking at their expressions.😉

Cabir: Guys...close your mouth...don't forget you guys are their enemies today. I don't want to lose the competition just because you losers are in love. Get your heads straight.

Manik and Dhruv smiled like idiots.😆

No matter how much they loved their ladies...the competition was on...

The girls came down the stairs when suddenly Mukti realized that Abhimanyu was not there with them. Abhimanyu. Yes. The Chole delivery boy. The Peon. The Beast and the Joker. She had fallen for him.

But things were not so great between them... Abhimanyu had rejected her.

He had said : I don't love you Mukti, I care for you...but I don't love you. Find someone for yourself who can promise to spend the rest of his life with you. Because I cant.😭

Mukti didn't understand his words...but the tears in his eyes told a complete different story. She had decided she wont give up on him. The exact way he hadn't given up on her all these months trying to make her happy.😕

The girls walked towards the boys.

Nandini said: So boys ready to lose ?

Manik: In your dreams woman.

Nandini in an undertone: In my dreams, we definitely don't fight and you definitely don't lose.😳

Manik was not expecting that comeback.😃

Dhruv: Alyyy...Nnaaanndini you look very pretty.

Nandini: Thank you Dhruv.

Alya: Manik you look very handsome !!

Manik: I always do.😛

Navya: Can we please start the function...don't forget I am three months pregnant..i cant stand for so long.

The girls made Navya sit beside Cabir in a beautiful sofa. They kinda looked cute together. Cabir went and held her hand. He knew right now all Navya needed was assurance that he will never leave her. And the hand holding served the purpose.

Navya turned to him and said: Cabir, I know...no matter what you will always be there by my side.

Cabir: After all you are my Madhubala. How can I ever leave you ?!!😉

FAB4 and Nandini smiled looking at them.

Nandini: Every girl needs a guy like Cabir I there life.

Manik whispered in her ears: Will a Manik be enough for you ?

Nandini: More than enough.❤️

And that was enough for Manik to be happy for the rest of the night.😆

And then suddenly the lights dimmed and the spotlight fell on the stage...and

Abhimanyu announced: Boys and pretty girls...welcome to Cabir and Madhubala's Sangeet ceremony. I promise you that you guys will not only have a blast tonight...but remember this night for the rest of your lives👏.

So this is just the beginning to a great night ahead...

To know what happens next stay tuned...⭐️

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