OS Kiss 2 chapter 4 upload pg11 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Loved it so muuuchhh plllzz continue sooon
l just love reading ur os and ff keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
nice update...

why its so difficult for manik to say a simple i love u to nandini???
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Totally amazing
just read all the 3 parts
thank u so much for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
pm me from the next update please
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Its awsum dr... do pm m whenever u update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 4



Manik comes sad to Kabir.

Kabir : Mere baba ko kya ho gaya ?

Manik : What is between Manan ?

Kabir : Love yaar.

Manik : So, why i can't say to her these three words, u know one day tumare madhubala naa ask me about Aliya and I said her she is my lover. But why I think it's only care for Nandini.

Kabir : come sit on the bench.

They sit.

Kabir close ur eyes : Think about Navya ?

Manik : What ?

Kabir : Trust me close ur eyes.

Manik thinks about Navya.

Kabir : Tell someting about her.

Manik : She is fool, u are her perfect match.

Kabir continues : If u have to make a name on ur relation ? What will be ? Bhai-behen, lovers, enemies ?

Manik : Mmm I think bhai-behen.

Kabir : So now Soha ?

Manik : She is sexy.

Kabir : Relation ?

Manik : Nothing.

Kabir : So u don't feel anything for her.

Manik : No.

Kabir : Ok what about Nandini ?

Manik : She is so cute. My shinning star. I want hug her everytime.

Kabir : Relation ? U have still two chances.

Manik : Lovers likin ?

Kabir : Wait wait, when u were a couple with Aliya u was just attract by her outer beauty. While with Nandini, u like her innocence, her caring, her audacity... I can make a full list like that. U love her dude but u can't express it.

Manik : Toh mai kya karo ?

Kabir : Tomorrow in the party kidnapp her.

Manik : What ? The last time she didn't speak to me.

Kabir : Trust me do and tell u about ur feelings. What do u want ? Why u can't live without her ? Dont' forget that it's with her that u don't have this monster mask. She know u very well.

Manik thinks about her.

Kabir : I let you with ur dreaming tomorrow night in soha's house.

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Manik comes here and waits for Nandini's entry.

Soha : Kya waa sexy ?

Manik : Nothing.

He comes to Cabir.

Manik : It's strange she was never late.

Kabir : She is on way, probably...

Kabir stops and looks the door : Mindblowing beauty.

Nandini comes in the party with Abhi, she holds him arm.

Mukti sees them in jealousy way.

Dhruv : They look cute together.

Manik and Mukti in same time : WHAT?!!!!

Kabir : Relax.

Mukti goes to Abhi.

Mukti : Can I have dance with you ?

Abhi is half fainted. Nandini laughs.

Abhi : Likin Nandini

Mukti : She is not a baby.

Mukti pulls him and they start to dance.

Soha : Hey Nans, don't forget about ur job.

Nandini : Sure.

Soha : I will invite him for a dance.

Nandini nods. She leaves toward him.

Soha : Come for a dance.

Manik : I want to speak first.

Soha : Ok, come to my bedroom.

She holds his hand. Nandini sees them in disgust way.

Kabir approaches her.

Kabir : Kyu itni udaaz lagrihoo?

Kabir sees tears in her eyes.

Nandini runs outside.

Kabir follows her.

Nandini : I confessed my love to him, but still now he is behind Soha.

Kabir : First stop crying. It's not suit u.

Nandini : Why he is like that ?

Kabir : He never learn about love like us, his parents fight everytime. For him love it's just us, I mean Fab 5, he shows us by caring way.

Nandini : I can't Kabir.He is not fix.

Kabir : I understand give him time.

Nandini stays silent.

Kabir kneels : Will u be my dance partner please, ok ?

She smiles.

He plays a song and he holds her. He sees Manik and signals him to come.

Manik has a tissue and puts on her nose. She faints in Kabir's hand.

Kabir : Go and I want Manan confession before 2015.

Manik blushes.




Edited by 8seetha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Hahaha.. Manan confession b4 2015.. Hw sweet of Cabir.. I luv him yar.. Awesum update.. Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
awww...i love cabir...he is so sweet...
and wow manan confession before 2015...loved it...

awsome update yaar...
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
plz plz update soon..like CV's u too ended your update at crucial point😆
btw it was lovely..👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Wow..proper faint karke kidnap.. Likey!!

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