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Posted: 10 years ago
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Don't worry ashmitaa I understand ur feelings. But it's our cv's charm naa surprise us in last minute.Don't worry I am writing and will post the OS soon hope u will enjoy it. And thank u to give ur opinion It's mean a lot dear.
And yaah other I love u so much. Hope I will not annoying u with my story.
Just wait me cutties.😳
Edited by 8seetha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: 8seetha

Don't worry ashmitaa I understand ur feelings. But it's our cv's charm naa surprise us in last minute.Don't worry I am writing and will post the OS soon hope u will enjoy it. And thank u to give ur opinion It's mean a lot dear.

And yaah other I love u so much. Hope I will not annoying u with my story.


Just wait me cutties.😳

thanks dr..!!love u too..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Manik puts the curtain right. When Nandini hears his shoes going back, she feels relaxed.

Nandini's POV : Thanks Aiyyappa, Manik doesn't see me.

Manik holds Soha's hand and starts a slowly dance with her.

Soha whispers: Thank god that I don't listen Nandini.

Manik: What Nandini?

Soha: She says u don't like surprises but here it's opposite.

Manik POV: My Nandu u wanted to move on, I accepted but now u have to return by urself.

Manik brings Soha more closely to him. She bites his ear.

Soha: I love this Manik who is more sexy.

Nandini has her big eyes: What's the hell it's not still two weeks passed that Monster Manik start too romance someone else. He forget me. No, no way he can't forget me. After we shared a kiss together. Soha will never shine like me to him.

Manik says: Soha now let continue with the next step.

Soha: What next step?

Manik holds her hand and makes her sit on the sofa.

He calls the servant.

Servant: Ji baba

Manik: Go and bring Madam's bag. And some glasses.

He sees the curtain that Nandini can't stop to twiddle herself. He smiles.

Manik: Soha I think our date will start now. I hope u are ready.

Soha: Oh yes Manik

Servant gives her the bag. She opens the DVD and switch the TV.

Manik: Soha I can't open the bottle so please.

Soha : Ya sure Manik.

When she opens the bottle, some drops falls on her breast.

Soha: Manik can u clean it?

Manik: What?

He sees Nandini's irritated face.

So he takes a tissue and approaches his hand.

Her phone rings. She puts the bottle and goes outside to pick up the phone.

Manik thinks: Save

She returns with a sad face.

Manik: Kya waa Soha baby?

Soha: My dad calls me and ask me to join him for a party.

Manik: Oh sit but our date.

Soha: I have to postpone. Sorry.

Manik hugs her.

Manik: I will walk with u until the car.

Nandini tries to exit but the door's locked.

Nandini: Manik can't see me here.

She hears the door. It's Manik.

Manik: Tum yah haa?

Nandini: Soha called me to come... come...

Manik: Haan Nandini find and say an excuse.

Nandini: I come here for the party.

Manik: Really? So why you hide behind the curtain, Moorthy?

He comes to her. She steps back.

Nandini POV: How he knew about it?

Nandini: I was not here, I was waiting outside. But kaka permits me to enter here.

Manik: Don't lie to me, I will call him.

Manik is about to shout when Nandini puts her hand on his mouth.

Nandini: Ok fine I was here. But now I have to go.

Manik: Not so fast Nandini Moorty.

Nandini runs in first floor while Manik shouting her name.

She doesn't know where to go so she penetrates in Manik's room. She goes to the bathroom but before she locks Manik puts his hand.

Manik: Nandini comes outside.

Nandini opens the door.

Nandini: Please Manik let me go.

Manik: First it's u who came in my house, second it was u who behind the curtain and third it's u who entered in my room. If u want to go u have to do some tasks.

Nandini: Ok bolo jaldi.

Manik: First remove my splint.

She takes it out.

Manik: Second remove my jacket.

With furious eyes she did.

Manik: Now my pullover.

Nandini: No

Manik: This morning it's Nyonika who helped me she is not here, issliye I asked u.

Nandini touches hesitantly his cloth. But she holds and starts to extract. It's block in his left hand.

AMnik: slowly it's painful

Nandini: Sorry sorry

He smiles of her innocence.

She removes his pullover. And puts her hand on his chest.

Nandini: Can I leave now?

Manik: Not still. Take out my pants.

Nandini: What no!!

Nandini tries to walk out. But he holds her. She bits him. She makes him fall on the bed and she lies on him. Quickly, he makes her lie on the bed.

Nandini: Utto yaar.

Nandini scratches his shoulder however he doesn't move.

He approaches his lips slowly.

Nandini: What are u doing Manik?

Manik doesn't listen her, she puts her hand on his neck.

He kisses her. She finds pleasure on it. He puts his hand on her hand. After their kiss, he sits on the bed.

Manik: U are good taste. Hope Soha will be more close to me. Like that I will have a lot of kisses.

Nandini gives shot on his arm.

Nandini: Don't dare Manik warna. I will play also with Abhi.

Manik : Just try after u will see my true face of Monster.

Nandini: Bet accepted just wait and watch. The match between Spot v/s Monster will start soon. And I will make u say ur feelings in front of everyone. Until now u knew the cute girl Nandini but u will see the stronger Nandini.

Manik hugs: That's ok. I will win and u will have to give me a sexy dance.

He tends the hand: Ok?

She shakes: Done Malhotra. She pecks in his check on runs outside.

Leave ur feedbacks cutties.
Edited by 8seetha - 10 years ago
Humzy thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
awsm update😊
r u continuing this?
8seetha thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
don't know Humzy😕
likin thanks for ur all comments on my Os or FF.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: 8seetha

don't know Humzy😕

likin thanks for ur all comments on my Os or FF.

i think u shud😊

ure welcome
all ure work is awsm 👍🏼

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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
continue it plsss...& update soon as early as possible...
8seetha thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
thank u Nujhatt😉
Edited by 8seetha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Hahaha, you surely know how to use Manik's wickedness to it's fullest.. I have surely enjoyed reading all your OS(s)...keep writing and entertaining.. though I am sure you can take up a notch on a romance scenes 😉


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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
first welcome Mehr. And thanks u for ur comments. U make me shy.😳😆
Edited by 8seetha - 10 years ago

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