MaNan OS ~A Continuation ~ Pain is now Part of our life

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Still..one..hour..to..go..for...episode...till..den...enjoy...this..Os...
Statutory warning: tissue..papers..are..must...😆


Manik was sitting in library with guitar just then nandini came dere n saw him with guitar..
Manik noticed her n he was about to play guitar as he got angry after seeing nandu dere...
Nandu(stopping manik) :Manik plzz dun play guitar .. Ur hand is still not healed properly. Manik plzz dun do dis..
Manik pulled his hand away n
Manik: stay out of it Nandini murthy .. Mind ur own business .. Who am i to u ? Then what about dis concern
Nandini: Manik say wtever u want to say but plzz dun play guitar..its not gud for u ..
Just then Manik pulled her towards himself n
Manik : Nandini just ...
Dey botj share an eyelock
Background score : "
kuchh Kum Roshan Hai Roshani, Kuchh Kum Gili Hai Baarishein
Kuchh Kum Lehraati Hai Hawa, Kuchh Kum Hai Dil Mein Khwaayishein
Tham Sa Gaya Hai Yeh Waqt Aise, Tere Liye Hi Thehra Ho Jaise
Hmm Hmm Hmm Hmm...)
"

Just den dey realized deir position ..Manik got up n left the place in anger.
Nandini : ayiyappa why Manik is doing dis to himself .he is angry with me thats okie but he can't hurt himself like dis.
Just den she realized wt she said n she was wondering dat she was the one who told manik dey are nt compatible n unlucky n dey can't be along den why so worried for him. Now when he wants to go why i dun want him to go .
At night :

Manik in his..room just luking at his phone n tears were rolling down frm.his eyes n on other hand Nandini still was standing at her room window remembering all those hugs n getting hallicunations dat manik is again dere.
Manik's phone rang n Nandini was flashing .. He cut the call n he was unable to control tears.
Just den servant called him for dinner n he refused to come n there neonika was yelling at him
Neonika: oh my god, dis boy he is just too much, so careless, leave it .. Let him dere ... N she went away blabbering ...
Manik was unable to control his anger one side taunts of neyonika n oder side calls of Nandini ..
manik picked up call n
Manik : Nandini murthy i swear if u ..
Just den Nandini was about to say smthng n manik just throw his phone in rage .. ..
Just go away everyone i dun want anybody here just go away ...

Nandini heard the noise n phone cuts n she was yelling manik manik kneel down crying ..
Manik don't do dis to me .. I can't tolerate anymore .. ...

Both manik n nandini dozzed off at deir respective places broken heart n teary eyed ..

Conclusion:

no conclusion..so bad to be concluded 😛😛😆

P.S. abhi...chappals,tomatoes,eggs...all...welcome...😆😆 sry..for making...nandini,..gopi,.bahu..again

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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
unres😛

tu hi haina tu kaisi karsakthi yaar!!aur woh bhi manik ki saath😲
tune manik ko ruladiya😲😡
jaa mein cmnt nahi karne waali hoon🤔
Edited by _keertu_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice jas... 👏 👏 emotional tha
but u didnt add khurana call
Edited by ragvir.fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A pretty nice OS without any ending
Awww...Manik cried... 😭😭😭 I can't imagine him crying yaar...
loved the library scene..imagined Manan in that position 😳
Nyonika called the servant kaka...I can't blv it 😆
Edited by Ireena7 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _keertu_

res

unres😛

tu hi haina tu kaisi karsakthi yaar!!aur woh bhi manik ki saath😲
tune manik ko ruladiya😲😡
jaa mein cmnt nahi karne waali hoon🤔



main..hi..hoon..yaar...plzzz...karde...comment...

warna...main...ro...dungi...😭

tune...ahi...mere...ff n all..padhe...hi...nahi...hai...phir..to...tu...mujhse baat...bhi...a..kare 😛

😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ragvir.fan

nice jas... 👏 👏 emotional tha

but u didnt add khurana call



tysm...dibu...i know...
emotional..tha...😕

areeei..forgot...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: ShivinkiJas



main..hi..hoon..yaar...plzzz...karde...comment...

warna...main...ro...dungi...😭

tune...ahi...mere...ff n all..padhe...hi...nahi...hai...phir..to...tu...mujhse baat...bhi...a..kare 😛

😭

tik hai tik hai karungi karungi!!ro maat mein nai dek paungi tere rhula hua chehara🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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malkin abh toh meko na tomatoes,eggs and chappals bhi chote lag rahe hain mann toh kar raha hai ki buldozer he chadhwadu tujhpe... 🤣
ni hundh teri inni himmat ho gayi ki tu mere balma nu rula ditta... 😡

over all it was nyc wid no ending 🥱 but tu na bahot pitegi mujhse for making my balma cry... 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I dont want anymore rona dhona..let thm be happy soon..and yeah jass..nice one..and arent u fed up of kuch kam ..anothr song is required..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ireena7

A pretty nice OS without any ending
Awww...Manik cried... 😭😭😭 I can't imagine him crying yaar...
loved the library scene..imagined Manan in that position 😳
Nyonika called the servant kaka...I can't blv it 😆



hahah...end..pata..hi..ni...tha...kay.karu..😛😆

yeah..he..cried 😭😛

tysm for reading 🤗

n yes..neonika..can..do..anything...😆

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