MaNan drabble - Suspended in time - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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"She was coming towards him. He couldn't let her see him this way. He couldn't let her see how broken he was. He was fine being broken as along as no one knew. And she would know. It would take her just one look and he'd be undone."

Its in the way you describe the vulnerability of Manik that gets to me every time. She is someone who defines happiness, positivity, grace, and life for him...and the moment he witnesses her smiling and laughing, with someone other than him he is broken inside. Yet, he chose this for himself, so he walks away because he knows, the moment she comes to him, the wall he is trying to create around him will crumble down. AHHH THIS IS THE BEAUTY OF THESE TWO <3. THIS NEEDS TO HAPPEN IN THE EPISODE. Please! This is what they are right now...not what we are seeing.

Firey, you be my LAU. MY BAE - You get them so well, it warms my heart. I needed this to get back to them tomorrow. I want Manik to witness Nandani laughing, and I want happiness for this girl, because only then, they can "reset" again...Fight it my love's, but you two be too entwined. You will always come back to each other.

I LOVE YOU. BAS. You give me every reason to.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
There, I unres-ed -.- So not talking to you for a while.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Beautifully written 👏
Manik's vulnerability is even more heart wrenching than Nandu's pain 😭
I love Manik ...Bas !❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
This was just beautiful 👏
I can imagine this happening in the show, the sadness in Manik, and Abhimanyu making Nandini smile. I loved reading it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Manik's feelings described in such a beautiful way!
The last part *sigh* - thats how well they know each other! he knows he can't fake it in front of her - not anymore!

another perfect piece of writing :) always look forward to reading your work!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
You guys are the sweetest. Thank you SO much for such lovely comments. They make my day, they really do. I wanna #tacklehug all of you and nom nomnom all your pretty faces. 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Firebolt

You guys are the sweetest. Thank you SO much for such lovely comments. They make my day, they really do. I wanna #tacklehug all of you and nom nomnom all your pretty faces. 🤗


@bold - That last bit. Should I be worried?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
this was so beautiful❤️
you write so well Bolt ,so well..the way you described Manik's condition was hear wrenching..Nandini is his firefly and he'll always need her..he knows he wont be able to hide behind the mask in front of her...
aah Abhi being the friend Nandu needs at this moment...beautiful
I can fangirl over your OSs forever
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Hey Firebolt,
This packed a punch. For such a short work, it conveyed all of Manik. Simply superb. You have a way with words. Please PM me if you write anything else.

And loved your username... 😃 and love the work from where you picked it from.

Love
MD
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its so beautiful!! The way you described Manik's inner turmoil was perfect!!! Plz do write more!

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