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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1

Mukti : What's wrong with this Abhi ? He is always with a good mood. Wait wait why I think so much of him ?!!
Manik : Mukti what are u doing alone ?
Mukti : Wow Abhi... I mean I was just resting my head here.
They hear some laughs. And after a long time Manik sees his Nandu laughs a lot. She was so pretty.
Nandini : Tum bhi naa Abhi stop with ur joke. Thanks after few days I laughed. After Harshad's jail and Navya's departure I feel so lonely. But after I met you, I find my smile again.
Abhi puts his hand on her shoulder : Come on Nandini you are so cool and sweet all will like to be friend with you. And more you are a family member so it's my duty to make u smile. Don't worry I will be here for you. Never feel that you are alone.
Abhi sees Mukti and Manik together. So he approaches them with Nandini. Nandini feels strange to see Manik.
Abhi : Oh my beautiful did u miss me ?
Manik holds his collar. But before Abhi's words. Nandini throws Manik's hand.
Mukti : Nandini why you are defending him ?
Manik smirked: Maybe she is in love. She finds a better half a looser like her.
Abhi become serious for the first time: Stop it Manik, if you have a problem with me. Talk to me don't interfere Nandini here.
Manik : Hey Mr Romeo, so don't be romantic with Mukti.
Abhi : Okay done. Sorry Miss Mukti to flirt with you. I will never cross ur path again.
Mukti feels bad. Abhi catches Nandini's hand and leaves from here. Manik was very furious too see Nandini's hand on Abhi's.
Mukti : Why u speak like that with Nandini ?
Manik : What I did yaar ?
Mukti : It's too much to hurt her still now after her help. It's not fair. She has no one after Navya's departure. She seems sad. Thank god that Abhi is here for her.
Manik : Ek minute since when you come a Mother Theresa.
Mukti : Shut up Manik I just don't like to hurt Nandini.
Manik : Ok mummy, I will not speak to her again like that.

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Mukti comes to hospital to buy her pills. But she is shocked to see Abhi with a little girl patient in a room. She slowly opens the door.
Abhi : Let me tell you a kahani, ok Pretty ?
Girl : Haan, uncle but about a princess please.
Abhi : Sure.
Abhi says the story and makes the cute girl laugh. Unfortunately the girl does her last breath with a splendid smile.
A man arrives : Thank u so much Abhi.
Abhi : No sir I want to see her and in return she gives me a wonderful smile that no one can buy even for a million. I am lucky to have a memory like that of her.
A man : How u can be so simple teenager ?
Abhi : I just want to make people happy. And a sweet like Pretty just wants love and joy. It's my benediction to make her smile until her last laugh.
A man cries : I hope bhagawan will give all the happiness beta.
Abhi can't control himself so he leaves.
Mukti sees him going. And she hears a nurse.
Nurse : Thank god that our days a man like him exists, if I have a boyfriend like him I will pray god everyday.
Mukti has tears.


Precap : Mukti in front of all Fab5, tries to speak with Abhi but he doesn't want. Mukti learns about Abhi's mother illness. When Kabir laughs about Abhi, she slaps him.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats on the new story! im loving it so far! 😃

cant wait for the next update!
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😊 awsome start ...
continue soon...😊

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Thank u all for u support its mean a lot. I will write today for u dudes
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Part 2


Mukti returns to the college. And she sees Abhi alone with his thoughts.

Mukti sits beside him.

Mukti : Where is ur romance ?

Abhi : Please Miss Mukti go before ur Manik see me with u. I have no mood for nothing today so just leave please from her.

Mukti : What happened to you ?

Abhi has tears : My mom is in hospital...

He stops himself and goes from here.

Nandini approaches : What did u say Mukti to him ?

Mukti : Nothing bad. He talks about his mom...

Nandini : What ??? About his mom. Oh shit he thinks about her illness.

Mukti : What happened to her mom ?

Nandini sad : She has cancer and she is in last state.

Mukti : Oh my god issliye he makes laugh these children. And I misunderstood him.

Nandini : Today is the date when he learnt about his mom. So please I know u love to hurt. But please not today.

Mukti : U think I am such a monster I have also a heart.

Nandini : I don't mean that...

Mukti leaves and enters in the cafeteria where all Fab4 are here.

Cabir : Mukti kya waa ?

She is mute.

Cabir : Oh I think you are sad because it's long time that we make fun of someone. Don 't worry we will laugh today.

Suddenly Cabir approaches Abhi. And takes his bag.

Abhi : Cabir not today.

Cabir : Kya hai today, yaar ? Tumare anniversary or anything sad ?

Abhi : Just give back my bag.

Cabir : Otherwise ?

Mukti : Give his bag Cabir.

Cabir : What, I did it all these for your mood ! So just enjoy.

Mukti : Stop it Cabir just don't do anything today.

Cabir : Why not today ? He is sick or anything bad happen ?

Mukti : Haan usko maa ka...

Abhi yells : Mukti what the hell ? Just shut up ok ? How do u know about it ?

Mukti : Woh I just...

Abhi : Kya haan ? Make laugh of my life in front of everyone. Yes my mom has cancer so what ? You think it's a joke. You can laugh about it. Maybe ur parents don't learn about manner to you but my mom is a god for me. So let her.

Nandini holds him : Abhi calm down.

Abhi throws her hand and grabs her until the wall : why Nandini ? Why u speak about me with them ? After all they did u don't know about them. How they can laugh even of a death. Just remember ur dad pen that Manik broke in front of everyone. They are not sensible like us. They just want to laugh of someone and fool them. I was wrong to speak about my mom mwith ur chachi, I forgot that u share everything. But why did u speak with Mukti ?

Nandini : I am sorry Abhi I never think that it's will a big issue like that.

Abhi leaves her and goes out with tears.

Nandini sees Mukti with anger : What's wrong with you Mukti ? You fab5 are right I am really a looser to think that u can kind with someone. I just hate you, everyone.

Manik : Don't overreacting Nandini Moorty.

Nandini lost all her patience : You shut up. If ur friends are ur family it's good for u but you have not right to hurt someone else warna u will pay the consequences. And it's Nandini promise. Mukti just be far to Abhi. U can thank god that u all have their mom in their side but not Aliya. I am sorry for that. But don't play with emotions.

She quits the cafeteria after gives a warning look to Fab5.

Mukti : All of u guys go out. Just Fa5 stay here.

All go out.

Mukti : what's wrong with you Cabir ?

Cabir : hey I can't guess that his mom has cancer.

Mukti : Abhi and Nandini are right we are nothing.

Cabir : Why u are like that ? It's not like that she is dead even if...

Mukti slaps him : Stop it cabir all are not like us. His mom jhs cancer and in this same date he learnt about it. Just imagine if it's our mom who is in this condition.

Manik : Calm down Mukti, Cabir doesn't know about it.

Mukti : I know but more than us Abhi is hurt and we can't make him happy. I am sorry Cabir I was so pissed that I slapped you without thinking.

Cabir : It's ok.


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Nyonika calls all the students in the hall.

Nyonika : Everyone knows that the new year come soon. So the Malhotra family organize a concert of NH3 and Fab5. Two songs will interprete by duo, two of Fab5 with two of NH3. Thanks for ur intention.

Manik : Nyonika bhi naa.

Cabir : That's ok we can manage.

Mukti looks Abhi who is still sad and doesn't speak with anyone.

Aliya : But who will sings with Nh3 ?

Dhruv : If you want I can...

Aliya : Not you ur voice don't match with Nandini. I thought about Manik.

Manik : What never !??

Cabir : No she is right.

Manik sees him with a killer look.

Dhruv : and the other one. Will be ?

Mukti : Me

Aliya : Are u serious ? But with whom ?

Mukti : Shahid.


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Nandini approaches Abhi, all are here Fab5.

Nandini takes out a box of her box : Abhi tumare bua ji naa gives me a chole for Manik but I will not give him today. Kyu ki he will throw it. So I decide to give it you. You love her food.

Abhi is ready to leave : Ok baba I am sorry mudje mafkardo. You can give any punishment even to eat the chole of chachi.

Abhi smiles.

Abhi : I am sorry too Nandini : I was furious while you try to comfort me.

Nandini : That's ok I know it's hard to look ur mom illness. But I hope ur mom will be fine. I read about a cancer article. A woman survive after her recover in third state.

Abhi hugs her and cries : All think that I am joker who laugh everytime but the truth is that I smile to hide my sadness. When a person in front of me smile, it's value of 100% joy to me. My mom always smile, she loves children a lot. When she learn of her illness she hide for me. But I learn it very fast by my doctor. I just want my mom Nandini I need her a lot. She is my everything.

Nandini cries too : Abhi I am here for you. Don't worry. Ok baba I want to propose you.

Manik is shocked.

Abhi : What !!!!!

Nandini : I mean to become our singer of NH3.

She breaks the hug.

Abhi : But I never sing after my mom illness.

Nandini : Likin I know that u have an excellent voice.

Abhi : I don't think...

Nandini interrupts him : Mere liye please...

She makes a cate face.

Abhi : After this look how I can say no.

She kisses his cheek.

Manik becomes red.


Precap : Mukti and Abhi, Nandini and Manik practise. Abhi doesn't speak to Mukti. Manik warns Nandini.


Edited by 8seetha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So cute...I am loving Abhini...manik !jealous...wah ...waiting for more dear 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😊 beautiful update...
continue soon...
abhi is so sweet...😊 and manik ...hmmm...jealous...😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
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once again awesome work girl... keep writing :)

n wat about ur jealousy track one i hve been waiting fr d update but uh haven't done it till now... :(

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