MaNan OS - For Now - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I.WANT.THIS.TO.HAPPEN! Koi vikas ko iss ff ka link vejo!
So good *insert crazy hearteyes* i melted like chocolate in microwave while reading it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
SFBDSJGBJFSDBGBJA

AHHH FIREY - I AM YOUR FAN. Like, LEGIT!

You cannot call this "Ainvayi" - Just CANNOT. God. How could you have been insecure about this beautiful piece of lyrical fiction? Making out versus having a plot? GOSH. Let me head bang you because this was just everything - that emotional connect, them talking it out, yet their signature bit shining through. SO MANY PHEELS, that I still cannot form coherent sentences. Not just yet when I am still taking in these two beautiful beings in each other's arms, talking it out, kissing each other, Nandani answering Manik's one-dimensional view towards relationships and life...I'm all mush and gush right now. YOU BE MY STAR. THE BRIGHTEST ONE. ⭐️⭐️

"Lets take a break" - MaNan have given these words a completely new definition. One of just letting everything go, giving into the moment, to make sure that they are once again on the same level, to be able to fight the present, each other, and have that strong will to do so. The moment the vulnerability comes through, one of them always seeks for this. No other couple has done this, and this is the beauty of MaNan. Manik has always been the one to seek this in the show, and Nandani here, taking charge, leading the conversation, telling that beautiful confused stubborn monster-man of hers THAT SHE CARES, oh so much - asking for a break here, for HIM, AHHH LOVE. Nandu - I love you, and Firey, you have taken her one step ahead here! She is hurt, and still hasn't accepted his apology, but seeing him broken and feeling so unwanted like this, she knows that she has to pull him back up...Only her, and only him. Its them! She's willing to put herself at the backseat, just to make sure that he is alright. So many unanswered questions daggering between them, especially when she still needs to ask him if he would always put her second or has he completely realized all that he has broken for her or is "sorry" really just enough...yet its all nothing when she reaches out to him. Ohh Firey thank you! This is the extension of the show in its right places - so perfect. Vikas needs to read this, honestly! The bwoy is apparently on a Hong Kong Flight right now - Imma tweet this to him.

But...

No one cares. I'm fine being alone.

This is where it all comes down to for Manik. This boy - so vulnerable, lost, alone, loveless, and so much more - One can easily point him out in a crowd, but it is only Nandani who can really show him the way, prove it to him that he is as wanted, deserving, cared and loved by...Nandani, be the star you are for him, because even in the times he wants to remain alone, he still wants you beside him. Awww. THIS just had me. You've paved the way for so much here - answered so many of our own questions and how we'd like to see them play out on our screens...my thoughts, and your words. In sync. Just like MaNan are - When she engulfs in her small arms, and he holds on tight...My heart melts. Nyonika will strike them - Manik being the so easy target, yet, THIS Nandani reassures me so much - because I know she will take care of him...of them, especially the way her thoughts are in the following...

She placed her finger on his lips. Then she wrapped her arms around him. She didn't want to think about anything else. She only wanted to think about them. She wanted nothing else to exist at this moment. Yes they had so much to talk about. Yes they were far from being okay. Yes she still wasn't ready to accept his apology. But for now she wanted him to know she cared. She wanted him to be okay. She never wanted him to think he was worthless, unlovable.

...Mujhe aur kuch nahi bolna ab (I rambled anyway, excuse me)...but I will cherish this piece Firey, my star. ⭐️ You just, MUST, write such beautiful OS's on MaNan, because you manage to capture their essence so wonderfully - lyrical, tangible, and yet so welcoming, and that warmth that transcends between them ...LOVEEE! Let me sleep on this now...

P.s. And, you add in CabiNi in all of this...How do you do this, Firey?
Edited by nyxx - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
This totally describes MaNan's current situation...
The love, care, hurt, everything messing them up and them needing take these little breaks where they find solace in each and other and gather the strength to go another round.
This OS is an absolute treat to read...
👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Bolt I have adjectives in my head for all my friends on the forum..you took me time...but today it hit me...PERT. your writing is attractive,lively and intuitive.
I loved this OS,this has been your best in terms of character analysis and situation placement. Maniks whole life is a quagmire,it's fraught with such ambivalence both for him and for the audience. We don't understand his relationship with his parents and even with Dhruv it became clear to us recently. Only Nandu can infuse the much needed clarity in his life. I hope the cvs are reading this...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
awww dat was awesome
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
This is awesome dear...loved it...
Hope we get to see these kind of scenes in the show too...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
This is sooo much Love... so much MaNan.. i so want to see this Happening... Shriya you be my love... Perfect read for a Monday morning..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was totally A.W.E.S.O.M.E!!!!!!
If ur planning to make me a fan of urs u've succeded allright!!
I'mmm flllyyyiiinnnggg!!!!
Keep writing ..keep writing..I'm going to stalk ur posts from now on..u asked for it😉
Anywayss jokes apart...that was a beautiful os ! thank u dear!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
It ws so beautiful. Manik's vulnerable side always left me speechless. He is so strong yet so week. He wants sm1 who cn love him unconditionally bt too afraid to seek for that sm1. You hv written everything so beautifully that I dnt knw how to appriciate it.
keep writing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Amazing OS!! Loved it!! Its beautifully written!!

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