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Read it in a go!!
A very diff try, and everyone differs from the char in the show

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hey finally u updated..m damn happy..😃
N update is amzing dear..
finally MaNan ka awesome vala development is der...they both started feeling same..😳
I loved nandu n mukti n her mom thingy..including their family history...
i cracked when i read nandu started eating roses..n she finished those much😆
I even eat but hardly 2 or 3 petals..
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I really really like this FF, you write so well!
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This is lovely... the way theur are getting closer and her little quirks.. beautiful.. .can't wait for more...
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Hello guys!!!
Anyone out there remember me and my little story?I hope someone do, even after disappearing for like ages.Well, I won't bore you guys with the reasons,there were many.When I was free,words sorta deserted me.I knew what I have to write but couldn't.It took me forever to write this chapter down.I hope you guys find it worth reading.
I offer sincere apologies to all the readers for such a long delay.I hope such delays don't stop the story anymore.
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Chapter 14 ( A )

"Cabir effing Sehgal,are you not ashamed of calling yourself the freaking best friend of mine?You knew about this 'do dil mil rhe hai' thing between Manik and Nandini and didn't find me of any importance to inform about it!!!You're such a disappointment in the name of friendship,such a arghh I don't know!!!!"Mukti erupted like a volcano on learning to have been kept away from Cabir's pre gained knowledge of Manik and Nandini's budding chemistry.

" Oh, Best Friend of the Century!!!!Don't give me a lecture on friendship ethics . If you cared awful lot about it,I wouldn't have come to know about Abhimanyu Rathore and your stint with him from Nandini."Cabir silenced Mukti at once.

"Um about that...I..."Mukti couldn't get her ability to form a coherent response into use for a while.

" Now what? Cat got your tongue? You went on a date with him and I am not even aware of his existence."Cabir said, his displeasure evident in his sarcasm filled voice . He was not used to knowing things about Mukti from someone other than herself . When he couldn't reach Mukti last night,he called Nandini to ask about her and was surprised none- too -pleasantly to know she went on a date with a guy . Although Nandini certified the worth of the guy,his protective instincts for his best friend didn't let him get convinced until he speak to Mukti and meet this guy . He picked his car keys to go and meet Mukti, the first thing the next day but found Mukti waiting for him in his living room . He thought she was here to tell him about that guy, but was totally put off to hear her speaking about Manik and Nandini.

" Cabir,it's just that I wanted to be sure of this thing with Abhimanyu . I was attracted to him from day one and as I got to know more of him,my attraction progressed into something more . I was figuring my feelings out and I didn't know how to tell you anything knowing what a potentially precarious blend of overprotective and old school man you can get."Mukti got her defence ready after a moment of blankness.

" "What!!!Old school and overprotective man!!!Mukti I am just looking out for you and I never stopped you from dating anyone . How can you call me old school?" Cabir said exasperated.

" It is the first time I am dating anyone,so there was no chance for you to stop me . Now that I know you're not old school and you're fine with me and Abhimanyu,let's end this fight."Mukti said,for the first time setting out to make peace with Cabir.

" Okay, fight over but make me meet this Abhimanyu guy soon."

"Done . So what were we talking about,yes,Manik and Nandini . How do you know about them and since when?"Mukti steered the conversation back to where it started.

"The way you know . My sharp- as- Sherlock eyes detected the spark between them months back,when even they,themselves weren't aware of what was happening to them . They seem to have a connection which is very substantial and a chemistry which is not very ordinary."Cabir told Mukti,whatever he noticed between the two very dear friends of his.

" There,the great Cabir Sehgal percipience kicks in . I can't believe I missed it for so long . So,what do you think we should do now?"Mukti said excitedly.

" What do we have to do???Let the things be the way they are. "Cabir said shrugging as if it's the most obvious thing.

" But Cabir,you know Nandini.Even if she feels anything,she'll bury her feelings deep inside . She thinks of this dating stuff as some sort of distraction . Manik may also keep his feelings to himself if he doesn't see anything from Nandini's side . You see, we have to intervene."Mukti expressed her concern.

" Mukti,we have to give them time . They have taken the first step . I think I've seen a resigned corroboration of her feelings in Nandini and an amicable one in Manik . Now let them figure their next feat by themselves . If they become stagnant in their course,then only we'll push them ahead."Cabir said.

" I think you're right . We'll be quiet observers, then."Mukti agreed and continued " Cabir,now I'm dating,Manik and Nandini are well on their way . That leaves only you,so why don't we find a girlfriend for you as well?"

"What!!!!No way I'm not dating any girl."Cabir said horrified.

" Not dating any girl!!!Cabir,by any chance,do you want to date a boy?"Mukti asked,her brain streaming with various possibilities.

" No Mukti . How the hell do you come up with such stupid ideas!!!I don't want to date anyone ever."Cabir said gritting his teeth.

" My ideas aren't stupid,they are brilliant . What else would anyone think if you say things like that??Anyways why don't you want to date anyone?"Mukti asked pouting.

" I just don't want to . I'll straight away marry the girl,Ma finds for me whenever she thinks I am suitable for marriage."Cabir stated nonchalantly.
" Are you serious?"Mukti asked,disbelief written all over her face.

"Yes . That's the simplest thing,no jhanjhat no jhanjhal."Cabir said laughing at Mukti's expressions.

" That's why I called you old school."Mukti said with a mock shudder.

"Whatever!!"Cabir said rolling his eyes.

" Well we're practicing today at 11. You said you'll join us and help us with our practice. You're coming,then?Mukti asked.

" Of course I'm coming."Cabir replied.

" Okay,see you then."Mukti bid him bye and left contented after discussing every single thing in her mind with Cabir . The burden of keeping things about Abhimanyu away from him also went away.


Friendship is always a sweet responsibility, never an opportunity.
Khalil Gibran


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Edited by nia07 - 10 years ago
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Chapter 14 ( B)

" Very well done kids, good going! I am impressed with your hard work, dedication and preparation. Now I give you a half hour break as your reward. " Cabir said,standing on a table, melodramatic as ever, drawing a glare from Mukti, a chuckle from Nandini and an eye - roll from Manik.

" Let's go to the garden. My baby tulips are waiting for me out there . Come I'll show you . I bet,you guys have never ever seen cuter things than those!!!"Mukti chatted away excitedly as she led the other three towards the garden after a rigorous two hour music practice under the guidance of Cabir.

"She says the same thing everytime she has new flowers in her garden."Cabir told Manik and Nandini as a matter of fact as they trailed behind a hyperactive Mukti.
All of them made way through the lush green beauty of number of flora including large trees standing gloriously high,small shrubs,even smaller and tender herbs,rows of diverse colourful flowers,each and every plant enriching the visitants with serenity and exhilaration.Admiring the exquisite artistry of nature,the trio stopped behind Mukti with awe-delivering faces . They were mesmerised by the sheer delicacy of burgeoning tulips -red,yellow,purple,orange,pink, white,cream forming a beautiful bed of rainbow on Earth.

" Mesmerizing!!!Aren't they??" Mukti said chirpily and proudly . The three of them noded in ready agreement.

"Mukti,let's click some pictures with these baby tulips of yours,come."Nandini said pulling Mukti amidst the flowers and commanded the boys to take the pictures . The boys shook their head well aware of the girls' obsession of getting clicked every now and then and got to the task.

"Hey Mukti,get me something to eat yar!!I am starving,what a careless host you are!!!"Cabir called Mukti after clicking some pictures,when he accidentally caught a look at Manik's phone only to find him focusing the eight megapixel camera of his iphone only on Nandini with dreamy expressions.

" What is it,Cabir? Since when did you start needing host attending to you in Ahuja mansion!!!"Mukti almost shouted annoyed, walking
towards him . Cabir held her hand and dragged her away before she could say anything further.

"Offo,Mukti, have you sent your brain on vacations??I was calling you to leave Manik and Nandini alone . They may need some time to themselves,don't you think??"Cabir said and winked at her as they reached the kitchen.

" Oh,is that so!!!Wah re mere Cabira,chala di tune toh Manik aur Nandini ki Naiya."Mukti said with a wicked smile taking the apple slices cut by Cabir making him grunt.


Manik was clicking Nandini at different places in different postures and was concurrently engraving every single detail of her in his heart and brain.

" Manik,will you just keep taking my pictures or share one with me too?"Nandini said when she got done with all her poses . Manik smiled and came beside her eager to share the frame with her.
' You're asking for just one picture,I'm up for sharing every picture of my life with you.'He said in his head smiling wide as he put his arms around Nandini's shoulders and clicked a perfect selfi . Nandini stiffened,feeling a familiar jolt run through her body at his touch,the touch which always gives her senses a run for control . His divine smile in the mobile screen had her heart picking up jet speed.Manik's condition was no different . The silken feel of Nandini's skin was doing inexplicable things to him.He felt Nandini stiffen beside him,not for the first time,to know the effect he casts over her . The thought gives his heart a delectable ache and a sense of contentment.The beatitude of their feelings came to an end when Nandini winced in pain . Her finger accidently touched the thorns of a shrub and started bleeding . As Manik saw the blood oozing out of her finger,he instinctively held it and put it in his mouth . Nandini gasped at the contact but was soon lost into the concern filled eyes of the boy who has broken through her fortifications ,her pain vanished into the sweetness of his mouth . As for Manik,his brain seemed to magnify the pain of the girl reigning his heart as he tasted the saltiness of her blood .He,then, looked up to see if she's is feeling too much pain but felt his breath hitch at the look in her eyes which gave a clear gateway to her feelings . The feelings which mirrored his own and his heart swelled with overwhelming joy as it acknowledged the unclouded reciprocation of its owner's mystical feelings . The time stopped for both of them as if they were transported to a timeless and dimensionless haven of their utopia . Their stupor was broken by the vibrations of Manik's phone ringing in his other hand . Nandini pulled her finger back and rubbed it on her top only to wince again.

" Are you okay,Nandini?Is it paining too much?"Manik asked concerned.

" No,I..I'm fine . Don't worry ,erm,g..go ahead with your call."Nandini fumbled trying to bring her body at being normal . Manik nodded and attended the call . Nandini stood their still getting over what just happened berating herself for slipping into her Manik-struck zoneyet again . She has been slipping into this zone more than often since she accepted her amorous feelings for Manik . Not only that,she keeps imagining the same feelings in Manik's temperament . If only she could recognise the palpable existence of the object of her imagination.

" Nandini,are you really okay?You're looking very pale . Are you hurt very bad?"Manik asked still worried about her,his concern taking over his good sense about of a slight cut.

" No Manik,I'm fine . This is just a minor cut . It isn't even bleeding anymore.A little pricking sensation is there though,but it'll go away soon. Few drops of blood loss won't steal my colour,relax!!!"Nandini said to relieve Manik of his useless worries and secretly revelling in them too.

"Okay,fine but you should apply something here,so it doesn't pain . You're a would be doctor,you know better. Come let's go in and do something about it . Mukti must be having a first aid kit . Manik said not really convinced about her being fine and ushered her inside.

"Manik,I don't need a first aid for this slight cut,but if you insist I'll apply some ointment. I've it in my bag." Nandini said shaking her head at his exaggerated concern,as they entered the music room . Manik took ointment from her hands as she fished it out of her bag and started applying it on her finger with utmost care and blew on her cut to relieve it of any remnant sensations of pain or pricking,whatever it was.
That's how Cabir and Mukti found them when they entered the room after they saw the duo coming here . They looked at each other and passed a knowing smile before interupting.

" What happened to your finger,Nandini?"Cabir asked a little concerned noticing nothing alarming, as he along with Mukti walked towards them . Manik released her hand,composed himself a bit and told Cabir and Mukti about her cut and Nandini reassured them that she's absolutely fine . The four of them ended their practice session at late evening after a very productive day.

" Whoa guys,goal achieved . I think we did well for a Sunday . We're ready for our performances with still a week in our hands to get better and better practised . That calls for a party guys,what say! !!"Manik said excited after an amazing day with music and Nandini . All the other three hooted equally excited.

" Let's go dine and hit a dance floor,then . Nandini you've not seen Mumbai 's nightlife yet .So, buckle yourself up for the night fun . We're going to a dance club,right guys???"Mukti practically screamed making the other three close their ears tight.

" Mukti I have to reach hostel by 11 and tomorrow I have to attend college too,not only me,we all have to . So maybe some other time."

"But you can stay with me tonight."Mukti countered

"I don't have warden's permission for today and then there's tomorrow's college too,so..."Nandini trailed off shrugging .Manik and Cabir agreed with her and they decided to have a dinner together.


The day ended on a very pleasant note after a delightful dinner at the Ziya,a dining restaurant at the Oberoi hotel . Cabir and Mukti left together and Manik left with Nandini to drop her off to her hostel ,a thing that had become an integral part of his routine.

" Nandini your finger is fine,now? "Manik asked one more time taking her hand in his to examine ,as he stood out of his car to make sure she's fine before she goes inside.

" Manik,I am really really fine . I don't even feel my finger was cut .You're worrying more than necessary . It's fine."Nandini said taking his hand in both of hers thoroughly touched by this caring disposition of Manik.

" Well,can't help worrying when it comes to my people."Manik replied with his adorable smile making Nandini internally swoon over him.

" Nandini" Their moment was disrupted by a voice which Nandini recognised to be her chachu's and turned around to find him standing outside the hostel,his gaze fixed on their entwined hands .

Love is a force more formidable than any other.It is invisible-it cannot be seen or measured ,yet it is powerful enough to transform you in a moment,and offer you more joy than any other materialistic possession could.
Barbara de angelis

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Hey you actually just disappeared in between, I missed the story, really good update. I love the way you write and I hope we get the next update real soon :D
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Finally u updated, after anlong gap.
never mind, now much excited for upcoming updates.
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continue soon.

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