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Dhariya

@Dhariya_

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#781

Originally posted by: iwantitall

But Dhariya, ups and downs are all a part of life
You never how things will turn out the next minute
Have patience 😃

ok so will have patience

But manik is seiously an idiot...

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Manya

@manya_189

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#782

Oooh this is gonna be interesting!!
Why nit just tell each other exactly hiw they are feeling!
Manik is damn confusing!
Great update btw !!
:)
Continue soon!!

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anika mehjaben nahin

@mehjaben_nahin

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#783

wow just i hate manik here also
people have really succeed to hate manik to me
plz pair up nandini wid smone else
let manik be 😔

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vyshnavivaiga

@vyshnavivaiga

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Posted: 10 years ago

#784

lyk srsly???? camping trip wid aliya???
WTH...
um so annoyed..
continue soon.cant wait.

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#785

You're a sadist mhan Cindu maar daala yaar tune iss update se by god.. Bahut hi achha likha tune specially Nandini's anguish and pain crap it was too good..

Manik is pigheaded and stupid and idiotic and abhi mere Mann main itni gaaliyaan aa rahi hai uss ullu ke patthe ke liye, how could he do that to Nandini??

First he calls their special moments a drunk mistake and then he breaks off with her and goes on a camping trip with his ex oye maar daalungi uss ullu de patthe ko main by god sachhi..

Kab update karegi next update pata nahi please jaldi jaldi karna update pleajjj pleajjj pleajjj??

I lub joo, woh absolute waala total lub far joo..

Love,

Kashmi

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piyu008

@piyu008

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#786

II am angry at manik..but yah it was all of sudden ..so may be he is confused😕

but this was a shock to us..really after that kiss n all..

looking forward ..now it will turn more interesting i think..

Update ASAP😊

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filter.coffee

@filter.coffee

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#787

😔 before you leave you better give me something happy sindhiya!the last line just made my entire day crappy 😔 you better update and update asap before you disappear for days!

tujhe teri harshad ki kasam!

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Arshirox97

@Arshirox97

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#788

I hate Manik for this!
Why always break our fragile Nandu's heart!
Hate him so much!
But nevertheless!! The update was amazing!!!
Waiting for the next one!

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#789

Originally posted by: blah_blah13
😭
Damn
Complicated as usual...this is what irks me about people...they can make the simplest things complicated...and take the nicest things in their life and turn it into shit...sigh...but I guess a personal journey is required...if everything was good then how will you ever grow as a person right?! Vicious and torturous cycle I tell you...I think all of us deep down have a Meena Kumari complex

Damn! You've put in words so beautifully what I wanted to depict with this part. So well penned down. The human mind is a torturous thing, there are so many emotions in one's mind that the other's aren't privy too. And these unsaid words are what causes most of the problems.

Sighhh
Besides my rant about the human behavior...brilliant writing 👏...and it wasn't something dramatic separating them...just confused and insecure teenagers...which is well what they are...I am loving the story progression...as much as all of us love a happy ending..it is important to appreciate things which get us to the happy ending

This is how teenagers are. Most relationships at their age don't even last 🥱
But the few that do last, they're the ones that are the most treasured. 😃

I only have like one issue...please update sooonnn...I love reading your story...it is rare to come across things which make you think!!

Thankyou sooo much 🤗
That is a compliment that means alot to me.
If I can make someone think with a few words, what more could I want 😃
Yes ma'am. I shall update soon

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Meghna Saha

@mirage101

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#790

Okay pehle toh im sooo happy ki tumne reply kiya itne a6ese.first things first i dnt have a thing fr dhruv... (pauses n thinks) okay i do but not as much as manik by vich i mean MANIK!!!!!but yeah dhruv actually is my type but dhruv of ur ff nt ky2 ka dhruv.n im a huge fan of HP azkaban, goblet of fire n deathly hallows r my fav galat emoticon dal diya tha jaldi mein wanted to put 😊.cuming to dis chapter as usual it was grrreattte.chachi ko hamesha sab pata hota hai uh...well almost sab u knw wt i mean.
Coming to MaNan i was like nahi nahi nahi(balaji style)jab woh ek dusre ko tum bol rahe the.loved d guru shishya convo.woh prehistoric bhasha parne mein meko bohot tym lag gaya.kulhari..?snaan ka pani?lol.loved dat kuch kuch hota hai gurujee aap nahi samjhenge.thnk god there was some action varna baba ko toh spelling likh k dena parta.sirjee tussi great ho yaar continue soon
PS:Shame on you Meghna, tum navya ki tareef karna bhul gayi.bas ek cheez bolna hai...#navyarocks #minireginageorge

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