Manik Nandini FF | The Makeover|Ch14 Pg104 - Page 70

Originally posted by: apps33

wooahhh lovely update

Thankyouuu sooo much lovee 🤗

so finally evn manik is falling fo her

n he evn kissed her fo d second tm

He always had a soft spot for her, it just took a dimly lit parking lot and a couple of shots for him to realise that 😆

wowwiieee

m lovin it

it was a brilliant update dear
amazing

cont soon

waiting to kno wat happens nxt

Yes ma'am, aapka hukoom sarakon par 🤗

Originally posted by: iwantitall

Originally posted by: mehjaben_nahin

uff baby cliffy...

Baby cliffy 🤣 I swear there was a dog in my building by that name 🤣

uff kya update tha worth waiting oh my my too awesome

So glad you think it was worth the wait love 🤗

guru-shishaya damn awesome'
cabini talk damn awesome
last kiss damn awesome
sab kuch awesome

Tum bhi full awesome 😃 Super duper wala awesome 😆

Thankyou love 🤗

accha i have a ques did they actually made out u knw na wht i meant

Nandini being completely inexperienced, no, they dint make out.

They just kissed, if you know what I mean.

She has a long way to go 😆

Originally posted by: Arshirox97

Brilliant update!!
Especially the last part!

Originally posted by: blah_blah13

❤️
MISSED YOUR STORY sooo much

and your storytelling ways

Awww 🤗 I missed you tooo!
Your comments are always such a motivater 😃

Loved it!! and thank god you didn't make it overtly dramatic by him not remembering or anything of that sorts...although I do think we have trouble bubbling somewhere on the horizon 😃

Haha, yeah, you always remember some parts and some you don't when you cross a certain level if you're not accustomed to it. 😆

and you're so funny!!

I absolutely adore your sense of humor!!

Gift of the gab 👏

That's so sweeet! Thankyouuu sooo much love 🤗

This means the world to me 😃

Originally posted by: drnidsur

wow ! ur back with such an amazing update

You're so sweeet! I have never been happier to do something productive

(Trust me, I'm the laziest person alive 🤣)

There was something so charming about him when he was with me tonight." Nandini continued like there had been no interruption. "And his eyes, you should have seen that look in his eyes." Nandini looked dreamily out the window.

i loved these lines , the way she described his intensity and even the next lines when cabir questions abt her feelings ; her crush on him ever since . it was awesome

Those moments when there's but you and that special someone, that intimate moment, it can't be described. It's something that will always make you blush, something that you will remember when you look back at your life. These moments are what make life worth living. Nandini had one of those special moments that night. She is going to remember it for a lifetime. 😊

trust me , i think till the end , my every comment will have this ...ur sense of humor is damn awesome , i love it to the core ..trust me cindy(i hope i m not wrong) u must be a damn amazing bindass gal , seeing these amzing lines that u wrote , i loved 'em

That's so sweeet! And as always, I'm going to again say, you give me too much credit.

I'm not that great 😆 I do hope I'm as awesome as you just said. But that aside, let's just say, main apni favourite hoon 😆

and the sigh! the second kiss

the cliffhanger ...

Hahaha! Patience bachhe! 🤣 You shall have a part where I wont leave it as a cliff hanger.

But there's still time for that 😆

anyway continue soon , i love ur story too much to not follow , so can i pls get pm's ...😳

-nidhi

Yes ma'am. I shall update real soon againn 😃

For PMs, like the post below the update and add me to your buddy list 😃

Thankyou sooo much again love 🤗

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Whhhuuu...You updated...!!!!

OMG! Yes. 😎 I'm too awesome no? 😆

I missed your MaNan...They are so funny and so cute... And your sense of humor...Kamal hai...🤣

They're perfection. Cute and adorable

And the age that they're going through adds its own special charm to the story

There's an innocence at that age that you dont see alot later on in life 😃

Plz, update soon, I can't wait for the next part...!!! 😳

Thankyou sooo much love 🤗

I shall update ek dum sooon 😆