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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: apps33

I M LUVIN UA FF

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plzz update soon


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pooh2015

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: urvisaini

hi dear

just came across this ff

its unique and way too different from the regular ones...

i loved it

pls add me to the pm list

continue soon


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Posted: 10 years ago
Ur story is really hatke
Loved all the parts
Plz update jaldi se 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: dora1234

Ur story is really hatke
Loved all the parts
Plz update jaldi se 😊


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Chapter 5

The worst was over.

Yes.

Nandini's worst fear, when she had heard the headmistress tell her that she was suspended, had been how her parents would react when she would tell them about her suspension.

She had prepared herself for anger, screaming, maybe even getting grounded. But they had surprised her.

When she had recited the entire story to her parents, they had been understanding and comforting to her plight. Even better? They took her out to dinner to take her mind off of it.

The fact that her parents were so patient with her irrespective of situation had always helped her in ways they never could understand.

And all thanks to them, that night she slept much better than she normally did and woke up fresh and happy the next morning.

"Good morning Nini" Her mother greeted her by her favorite pet name as she walked in for breakfast.

"Good morning amma" Nandini hugged her mother from behind.

"How are we today?"

"Good. No wait. Perfect is what I meant!"

"You're actually enjoying this suspension thing, aren't you?"

"Sshhh amma. Appa sun lenge!" Nandini giggled as her mother flipped the omelette she was making.

"Have you brushed beta?"

"Yes amma. I know the rule, no food if no clean."

"Good. Can you do me a favour?" Her mom gave her the pity eyes.

"Yes amma. Bolo?" Nandini gave a resigned sigh. This would obviously involve getting out of the house, her mother used her pity eye weakness very smartly.

"Go to the Diary nearby and get some Amul ka milk na?"

"Yes amma. Niniman on her way" Nandini laughed as she quickly ran into her room and grabbed her favorite red sweatshirt to wear with her grey shorts before she ran out to the shop which was a brisk walk of ten minutes.

***

"Bahut bhook lag rahi hai yaar." Manik said as he passed the basketball he had in his hand to Cabir.

"Itna toh thoosa tha tune abhi mere ghar pe. Already bhook lag rahi hai?" Cabir laughed as he passed the ball onto Harshad.

"Exactly.Bhukkad kahinka" Harshad added as he passed the ball onto Dhruv.

Dhruv who was least interested in the conversation simply responded with "I wonder bus kidhar pahuchi hai abhi"

Manik turned around and leaned back on the street lamp as he squinted ahead at the road to see whether the kids who got on on the bus stop ahead were still waiting there.

As he was squinting, he felt a vibration in his pocket. There was a message from Navya, the girl who got in on the next bus stop. The only reason they spoke was to make sure they hadn't missed the bus.

"Has the bus crossed your bus stop?" it said.

"Nope. And yours?" Manik added.

"Very funny. Text when the bus crosses."

"No" Manik replied with a sly smile on his face.

"Please?"

"Whatever. Boo"

"Boo yeah"

"Not even going to bother responding to that."

"I heard there was a lot of drama in the bus yesterday. Target?"

"Nandu."

"I always bunk school on the wrong days. Can you do the whole thing again for me today on a different target?"

"Do I look like a circus clown to you?"

"Just a little bit."

"Bus is here." Manik texted back as he turned to the corner of the road waiting to see a curious Navya who always came to check whether he had been lying or being truthful.

But to his surprise, instead of Navya, he saw Nandini walking towards them in a sweatshirt and shorts, her attention on her i-Pod.

"ISKA UNIFORM KIDHAR HAI BHAI?" Harshad screamed from behind him, this time Nandini noticed.

She glared at each one of them for ten seconds before she turned back to her i-Pod.

At first Manik thought, she was walking towards them, but then she abruptly stopped a few meters away from them near the Diary.

"Manik?" Manik turned around to see Harshad holding out the ball for him. "Do you want to do the honors or should I?" Manik stared at Harshad unsure for a moment before he left the scene of crime to join Dhruv near the edge of the footpath. Harshad, taking this as his cue, aimed the ball carefully and threw it at Nandini, the ball hit her squarely between her eyes.

The moment of impact was caught by Nandini's scream.

There was a dirty loud laughter which imparted from Harshad as he watched Nandini glare at him in anger.

What happened next, happened as if in a slow motion in front of Manik's eyes.

Nandini picked up the ball, shifted her weight towards the back as if readying herself for a deadly hit before she threw the ball in full force at Harshad's face, at which point Manik swore he heard a slight crack before he saw Harshad drop down to his knees, his hands covering what seemed to be a broken nose.

Manik was just getting over the shock of what he had just seen when he felt two tiny hands seize him by the collar and pin him on the ground as suddenly a heavy weight kept him steadily stuck to the ground.

"Agar iske baad, tumne ya tumhara kisi bhi dost ne mujhe tang karne ki koshish ki, toh there will be repercussions, you cheap shit." Nandini screamed at Manik while having seated herself firmly on his thighs.

"I'm so turned on right now." Manik found himself saying.

Embarrassed, Nandini hit him across the face in response before she got off of him and left the scene in a hurry to avoid the laughter that echoed off of the perverted fivesome.

There was loud cheering for Manik as everyone congratulated him for coming up with that amazing come back to embarrass her when she was coming at him so strongly.

Manik hid his blazing red face, pretending to look in the other direction as he kick boxed himself internally for saying that last line out aloud.

***


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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice!
pls yaar update soon..
waiting eagerly..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hy i read your ff its different from other
awsme loved it continues soon plz PM me when you update 👏

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