Manan FF part 15 (pg18) - Page 9

Originally posted by: aavani

beautiful...

Again amazingly written👏👏👏
Please update soon😊 m waiting😛

Originally posted by: akiraroy

Again amazingly written👏👏👏
Please update soon😊 m waiting😛

Part 15

Recap : Manan gifted each other. Manan took bath together.
He grabs her and places her in the bed.

Manik : U look so hot in my shirt.

When you came into my world you took my breath away,
I'd watch your little face for hours while beside me you did lay,
Your hands your toes, the way you scrunched your eyes,
There's just not one thing about you that I can't love,

You are a little angel that God has sent to me,
You give me smile when I'm sad,
You've such a gentle nature, your heart is full of love,
To be blessed by you in my side is more then I ever dreamed of,

We have our special moments,
For a while it seems the world has stopped,
And all that's real is me and you,
I'm the oyster in the ocean, and you're my shiny pearl,

Everything about you is perfection from above,
Your one of life's few miracles made entirely of love,
So darling, if you ever see me gazing while you play,
It's because I love you so very much, in each and every way.

Nandini : Wow amazing words, my love. Now my turn :

I wake to the touch of a morning sun,
Softly teasing my eyes apart.
I feel your arms tighten around
Sealing yet another

Non existent space...
I turn around to face you
Feeling blessed for the millionth time.
I stare at your sleeping self

Murmuring a silent prayer of thanks...
At a dark dark time you were sent to me
To shed some light on my weakening being.
I held on tight to you secure hands

As you pulled me out of a painful mess...
I found the smile I thought I had lost
I found love so serene and pure
I found your eyes so full of care

As it healed so well my bruised soul..
I kiss your brow slow and soft
Anxious not to wake you up...
Tears form spelling my love

I see your eyes open up
Just as a drop runs down my cheek
I feel your hands brushing it off...
That I know is the art of love

I was gifted with
And eternally crowned...

Manik : Beautiful like u.

She puts her head on his chest : I hope our night will etch in my mind forever. I hope I will be prefect for ur desires. U know Manik before I met I never think that I will be so happy in someone arms. U make me feel like a moon in middle of stars. In front of ur eyes, I feel all my shyness flew.

( I am not so romantic sorry, so imagine by urself).

Give me ur feedback. Love u all.

😊 beautiful...
continue soon...

dear..where' s update...its really late...

read all parts in 1 go.. awsm plz continue

i read all the 15 chapz altogether..
itz gud..
i was abt to comment on manikz elbow being fractured.. but uh only mentioned it..
i hope abhi is not a cancer patient in ur story..
all the couplez r so happy..
m blushing.. heheheh.. nandini bcm so bold.. wow..
plz continue asap..

Well the update is good and so is the story.. But please improvise ua English