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Posted: 10 years ago
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😊 awsome part...😊
pls update the next part soon...😊

Its good to see that finally navya has got her brain back...wow...😊

continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4

Inspector drop them to the hospital.
Nandini notices that Navya doesn't cry after Harshad's arrestation.
Mukti sees her :
What are u doing here ? You come here to finish ur Harshad ji plan.
Navya stays mute.
Mukti grabs her : I swear if you don't go in five minutes, I am going to bad with you.
Nandini : Stop it Mukti.
Mukti : Oh I don't care if she is ur friend because of her man our Manik is devasted. She is too selfish like Harshad. What is the difference between them ? Nothing
Nandini : You are wrong, she didn't think twice to give Harshad to the police. Maybe it's me who calls the police but it's her who proctect us. She is sad but not have a one tear. She loves him more than anyone but still forget her love and make him arrest.
Navya : I will go to Manik.
She enters in his room.
Mukti : I never imagine that she can do that. I am sorry.
Nandini : I am afraid for her kyu ki she doesn't let her pain out.

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Manik : Navya tuk ya haa ? Oh it's Harshad who send you to see if I am dead.
Navya touches his foot.
Manik shouts : Navya tum kya karihoo ?
Nandini enters and sees his Navya holding Manik's foot.
Navvya : Mudje mafkardo.
Manik : For what ?
Navya : For my bewakoofi, I never see his truth face. When everyone calls me fool, I never understand why but today I realize that they are right.
Manik : What happened ?
Navya : Maybe it's Harshad he hurts you but I never convince not to hurt you. So I am too a culprit for ur situation. If you have a big heart can you forgive me ?
Manik : Dekho Navya, I am feeling bad to see you like that. But I swear you are not responsabile for his acts.
Navya : You can try to convince but it is not use.
Manik : Come beside me.
Navya slowly approaches him.
Manik : You know I don't have any sibblings. Even if I have all fab5 in my side, it's a lack to not have bro or sis. When I see ur face in tears I don't know why but it's hurt me also to see ur pain. So, will you accept me to be my sister ?
Navya : Kya ??? I am your sister. I always think you are a monster but such mai you are a good insane. And which girl will be ur wife is very lucky.
She turns herself toward Nandini.
Manik teasing : I know but you have to find this girl for me sis.
Nandini : What ? So who I am for u ?
Manik : My friend sister.
Nandini : Majak maat karna.
Manik : But it's truth Nandini I don't have any officially girlfriend !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😊 wow...manik & navya...bro &sis wow...😊

awsome update ...continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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that is such a cute update. pls post the next part soon. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice cute but i don't think manik will make navya her sis he'll only protect her for nandani
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice ... Navya Manik's sister and I love the way Manik teased Nandini... Update soon:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 5


Navya feels very strange : I have to go to the toilet.
She runs.
Nandini : Usko kya hogaya ?
Manik : Go and chek her.
Nandini leaves the place.

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Nandini : What happened ?
Navya : Nandini I come outside wait.
She cleans herself and come.
Navya : I want to vomit.
Nandini : Oh !
Nandini makes Navya sits in chair with Fab 5.
Nandini : Navya stay here I will search for u a lemon tea.
She enters in cafeteria and ask a tea.
Dhruv runs to her.
Nandini : Kya waa ?
Dhruv : Woh Navya faints.
Nandini : Kya ?
Dhruv : Haan.
They comes. They see Navya in Kabir's hand.
Kabir yells : Doctor come fast.
Nandini approaches her.
Nurse asks him to put her on the armchair.
Kabir follows them with Nandini.
Nurse : You can't enter with a girl patient so please wait in front of the door. Likin app cheliyai uske saath.
Kabir holds Nandini's hand.
Nandini : If something is urgent I will call you.
She enters but didn't lock the door very well.
Nurse checks her pulse.
Nurse : She has a boyfriend.
Nandini : She had but why this question ?
Nurse : She is pregnant.
Nandini : What ?????? No way !!!!!!!!
Nurse : It's truth but she can abort the child.
Nandini : Oh my god !
Nurse quits the room.
Kabir enters and sees Nandini's tears.
Kabir : I heard everything Nandini.
Nandini hugs him : Oh shit how can she support this news ? How can I say to her ?
Kabir : But you have to do Nandini.
Navya : Not necessary I listened.
Navya : I can't abort Nandini. I have to speak with Harshad.
Kabir : Tum pagal hoo kya ? He is a psycho. How do u think he will accept ur child.
Navya : Because it's not only mine.
Navya stands up.
Kabir : Not now after u will get better.
Navya : If you want you can come with me.
Nandini : No, I will accompagn you.
Navya : No stay with my bro here he needs you.
She goes with Kabir.

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Nandini comes to Manik.
Manik with a big smile : Where is my sis ?
Nandini stays mute with tears.
Manik : Nandu kya waa ?
Nandini : She is pregnant.
Manik : Kon ???
Nandini : Navya.
Manik : What but kaise ? Who is the coward ?
Nandini : Harshad.
Manik : Oh no ! Where is she now ?
Nandini : In police station with Kabir.
Manik : But why ?
Nandini : To announce this news to Harshad.
Manik : Why u let her ? You think he will accept her child.
Nandini : No I know but she wants to try.
Manik : He will say no and she will break once more time.
Manik sees his Nandu in tears.
Manik : Come mere pass.
Nandini sits beside him.
He just grabs her with his left hand.
Manik : All will be fine mai huna.
Nandini : I can't see her in pain.
Manik : I know but we have support her.
Manik kisses in her hair.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww that's really bad poor Navya... But like Cabir he is gem :) update soon:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 6


Kabir and Navya arrive in police station.
Navya : Kabir just stay here.
Kabir : Likin he is mad and I can't take any risk.
Navya : Ok done. Tumare phone do mudje.
Kabir : Kyu ?
Navya : Bas do naa, you will understand.
He gives the phone. She dialls her number in his phone.
Navya : Dekho Kabir we are in conversation. So you will listen Harshad words. Ok.
She is about to enter. But holds her hand :
Be careful and best of luck.
She goes and comes in front of Harshad.
Harshad : How dare you to come here ?
Navya : Shut up ok, I just come here to inform you about my condition.
Harshad ; I don't care about you.
Navya : I know but what about your heir ?
Harshad : What do u mean by my heir ?
Navya : I thought you have little knowledge but no ! I carry your child.
Harshad laughs : Wow nice joke ! Just go and follow treatment pagal.
Navya takes out medical report. She puts the report in front of him.
Harshad : I am not responsible for that.
Navya : What do u mean ?
Harshad : I am not the father.
Navya : What !!!!!! Toh kon hai ??
Harshad : How I can say ? You know about it with how many boys u had intimacy ??!
Navya can't bear his accusation.
Kabir : Kabardar if you say one more word.
Harshad : Oh Navya's hero haa gaya.
Kabir : How do u so cheap Harshad ? See she has ur baby in her belly and u speak like that.
Harshad : I don't speak with a gay. Why u defend her because it's ur child ?
Kabir : Tameez se baath karo. She always defend you. Her love is pure .
Harshad : I don't care.
Kabir sees Navya's sad face.
Kabir : Ok give her right and I will take the complain back.
Harshad : Really ? You will do that for her.
Kabir : Yes not only for her but also for this child.
Kabir is about to call the inspector. But Navya interrupts him :
Let's go Kabir.
Kabir : But ur child ?
Navya : I will be his mom and dad.
Harshad : Don't make ur drama.
Navya : he uses us to come out and I can't let him.
She takes Kabir's hand and comes outside.

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Nandini feeds Manik a soup.
Manik takes the spoons and gives soup also to Nandini.
Manik : So when will u propose me ?
Nandini : Excuse me Manik Malhotra u have to propose and in a beautiful way !!!
Manik : Why not u ?
Nandini : Because I am girl.
Manik : Toh Kya?
Nandini : I am waiting long time for ur proposal.
Manik : Me too and I promise I Will propose u.
Nandini takes a tissue and clean him.
Manik : Why in hospital there are no alcohol?
Nandini : Shi! Manik...
Manik : If u drunk u are an another Nandini who is more relaxed.
Nandini : Because now I am what?
Manik : A shying girl. When u are drunk u are more romantic just remember Raghav's birthday party.
Nandini : Stop it Manik. Wait and watch how I will show u my love. U will mesmerized.
Manik : U can't
Nandini : I can.
Someone knocks.
Manik : Come
It's Kabir and Navya.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice waiting to see nandani's praposal
wow strong navya
continue soon

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