MaNan One Shot - Walking To The Mirror. - Page 3

Originally posted by: crystalfairy95

That was really beautifull!!!!👏👏👏

Loved it ...

Keep writing dear!!!!

Originally posted by: Sush94

reswa

Originally posted by: Sush94

She holds me within her embrace, lets her security overwhelm me. She tells me with her touch that she is there for me always, that I need not to be scared of this world anymore, that she will always look out for me no matter what. With her touch she takes away every single moment of agony that I felt without her. With her touch she takes away all the darkness within. With her touch she takes away all the doubt of my affection. With her touch she takes away all the guilt that consumes me. With her touch she takes away a part of me.

I couldn't get over these words... I read them more times than I read the OS to be honest. Because the visual in my mind was so beautiful I didn't want to let it go. It felt like i was reading and seeing how two souls intertwine themselves together. Hayyye, Thank you so much!😳 I don't think, it's all that good though 😳

Flamey, you have a way with words that can make anybody's insides melt. The scene that you wrote this OS for became so much beautiful for me after reading this. His pain,his confusion and in all that his need for her to hold him close. Everything was written so beautifully. You people keep on telling me that and I be keeping on wondering when did this happened? I ain't that good with words. You have Genie, Shiza, Rida, Mais, Adhi, Wish, Medha, BI and people on forum so much better than me😳

In case you haven't caught on yet, I loved it. I have said this before, and i'll say it again. I hope I can learn something from your writing and incorporate those into mine.

Lots of love,

Sush

Originally posted by: medha16

reswa

unres afterd epi wokay?

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U captured the essence of Manik so perfectly...those words were beautiful! Thankieee😳

I actually LOLed at the control and self-control bit...so true! 😛The guy can control everything around him, even the amount of tears that Nandini sheds but he can't seem to control the involuntary urge of being close to her. She has so deeply entrenched herself within him, tat without her, he is lost and confused and directionless. he is like this lost child, in dark, who is out there looking for some kind of help. Someone who might just guide him, show him light and when someone showed him, he ran after them. he want to hold that person all to himself. he wants to be with that person who can make him meet himself.

He looks out for her, protects her, cannot tolerate anyone else being close to her yet his darned misplace guilt stops him from taking that final step and that's where she comes in and succeeds. For all his power, charisma, arrogance - it is just her who can look through it all and discern the real Manik who yearns to love and be loved the same way.

And u portrayed that dilemma of Manik so wonderfully.😃

Originally posted by: _ARIANA_

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This is the first time I'm reading your OS btw!
n I swear to god that you're so talented!
I loved this OS not coz it' written on Monster, coz it's actually worth reading!

-Ariana