Manik-Nandini OS : Her Tears; His Friendship (Based on 16/11 Precap)

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Beautiful... if only Dhruv has a similar reaction on screen! 😃

Please write and post more FFs!😉

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Shru

@funkylicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: navi04vet
I really hope it happens...

Well we could only hope that dear.

Originally posted by: zohasad2.0
meri behan...res for now

Haha sure lekin don't forget to unres it 😆

Originally posted by: kittu431
this was very much needed...i wish this happens!!!!!

You're right we could only wish this to happen. But I don't think this will happen.😆

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Shru

@funkylicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Ireena7
awww...it's too much sweet and cute OS...and finally Nandu said " I Love U" 😃

really a nice one 👏

Thank you so much dear, I'm glad you liked it.😳

Originally posted by: TheBlueAngel
Aww Shru dat was beautiful..Show mein 'I Love You' mile na mile kam se kam yahaan toh mila..

Thank you😳 for the encouragement. Glad you liked it😳

Haha sure lekin don't forget to unres it 😆

Originally posted by: nicky13
Nice

Thank you dear😊

Originally posted by: kritu17krits
awww dsts amazing

Thank you dear😳

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Shru

@funkylicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Viji.Chandran
nice os

hope it comes true...

Thank you dear. Yes me too hoping this to happen😳

Originally posted by: Rekha85
beautiful!!!!
I hope this happens!!!!

Thank you😳

Originally posted by: Arshirox97
Awww!! Cute! Dhruv was so understanding unlike the reality dumbness!!

Haha Glad you liked it. Btw I think you're the first person I saw called Dhruv Dumb😆

Originally posted by: nadiafarjana
Amazing os

An Amazing Thank you to you😳

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Shru

@funkylicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: apardh_ba
wishful thinking. lovely os. love d ending finally in ur os atleast our manan is reunite.

Aww.. Thankyou. am so glad you liked it 😳

Originally posted by: RomComFan
Beautiful... if only Dhruv has a similar reaction on screen! 😃

Please write and post more FFs!😉

Hey thanks dear, so glad you liked it. Ff's I will think of writing it. Thanks for the encouragement😳

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Shru

@funkylicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: firefly..
First of all toh I'm sorry for as always being late, you know how lazy I'm 😃 & Oh yes yes u absolutely stood beyond expectation, not only this time but always you do, & I can say this infinite times without being tired that you are a super amazing writer.👏👏

The way you put hold on their emotions, Manik's failed attempt to self control, Nandini's pain & at the end Dhruv's heartbreak but yet keeping control to his heart, everything are commendable. 👏👏👏 This OS can't be better than the way I thaught. You perfectly penned it down how I wished for. Thanks for always fulfilling my demand 😳😳 love you 🤗

P.S. congo for being a sizzler

P.P.S. start a FF or SS on MaNan please, pretty please!! 😳

P.P.P.S. missed out your poem for a long. Try write something poetic 😊

Love,

Your ever demanding sister Sree(Sardi) 🤗😆

Hahah first of all you're not late yaar.😆 Lazy is my middle name😛😆
Yaar now I really doubt that you own a butter shop.😆 but on the other side, I'm just happy to write for you😳 sachi.

Am very happy that you loved it, and thanks for the appreciation. I'm flattered by your comments all the time😳

P.S. Thank you.

P.P.S FF or SS you know na mai atak jati hu I mean I loose interest but I'll try to write it out before I start it😆 If you know what I mean😛

P.P.P.S POEM😆 I lost touch in writing them but will try it for sure😉

Love Shru🤗🤗

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Shru

@funkylicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: nits_viratholic
awww so sweet 😊

Thank you dear😳

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: funkylicious
Hahah first of all you're not late yaar.😆 Lazy is my middle name😛😆
Yaar now I really doubt that you own a butter shop.😆 but on the other side, I'm just happy to write for you😳 sachi.

Am very happy that you loved it, and thanks for the appreciation. I'm flattered by your comments all the time😳

P.S. Thank you.

P.P.S FF or SS you know na mai atak jati hu I mean I loose interest but I'll try to write it out before I start it😆 If you know what I mean😛

P.P.P.S POEM😆 I lost touch in writing them but will try it for sure😉

Love Shru🤗🤗

For now no I'm not owning a butter shop but may be can own one in future 😆😆

@colored part yeah yeah I know, we know each other this much right?? 😉

Anyway thanks again for writing it & I'm waiting for your FF/SS to be started. 😊

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xox.iloveyou

@xox.iloveyou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

AWWWEEE; this is mad adorable<3 wishing something like that actually happens...but imagine; all that in one night lol, literally too much to handle 😆

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Daff

@Daff

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Honestly, this was soo cute!! Thank you for posting!! And I absolutely agree with everyone else, I really hope this happens!! I can see the first part of your story happening but the CVs won't let "I love you" happen for awhile...they want to keep us hooked!!!😳

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