New FF|| Tere Hoke Rahenge|| Part 2 Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello guys i am huda...and i am starting a new MaNan FF.. called Tere Hoke Rahenge...I hope you all like it..

"Bhaiii...aap kya kar rahe ho? Itna late hogaya hai aapko...aapke boss ki birthday hai aur aapne hi bol tha ki unhe punctuality bohot pasand hai.. 8 baje ki party thi and its 8:30" Nandini said...

"Nandu...meri pyaari si behen...aaj mein apne boss ki nahi apne friend ki party par jaa raha hu...you know he is my boss cum friend..so..chalta hai..use pata hai ki mein humesha late hota hoon...college mein usne bohot dekha hai.." Cabir said..

"Acha baba..but bhai itna bhi late nahi hona chahiye...its not good now go.."

Voice from TV- "Humein abhi soochna mili hai ki Mumbai ke Andheri(east) ilakhe mein ek jawaan larki ki kidnapping huyi hai...yeh hatsa kareeb kal raat 10 baje ke aas paas hua tha..jab who larki ghar mein akeli thi..isliye agar aapke ghar mein koi jawan larki hai use 9 baje ke baad ghar mein akela na chore kyunki shayad yeh kidnappers aur larkiyon ko kidnap karne ki soch rahe hai.."

"What the hell...Andheri east mein hi..woh toh humare ghar ke itne paas hai...Nandu I Can't leave you and go.." Cabir Said

"Bhai...aaj news aayi hai does not mean ki mein kidnap ho jaungi...you should not miss the party..aapke bohot ache friend ki party hai..I will be fine..you don't worry.."

He shouted, "Maine ek baar bola toh bol diya...mujhe koi chances nahi lene specially tujhe lekar...you know how much I love you right?"

"But bhai...I don't want you to miss the party..."

Cabir kept his hand on her head..

"My baby...I know you want me to go...par is that party more important than you...you're the most precious jewel of mine...actually if you want me to go there is one way...you come with me.."

"But bhai..mein udhar aake kya karungi? I don't even know anyone over there..and I am not even invited..and what if your boss does not like me coming there?"

"Stupid...meine tujhe bahi kaha na ki mein apne friend ki party mein jaa raha hu...aur agar teri safety ki baat hai..toh koi kyu mind karega...who strict zarur hai par heartless nahi...dekh you have a choice either u come with me or I stay at home with you.."

"Ok bhai..mein ready hokar aati hu.."

Nandini wore a long black gown..with sequence on it..

Nandini and Cabir left for the party...

In the car..

"Bhai..you sure na he won't mind? I don't want you to fall in any trouble..."

"Arrey Nandu baby..jab mein bol raha hu..toh why are you asking me again and again..abhi ek aur baar poocha...toh mein khud tumhe kidnappers ko deke aaunga.."

They both laughed...

After a short drive they reached the venue..

Nandini got out of the car and was awe-struck.. "Bhai this place is so beautiful..itna bada ghar...its like a palace..aise lag raha hai ki I am a princess...aur is palace ke andar mujhe apna prince charming mil jayega.."

"Mil jayega..koi na koi prince charming mil jaayega...and I literally mean prince...because yeh jo mera friend hai he comes from the royal family of Jaipur..they just shifted to Mumbai 4 years back..because idhar who log ka business empire better work kar sakta hai...so baby..lets go.." Cabir said..

"Invitation?" the guard asked Cabir..

"haan" Cabir said and showed him the invite..

"Par yeh to sirf ek insaan ka hai...jo aap lagte hai yeh dusri larki kaun hai?' Guard asked

"Who..yeh meri behen hai mere saath hi aayi hai..."

"Sorry sir..yeh chote malik ka hukum hai ki sirf who hi andar aa sake jiske naam ka invite ho..aur koi nahi..aap jaa sakte ho par yeh larki nahi.."

"Dekhiye who mere saath aayi hai...aur apko pata nahi hoga mein aapke chote hukum ko personally bohot ache se jaanta hu...aap unhe bulaiye.."

"Sorry sir..hum unhe nahi bula sakte...andar unhe disturb karna mana hai.."

"Bhai..I told you na that something like this would happen...I think I should leave.." Nandu said

"No Nandu..wait..oh look there Mukti..uski behen..wait a minute.. Muktiii..!! Muktii!!" Cabir called

A girl dressed ina a short white dress turned..she had long black locks...and was so beautiful to make anyone flatter..

"Cubby...Wassup...? Tu idhar kyu khara hai..whats the matter?" Mukti asked

"Yo Mickey..actually na news channel chal raha tha and I got that kidnapping wala news tune suna hi hoga...so I did not want to keep Nandu..my sister alone...so I got her along I hope you don't mind.." Cabir said..

"Why would I mind...yeh uske safety ki baat hai..infact you did a great thing...Hi Nandini..I am Mukti..tumhare bhai ki best friend...aur iske boss ki behen...nd trust me yeh jo tumhara bhai he talks a lot about you.." Mukti said..

"Hi Mukti...Nice to meet you..nd Thank you.." Nandini said with a smile..

"Thank you ki koi baat hi nahi hai...anyways Cubby..bhai is waiting for you since long...tu kabhi toh time par aajaya kar.."Mukti said

Nandini laughed... Cabir looked towards Nandini.. "Stop laughing Nandu.."

They went in.

And...there stood the ever so dashing...ever so charming..man..Prince Manik Raizada...dressed in a black suit and a red shirt...every girl who entered noticed him the first... hot,handsome,stunning all would be less for him..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting start<3
looking forward to it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"Raizada" loved ur ff already. cnt w8 to read more. And u hv made cabir nandu's bro that so cool. And mukti is manik's sister. nice concept. w8ng for the prince to meet his princess.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it awesome..will be waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting.. can't wait to see where this goes!😉
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Awesome, first you made Cabir Nandu's brother and then Manik RAIZADA. Can't wait to read more, looking forward to Manik and Nandu meeting. And Mukti seems so cool and sweet here hope my prince is nice too. Love their nicknames for each other, Cubby and Mickey. 😛 Please continue soon.
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Cabir called out to Manik... "Manik!!" Manik waved back to him.. "Happy Birthday dude.." "Thanks buddy.." Manik gazed towards Nandini..and looked back at Cabir as if he was asking him who she was.. "Woh Manik...she's my sister...you know the kidnapping news na..soo.." Cabir said.. "Oh...good..aapne acha kiya ise laakar.."

"Hello..Manik Raizada.." Manik said loking towards Nandini..she smiled and replied "Nandini.." Manik said, "Aaplog enjoy kariye party ko..hum aate hai.." Manik left from there.. After a moment Nandini asked.. "Mukti..tum nahi gayi. ho Manik ke saath?" Mukti look confused.. "Mein? Mein bhai ke saath kyun jaungi..unhe kuch kaam hoga.." "But abhi toh unhone bola ki hum' aate hai aise thori bola ke mein' aata hu..matlab toh ek se zyaada log na.." Mukti and Cabir lauughed.. "Kya hua bhai? Maine kuch galat bola kya..?" Mukti said still laughing.. "Actually no..tumne kuch galat nahi bola..bhai hi galat baat karte hai..igdam Rajasthani king ki tarah..ab kya kare khoon hi aisa hai..." ...and then Manik came back again.. "Kya hua? Mukti..Cabir? Aap dono hans kyu rahe ho?" Manik asked.. They still could not stop..there was nothing funny now..but as you say once you start laughing stopping is tough.. "Aap dono bas karenge please...yeh kya behudgi se itni zor se hans rahe hai...humne koi joke maara hai kya? ...Nandini kya aapko pata hai yeh dono aise kyu hans rahe hai?" "Woh tum apne aap ko mein nahi hum bolte ho aur tum ko aap bolte ho.." Nandini replied speaking very hastily.. "Hum..aap...kya bol rahi hai aap..?" Manik raised his voice and said.. Nandini got a bit tensed and said, "Kuch nahi.." Manik said, "Aap teeno ka dimag kharab ho chuka hai.." Manik said and left..

"Kya bhai..mukti? Aap itna has kyu rahe ho..there is nothing funny...unhe kitna bura laga hoga.." Nandini said.. Mukti and Cabir stopped laughing..

After some time...Nandini was sitting and thinking , "Mujhe Bhai aur Mukti ki taraf se Manik ko sorry bol dena chahiye...jab koi aapke saamne itna hasta hai aur chup hota hi nahi hai aur reason bhi nahi batata hai bohot weird feel hota hai..I think I should say sorry.." Nandini went on to quest Manik..

Manik was walking when a waiter dropped juice on him bymistake.. "Aap dekhkar nahi chal sakte..? Humari poori shirt bigar di.." Manik screamt at the waiter "Sorry sir...galti hogayi.." "Theek hai tum jao.." Manik went to his room to change his shirt..

Nandini...was exploring the whole house..but it was so big that she got lost.. she said to herself.. "Yeh mein kahan aagayi?..shit...yeh ghar itna bara hai...ein toh ghoom gayi.." Nandini then saw a room with light..she went inside.. and got a big shock,...

Manik was shirtless inside... she screamt.. "Aaa..!" Manik covered her mouth with his hand.. "Chup!.." he left her.. "Aap yahan kya kar rahi hai..yeh humara kamra hai...aane se pehle knock toh karna chahiye..." Nandini closed her eyes and said.. "Who na hum aapko hi dhoond rahe the but then I got lost and mujhe yeh room dikha with light so I thought andar koi hoga so I came in..mujhe nahi pata tha yeh aapka kamra hai.." She opened her eyes to see if he changed.. "I am ss..6 packs.." Manik looked at her in anger.. "I mean I am sorry..yeh baat ke liye bhi aur jo bhai has rahe the unke liye bhi actually they did not mean to ignore you or something..but..actually tumhe shayad pata hi hoga jab hanste hai toh hansi band karna aasan nahi hai...I just wanted to say..that I am sorry..." Manik was very furious.. "Aap kitna baat karti hai...band hi nahi hoti hai...agar itna time aapke liye bas tha yeh realise karne ke liye ki meine shirt nahi pehni hai and you are supposed to go...so please...if you would please do the honours..." "Oh shit...mein toh bhul gayi iske baare mein...I am sorry..mein jaa rahi hu.." "You should.." Nandini leaves..

Nandini talks to herself , "Ise toh bohot gussa aata hai...kya who sabke saath aise hi rehta hai? Pata nahi bhai ise kaise jhelte hoge...khalnayak.."

At the same time even Manik is talking to himself , "Yeh kitna bolti hai...kya hamesha itna bak bak karti hai..? Pata nahi cabir inko kaisi jhelte hoge...chaparchapar.."


Love,

Huda

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This ws gr8.. Maik in all hum h to Kya gum h style.. Lol.. Attitude yaha bh pura h ... It will b interesti to c hw they fall in love.. Gud 1 ..continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Manik in typical hindi language😆
waiting to read more
continue soon!!!

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