MaNan SS - The Last Stroke Of Humanity. - Page 2

Brilliant start MJ! I loved the flow of it, the way all the dots connect. Well written! ❤️I hope you know I am really looking forward to this and that you are going to be pestered to update this from time to time. 😆

I looked up to him to react. Come ahead and say that it was all but a prank. But, he didn't move from his place at all. He had adorned a stony expression on his face as if deeply in contemplation. Slowly I saw an apprehensive smirk forming on his lips, throwing pitiful looks towards me. That was all it took to shatter me.

I felt clipped down to ground like a chained eagle.

I felt my surroundings going blur and then, it was only darkness, my companion.

^ THIS. I loved this. This is exactly what she would be feeling. Shattered.

A week full of peace and solitude and now I am up with conclusion that my Monster never betrayed me. He thinks that he the only smart person walking on the earth but seems like he forgot that Nandini Moorthy was born smart. If he thinks that he'll fool me with those smirks of his and I won't be able to see his agonizing eyes then he is even a bigger fool.

^ I NEED THIS! If they're showing sacrifice they at least need to show that Nandini gets it. She can see through his smirks and know that he is hurt within. Nandini is smart. If they they show that shes completely oblivious to this hurt in eyes, I am breaking stuff. -_-

What all we shared was anything but a revenge. His feelings for me were genuine and I am sure that right now, he would be gazing at stars and asking Aiyappa' to look after me and make sure that I don't do something.

^AWWW. I can actually see this happening. If this does happen, god save us all from the inevitable tears.

I know, he is not wrong, still I am disappointed. Why only Maanik has to play the role of being a good friend, why can't Dhruv do the same?

^EXACTLY. Why only Manik? Why couldn't Dhruv see that his buddy had also developed feeling for Nandu. Why?

But is it written in any rulebook that Nandini Moorthy has to behave the way everyone expects of her? She, too, is allowed to be a nasty, sassy, selfish girl, ain't she?

^YESSS. You go Nandu! Give him a cold shoulder and let him make a effort to win you back. Loved the end.

I am loving this.

Update soon! ❤️

like seriously nandu taking revenge that would be awesome. Cont soon waiting for d nxt update.

Fantastic start aditi🤗

Kya? Kya?

LOOOVE that last line! 😃 Great job!👏

if possible please give a happy end

AND I HEREBY RESERVE. 😎
🤣
Unreserving asap.🤣

SO PHASST AM I😲


DUDE YOU WRITE SO AKLSMLKDSLM <333 LIKE OMFG all those feels you gave me with your words, and Nandini's perspective OMFG OMFG SO SO STRONG! I loved her and the questions she asked and how she pondered it all! You penned down everything so perfectly and the way you describe it all is love <33
can't wait to read more :|

CONTINUE KAR KAMEENI ;|

OH THE LAST LINE!
KILLER MAN!
I WOULD LOVE TO SEE A SASSY NANDU.
And About Dhruv understanding Manik for a change. I FEEL YOU MAN. !
AAAH.
THIS. IS.IT.
Maar daala.
<3

Love
Aaru
PS: Update Jaldi!!!