*Dolour* MaNan OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: rima4ever

beautifully written

Originally posted by: nicky13

Beautiful os... I really hope Nandini will do the same in ky2 too :)

Originally posted by: Gudakesha

Rads.. wonderful OS asusual.

u always flatter me😳

Now i'm looking forward to your one shots on manan (TBP ke din yaad aa gaye)

hi5 !! mujhe bhi though angst was never my genre

And your last line - could it be any better..

and they way you used the phrase 'i'll always shine for you'

In one word

IMPECCABLE.

I m glad u liked it Tichu😛 Love ya 😃

with love,

your tichu. :p

Originally posted by: -Crazy..Life-

This is just beautiful Rads. <3

Sneha🤗

I loved how you expressed their contrasting emotions in the poem.

So feel-y. <3

I m so glad u liked those😳

And the last paragraph! I WANT THIS!

me tooo😃
I want a scene in the Musicana where hes performing, hurt in his eyes and she looks at him and cries, knowingly. </3

AAHHH !!YES

Keep writing! Feels so good to see you here. ❤️

Back at you😃

PS- Loved the title.

Originally posted by: aishu3003

Radz🤗

Aishu🤗

Another amazing write-up

aww..thank u😳

jus loveedd d way u described their feelings

fantastic work⭐️

I m glad u liked it😳

Originally posted by: -ScaredAngel-

Unres:

Gosh rads... This is so beautiful!!!

it is?😳

After a long time u hv written in the genre and I noe hw I always love when u write angst...not just because I'm a sadist!!🤣 but also cause you have a mesmerizing way with words...!!

u are too sweet and kind

The feels of manik...the dilemma he was in...he would always put his friends before his own...n u described the pain beautifully..!!

credits for that goes to Parth ...he portrays pain so well...and it consumes u

Den comes Nandini: turns out after all the happiness...she is again pushed into a sorrow...a heartbreak...difficult to take in...yet deep down she knows she would always shine for him and nly him...

ofcourse she wud...she believes in true love afterall😃

It was beautifully written... The POEM...!! Rads gosh...it was utterly awesome...!! N no amount of my words would tell you exactly how I feel reading angst of urs!!

aaah...thank you so much love❤️

Regards

Safrena

Originally posted by: RK-ki-Kaneez

A heart warming os

Originally posted by: keechu91

heyyy

its so beautiful one...

too short but thatiss its beauty...

loved it...

do write more...

with love

keechu..