*Dolour* MaNan OS

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: addictedlove
Beautifully written..
Tfs

I m sooo glad u liked it😳

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nicky13

@nicky13

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Beautiful os... I really hope Nandini will do the same in ky2 too :)

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Tich

@Jin.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Rads.. wonderful OS asusual.

Now i'm looking forward to your one shots on manan (TBP ke din yaad aa gaye)

And your last line - could it be any better..

and they way you used the phrase 'i'll always shine for you'

In one word

IMPECCABLE.

with love,

your tichu. :p

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Sneha

@.serenade.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

This is just beautiful Rads. <3

I loved how you expressed their contrasting emotions in the poem.

So feel-y. <3

And the last paragraph! I WANT THIS!
I want a scene in the Musicana where hes performing, hurt in his eyes and she looks at him and cries, knowingly. </3

Keep writing! Feels so good to see you here. ❤️

PS- Loved the title.

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Radz🤗

Another amazing write-up

jus loveedd d way u described their feelings

fantastic work⭐️

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: dewcute
you are shining...

your words are shining...

this amazing piece of work is shining...

thanks for shining like this..🤗

Jiya😛

aww...Jiya ...thank u for ur shining comment...I m glad u liked it😳

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: apardh_ba
Nice os. Dnt know what to say or how to say everytime I read smthng I felt this one is amazing bt then the nxt one prove me wrong. Excellent work, keep writing.

awww...thank u for ur lovely words of appreciation I m glad u liked my OS😳

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Viji.Chandran
nice os...
it completely justified the current situation
beautifully written

I m glad u liked it dear😳

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Desigirl_21
Beautiful OS, I really loved the title of ur OS 'dolour' I have never heard that word before 😳
'Dolour' is a latin word meaning 'pain'
I loved how u wrote both of their emotions and in the end finished the OS giving hope that it will all be okay
I m glad u liked it dear😳
Thanks for the PM