MaNan FF:Irrevobaly In Love With You *COMPLETED wid EPILOGUE* - Page 32

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: VYGA89

Amazing update.
Loved it.



Originally posted by: Parud26

awesome update! 👏

continue soon!



Thank you so mcuh...
I wish to continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: apardh_ba

oh just loved it. Fab5 & nandu awesome sixsome. lovely update. plz cont soon.



Originally posted by: aavani

awsome update...loved it...
continue soon...


Originally posted by: babita_14388

thanx,,, its really amazing ...
i love to read ur updates,,,,,,,,,,,,


Originally posted by: Humzy

wow awsm update

loved it
very nicely written
fab 5 and nandani together just awsm
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Originally posted by: sana.1990

another lovely update😊👏

loved the bond of Fab5 and how they handled Harshad 👏👏

do update soon 😊


Originally posted by: tamanna-azaan

it was such a lovely ff..
read all part in one go..
it was like i can imagine everything..
pls pm me..


Originally posted by: shristi sarda

awsm update...loved it..

fab 5 n nandini togethr..too gud!!
n damn happi dt ginally harshad n navya were thrown out!!
get well soon dear n keep updating...



Thank you so mcuh for the comments.It really means a lot...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

RECAP

FAb 5 gets to know of MaNan and tackle Harshad and later accpet them.

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They were still in the hug when Cabir spoke up

Cabir: Ok guys. Enough of the emotional moments...We came here to release our stress and not increase our tensions.

Manik: true that...so as it's a bit cold why don't we light up a bonfire and relax ...what say

Cabir: whatever you think it's only going to have a romantic setup right MAnik

Manik made a face and hit Cabir playfully.

Mukti: umm. But Cabir bonfire does not seem a bad idea though when we are about to hear a romantic love story

Dhruv: love story...I have not brought any romantic novel today Mukti...I can't read it for all of you...

Alya: Aww...Dhruv...You are so innocent. When we have a sizzling pair in front of us who have just patched up why need a romantic novel...

Cabir: this seems brilliant...Let's hear the epic love story of chalk and cheese...MAnik and Nandini...

Manik and NAndini both shouted together: WHAT

Mukti: chalk and cheese...But compatible huh...

ALya: yes we are not listening to any of your tantrums Manik...We want to hear the story...

Dhruv: let us also know how each other's enemy became soul mates.

Cabir: I can see. This is going to be a full bollywood movie...

Dhruv: so let's go and make the arrangements...

So Dhruv left with Mukti and Cabir leaving Alya, Manik and Nandini in the room.

NAndini and Manik looked very uncomfortable. They had to talk to Dhruv. They did not want Dhruv to feel betrayed. It did not turn out as they had expected. This was definitely not the way they wanted Fab 5 to know of their relation even though they accepted their relation. Alya seemed to understand what was going on in their minds. So she went up to them.

Alya: guys relax. Dhruv is all okay...

Manik: Alya...but...

Alya: Manik he is your buddy...if you can go on to sacrifice your love for him he too will. And however Dhruv already did not have expectation that Nandini would accept his proposal...

NAndini: what. But I did not give him any answer yet. I told him I needed some time...

Alya: and Dhruv figured out how uncomfortable you were with him after he proposed you...He shared his worries with me and told me that he wanted to be friends with you ...he told me that it seemed he had mistaken your friendship with him as something else...

Manik: and you are telling me this right now...Alya...

Alya: oh came on Manik...I came to know this yesterday night itself...and then when I messaged you at the night you did not reply. So I thought you were busy...

NAndini: But still Alya. Dhruv might feel betrayed by both of us...

Alya; yes Dhruv will be angry for sure...the correct word might not be angry but hurt...because you both are really special to Dhruv and you kept this as a secret from him..So...I think it's better to talk and sort...

Manik: but how will I talk to Dhruv...

A voice came from behind...

The way you are talking to ALya

It was Dhruv who probably had heard the whole conversation.

Alya and Nandini looked at each other and thought it was best to leave the both buddies so they headed out together. Now there were only Dhruv and Manik left inside.

Dhruv: so...

Manik: buddy...I...

Dhruv: I don't love Nandini...

Manik: no...I...did not mean to ask you that...

Dhruv: but it's the need of time for me to clear this out with you...I was just attracted towards her...I don't love her...trust me...

Manik just looked at Dhruv and hugged him and said...

MAnik: I am sorry. I should not have kept this a secret from you at least...

Dhruv: you should be sorry...but I am glad you told me sorry right now. At last you know that you did a mistake...

Manik: I wanted to tell...

Dhruv: Don't...I don't need any explanation. If you decided to not speak about it to us there must have been a reason...You don't need to...at least to me...

MAnik hugged Dhruv again and said. Thanks buddy...

Cabir who had just entered the room shouted...

NO...yeh shaadi nahi ho sakti...

MAnik and Dhruv together: what

Cabir: weren't you guys getting married...I mean the way you both were hugging each other...So much of intensity and passion...long lost lovers you know...

MAnik made a face and hit Cabir: You will never change...

Cabir: ok .that is the universal truth. But for now...girls are waiting for us outside so let's go...

Cabir took Dhruv and went outside.

Cabir: Manik...please do the honors and shows your face as well...

MAnik: I am coming.

Manik went outside to see everyone already there seated but what was amazing was everyone was clinging towards Nandini. He had thought he would sit with her as everyone now knew about it. But to his surprise Nandini was there seated comfortably and laughing and talking with Cabir.

Cabir: look whose here...Your highness...

Everyone looked up to see MAnik there tapping his foot in frustration.

Mukti: sit Na...Why are you standing...

Cabir: yah sit...You don't need to show us that you have drunk a lot of COMPLAN when you were small...

Manik made an angry face to Cabir which seemed more like pleading him to move away from there but Cabir was Cabir.

Cabir: what...oh...you want to sit here with Nandini...come

This made Nandini so embarrassed that she pulled Cabir down again and said

NAndini: no...Cabir. Stay Na...You only sit here...

Cabir: Manik...I have not done anything...

Alya: Aww...too sad MAnik...

Mukti: come here.sit with me MAnik...

So MAnik went and sat beside Mukti grumping.

Mukti: okay now tell us...

MAnik: what...

Manik said looking at her confused.

Mukti: love story...

MAnik: common yaar...Mukti...not again...

Cabir: why won't you tell...?

Manik: because...this is a real world...and here imagining the things we went through is just horrible...the feeling of losing, getting hurt or something else...It's all very scary...

Cabir: Manik...Now you don't start alright...keep that emotions to you and just blurt the love story...or you are not even required. We have All India Radio with us...she will tell come on NAndini...

NAndini looked at them shocked.

NAndini: what...I ...how can me...

Cabir: the way you were giving lecture. Similarly...

Nandini: it's totally normal guys...we met, we fought and then love happened...

Alya: what happened...suddenly? You all did to even realize...

NAndini: love just happened...MAnik and I never realized how, when and why...

Alya: but...

Dhruv: Alya NAndini is right...love just happens...

HE said looking at Alya.

Dhruv: it's like you never talked with that person ever...but now you can't stop talking with her...She was always there but never realized that it was her all the while...the person who was just friend for you becomes the world just in a moment...you desire, you long but yet don't know why...why is that person so special...why I can't get you out of my head...why I want to be with you...why even though we are poles apart I still love you...

Alya and Dhruv did not realize that their faces had come really close to each other when they felt something waving in front of their eyes. They looked up and both of them got scared. It was Cabir who was waving his hands in front of their faces.

Cabir hugged Dhruv and said

Cabir: wah mere sheer...such a deep analysis on love...Manik and Nandini are beginners you are pro...

Alya: shut up Cabir...

Dhruv: No. I just told what I feel about love...

Cabir went near Dhruv and whispered in his ears...

Cabir: ALya right...

Dhruv looked at Cabir and then looked down...

Cabir: hmmm. So there is hot cup of steaming...steaming ro...

Mukti: Cabir...what steaming...what is cooking in your head...

Cabir: steaming...steaming...coffee...yah we should have steaming coffee...we are with dry person so no alcohol...

Cabir said settling himself between ALya and Dhruv facing towards NAndini who was now accompanied by MAnik.

Cabir: and he never leaves a chance...at the end you had to sit with her...

Manik trying to avoid the embarrassment called the servant and asked them to serve coffee to everyone. The servant had already left when MAnik called him back.

MAnik: get a shawl as well...it's chilly out here...

Mukti: no we are fine MAnik...

ALya: Mukti don't worry. The shawl isn't for us...

MAnik was trapped and did not know what to say so shouted at the servant.

Manik: what are you grinning at? Just go and get it...

The servant brought the things and Manik covered Nandini with the shawl only to invite teasing from his friends. Everyone was busy chattering and enjoying. Cabir as usual was pulling everyone's legs. Mukti was enjoying the teasing and Alya and Dhruv were having their silent romance. MAnik took this moment and went a bit closer to NAndini and caught hold of her hands and covered it with the shawl. Nandini got scared and tried freeing it but it was MAnik Malhotra after all.

MAnik: hmm.

Nandini: what are you doing...everyone is here...

MAnik: so...

NAndini: so you should leave my hand

MAnik: what you think I am scared...

Nandini: really...

So she shouted

NAndini: Cabir...

Manik left her hands instantly and looked towards the other side...

Cabir: yes...

Nandini: Ok...um...me...why don't you play some music...

Cabir laughed and then said

Cabir: You want to hear music from me when your boyfriend-the lead singer of Fab 5 is sitting beside you...

Nandini did not know what to say so she said

Nandini: I want to hear the Fab 5 sing...

Mukti: not a bad idea though...

SO MAnik and Dhruv got their guitar and MAnik lip synched a small thank you to NAndini who just smiled and reassured him from his eyes.

Mukti: I will sit by MAnik...

MAnik: why

Mukti: don't worry...I won't come to your left. It's already booked...

And then they started to sing.

MAnik

Yaaron dosti badi hi haseen hai

Yeh na ho to kya phir

Bolo yeh zindagi hai

Dhruv sang looking at Alya who was avoiding his gaze and looking elsewhere.This did not go unnoticed by Cabir and MAnik.

Koi to ho raazdaar

Begaraj tera ho yaar

Koi to ho raazdaar

MAnik looked at NAndini and sang who kept her heads on her shoulder. While the rest of Fab 5 just smiled seeing at the couple who was madly in love with each other.

Yaaron mohabbat hi to bandagi hai

Yeh na ho to kya phir bolo yeh zindagi hai

Koi to dilbar ho yaar

Jisko tujhse ho Pyaar

Koi to dilbar ho yaar

Cabir

Teri har ke buraai pe daante woh dost

Gam ki ho dhoop to saaya bane tera woh dost

Naache bhi woh teri khushi main

aree Yaaron dosti badi hi haseen hai

All

Yeh na ho to kya phir

Bolo yeh zindagi hai

Koi to ho raazdaar

Begaraj tera ho yaar

Koi to ho raazdaar

MAnik looked at Nandini who had dozed off by now.He just smiled at her innocent and felt content seeing her sleep so peacefully on his shoulders.

Tan mann kar tujhpe fida

Mehboob woh

Palkon pe jo rakhe tujhe

Mehboob woh

Jiski vafa tere liye ho

He was brought out of his wolrd by Cabir who had now come up to him and hit him. But Manik shushed him with his fingers indicating to others as well that Nandini was fast asleep.

Are Yaaron mohabbat hi to bandagi hai

Yeh na ho to kya Phir

Bolo yeh zindgi hai

Koi to dilbar ho yaar

Jisko tujhse ho pyaar

Koi to dilbar ho yaar

All Alya and Mukti could utter was aww...seeing Manik care so much for Nandini.

Dhruv: she's fast asleep...

Mukti: why won't she be...After all she is with her man...

Alya: how cute...

MAnik: it's nothing like that. She does not have habit of being awake till so late...so cut the imagination...

Cabir: I am impressed Manik...

MAnik: ok guys...let's just stop this teasing session...Let; s postpone it for tomorrow...And For now I will take her to the bed...

Cabir: You will take her alone.

Manik: Cabir...don't over think. I am taking her to Mukti and Alya's room...

With that MAnik carried Nandini and took her to the bedroom and placed her on the bed carefully. He then tucked her with the blanket and put the hair back which was disturbing her. She was smiling in her sleep and Manik kissed her on the forehead and switched off the lights to find Mukti and Alya on the door that had seen him showing the Tender Love and Care.

Mukti: Manik Malhotra is changing for good...

Alya: the feeling is love Mukti...

With that he smiled and left them giving them a big good night hug.

When Manik landed in his bed tonight it seemed he would now finally lead a NORMAL life. Everything was going back to NORMAL.

PRECAP

MaNan and Cabir on a mission to make Dhrulya...

Fab 5 VS NavShad

Edited by loquacious_me - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome n beautiful post 👏
Continue soon.. really soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow beautiful update
loved it
very nicely written
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super I have just started. Enjoying so far reading it. U r amazing writer.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally😊.. Awesome.. Fab5 n nandu.. Hw cute.. Lst part ws sooo cute😳
I wish fab 5 n nandu happens soon in the serial soon.. Thnks fr d pm.. Hws ur health?
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
i am so sorry to hear about u
i hope u r taking care of yourself
i am sure u will be ok soon
Edited by rima4ever - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
even if u cannot update for some time it is ok
u should take care of your health 1st
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 21 magnificent
loved the scene between nandu and fab 5
awesome how they managed harshad
serves him right too

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