scared. - MaNan Drabble

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scared- MaNan Drabble

As he leaned closer and closer in to kiss her, she found herself losing herself a bit more with every passing second. She was unable to divert her gaze and today, it was harder than all those earlier attempts. She slowly closed her eyes and like a short film, their entire past kiss attempts ran through her mind and she suddenly remembered Alya. As she opened her eyes, she found it a little easier to distract herself and she said the only thing that would make him stop immediately, and it worked. All of a sudden, he moved away from her like he had been given an electric shock.

"Rishabh, uh, where's Rishabh? I forgot to ask you." Manik stuttered and looked away from her. Nandini mumbled something about her chachi and the workers and all but ran away from there.


She found a sofa after walking a little while and it took her all her strength not to lie down on the couch. Nandini Murthy was exhausted mentally even after being completely fine a few minutes ago. Two words were haunting her, Manik and Alya.


After so many attempts, the almost kiss did not bother her, what bothered her was her reason not to kiss him and somewhere in her mind, she knew that she would've let him kiss her, heck, she would've kissed him back had she not remembered that he had a girlfriend. Until the last moment, she even forgot that he had a girlfriend and had she not closed her eyes, she would've probably kissed him.

That is what scared her the most. The attempted kiss didn't scare her, but the fact that she would've kissed him if not for Alya terrified her. Her train of thoughts reminded her of the first kiss when she felt nothing but absolute hatred for the monster and today, she was actually contemplating kissing him. Above all, she was scared that she was falling for the monster fast, and hard.


I wasn't finding caps and I was high, so please put up with the crap. 😆 Also, the ending is for the MaNan AT regulars, if you know what I mean. 🤣

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shit, Alya is Kebab mein haddi here too...
Loved how you put Nandini's dilemma..
She is falling for her monster (who ofcourse is not a monster at all) and she is falling hard.
Irrevocably and uncontrollably.
Loved it babes..



Love,
Tich.


p.s: You remember me right? From KBG CC?




edit: And me being first to your work makes me feel HONOURED!
Edited by Gudakesha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I like it. The feeling nandu is trying hard not to feel but always failed. Her attraction towards a monster is scaring her and d fact she cant resist him. I truly like it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gudakesha

Shit, Alya is Kebab mein haddi here too...

Loved how you put Nandini's dilemma..
She is falling for her monster (who ofcourse is not a monster at all) and she is falling hard.
Irrevocably and uncontrollably.
Loved it babes..



Love,
Tich.


p.s: You remember me right? From KBG CC?




edit: And me being first to your work makes me feel HONOURED!

Tich tu 😲 TICH as in the TheDreamCatcher wali? I didn't recognize you only 🤣
Thank you so much, means a lot <3
Yess KBG :')
Honored? 😲 I am honored that you read it and commented. <3 Ah thank youu <3
Edited by ARandKJFan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tommo.

This is pretty good, man.

Thanks woman. 😳
Edited by ARandKJFan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: apardh_ba

I like it. The feeling nandu is trying hard not to feel but always failed. Her attraction towards a monster is scaring her and d fact she cant resist him. I truly like it.

Thanks a ton <3 I'm glad you liked it :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ARandKJFan

Tich tu 😲 TICH as in the TheDreamCatcher wali? I didn't recognize you only 🤣
Thank you so much, means a lot <3
Yess KBG :')
Honored? 😲 I am honored that you read it and commented. <3 Ah thank youu <3

yeah, changed my username last month.😆😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice ... Keep it up dear ... Write more on Manan:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is SO GOOD! ❤️
I loved how you described her thoughts.


Above all, she was scared that she was falling for the monster fast, and hard.

^^ This sentence slayed me, I swear! *____*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks a ton. Glad you liked it ;)

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