MaNan OS: Enchanted by your touch

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello
it's me again.
I'm not gonna say anything this time because you all have gotten used to me by now LOL
My mind was thinking about tomorrow's episode so I came up with this piece of writing
and decided to post it here.
P.S. Excuse my mistakes I wrote this at night and didn't reread it so I don't even know what I really wrote LOL😆

Manik entered his bedroom closing the door behind him. He moved his steps towards the mirror and stared at himself. What had happened to him? What made him hug Nandini like that? Wasn't she supposed to be the girl he hates, the commoner, the idiot, the ex spot? Why did his fingers dial her number out of all the people he knew? The endless questions invaded his mind as he stood in front of his mirror speechless. He lifted both of his hands and examined them closely with his eyes.

"Am...am I changing?" his lips barely uttered the words. "No!" he quickly yelled back.
"I'm not changing. It's just...just. It's just that I was tensed after finding about Cabir and...and I didn't think it was right for Fab5 to know about this now. Yeah that's all there is to it."
He tried to comfort himself with these meaningless words, but deep inside he knew there was something changing. Something growing and overtaking his heart, something he's been trying to fight for a long time now but failing miserably, yet he was Manik Malhotra and he wasn't going to accept it.

He slowly made his way towards his bed and dropped himself to sleep.

The next morning Nandu woke up two hours early, as she had remembered her 7 pm meeting with Monster Manik. She replayed the hug she shared with him yesterday in her mind.

"What is wrong with him?" She asked herself as the brush clutched to her hair. "He looked really bothered yesterday and he didn't even say anything when I asked him. This Manik can be so confusing sometimes."
She tossed her brush on the dressing table giving one last look at herself and headed out the door.

She reached Space College and looked around noticing it was empty.

"Nandu you idiot, what made you come. This monster is probably still asleep in his room and dreaming. He told you na? He told you he won't come. So why are you here?" She smacked the back of her head lightly as she walked between the silent hallways of Space.

"Is class going to start early today?" A voice to her side startled her. She turned around to see the custodian sweeping the floor. "If I knew class was going to start early today then I would have done my cleaning earlier as there is another student who also came." He grabbed his mop and moved away to clean another area. As he moved away from Nandini's view, Nandini's eyes spotted Manik fast asleep on the stairs.

"Manik?" she mumbled to herself still not able to believe that Manik was actually there and it wasn't her imagination playing games with her. She moved her little feet towards him as she continued to look at him. Once she got closer to him, she gazed at him lying there fast asleep. His perfect hair was still in place while all the muscles of his face were at peace.

"Monster Manik doesn't look like a monster when he is sleeping." She mumbled to herself quietly not wanting to awaken the monster from his slumber.

In fact he looks like an innocent baby. Nandu have you gone mad? What are you saying?" She smacked her head again.

But she couldn't' help it. He was looking so innocent and at peace as his chest rose and fell with each intake of air. She leaned herself towards him and tried to wake him up when Manik moved his arm while sleeping and held on to the tip of her pink scarf. She moved her hand and tried to pull it away carefully but his hand was holding on to it. Just as she was busy removing her scarf from his clutch, he started to open his eyes and to his surprise there was Nandini leaning on him. He waited for his eye vision to get clear and once he was able to see her clearly he stared at her. Nandini continued her attempts on trying to free her scarf from his clutch unaware that her monster had woken up by now.

"Kya Kare ho tum?!"

"Ahhh!" Nandini let out a cry as she lifted her hand to her chest frightened by his voice.

"You scared me." She spoke as the fear in her eyes can still be seen.

"Yet you continue to say, you're not scared of me." Manik spoke as he fixed the wrinkles in his shirt.

"Alright let's work on what we came here for." He spoke looking at her this time.

"Did he forget about yesterday?" Nandini thought to herself.

"One minute he is emotional Manik the next moment he transfers to monster Manik again. Bahut ajeeb hai woh."

"Hey!" Manik called at her while snapping his finger

"Are you still here? I'm talking to you. Listen we have to finish what we came here for. So stop daydreaming and get Rishab and Dhruv's file out."

Nandini did what she was told without uttering a word. She wasn't going to argue with him any further. It was useless and she wasn't in a mood to pick a fight with him. They looked over the files for the past two hours and discussed a couple of things regarding Rishab and Dhruv's condition.

"Ok so we will finish this when we meet again." Manik grabbed his coat as he spoke.

"You can keep Dhruv's file along with Rishab's." He added.

Nandini took Dhruv's file and placed it with Rishab's file inside her bag.

They both walked in different directions making sure that no one would come to know they were together.

"Nandini!" Navya called out to her.

"Hey Navya." Nandini slowed herself down allowing Navya to catch up with her.

"We have to practice for the competition remember. We are going to beat those Fab5 idiots." She spoke as she struggled to tie the tip of her braid.

They entered the room and there was Harshad holding his guitar, while Shahid was busy reading something. To the far left seated the Fab5 group, which included Cabir, Mukti, Alya, Dhruv,and Manik.

Nandini caught a glimpse of Manik working on the strings of his guitar. He was fidgeting with the strings when his eyes spotted Nandini entering the room. Both got into a short awkward gaze and turned their face away.

"Nandini, Navya hello guys." Harshad called out to them.

Nandini placed her bag on the table and sat along with Navya.

"Hello." Nandini replied.

"You guys are ready? We are going to rock." Harshad's eyes sparked with victory already.

Nandini let out a small smile. While her eyes fell on Dhruv who was sitting with his group quietly.

She took her phone out and decided to text him.

"Hello Dhruv. What's up :)" She texted him. Dhruv's eyes fell on his phone as he noticed her message. Without lifting his head, he tried to act like he wasn't aware of it. He lifted his hand and acted like he was fixing his guitar. Nandini moved her feet towards Dhruv's direction but stopped when she noticed Manik's eyes staring at her. She turned her face away and grabbed her water bottle to drink. As she turned her face back, to her surprise there stood Manik a couple of inches away from her. She spilled the water over her face shocked by his presence.

"I scared you again." Manik spoke before she said anything.

She eyed the water that covered her top and before she could move her hand, Manik held her arm and pulled her away from the room. He sat her down and held on to her shoulder while his other hand wiped the water from her face. He traced her forehead all the way to her cheeks and the end of her eyes, while his bedroom eyes gazed at her.

Her eyes met his stare removing all the distance that existed between them. He moved his hand and cupped her face with one hand and continued to remove the drops of water. He can almost swear that he was envying those droplets of water for being so close to her and hugging on to her face like that. He didn't feel himself when he had suddenly dropped the tissue and had started to trace her face with his long fingers instead. Nandini felt her heartbeat stop as his fingers trailed across her face sending an electric shot to every limb in her body.

The loud voices of the student's outside the room broke their trance, making them aware of the situation they are in. Nandini moved herself away as her cheeks flushed with heat. Without saying anything, she made her way towards the door, leaving behind a struck and confused Manik who sat there eying his fingers in disbelief.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I think I know what genre of writing your style is~ Conundrum!
Anyways, I loved the last line where he just looked at his fingers in disbelief! That was brilliant!

To me what stood out about this OS, was how accurate it is! There is possibility that this might happen tonight in the show and if it does I wouldn't be disappointment!

Keep writing! Though study at the same time!😆

~Pari
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Too good yaar! absolutely love it❤️... What i like the best about your OS is that you really get the essence of Manik and Nandini's characters!

It is an absolute cute adorable OS. ...i love the way he dropped the tissue and started touching her face himself!!!! Ufff! the "feels"
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nice and manik has fin started questioning himself. Very nice
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Ther s a lot of possibility of above story to be unfold in the show tonight..I wanna add something to that..Manik would definetely try to clear with nandini about himself of being vulnerable and establish tat he s the same old monster while failing miserably.. 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: gujjupari

I think I know what genre of writing your style is~ Conundrum!

Anyways, I loved the last line where he just looked at his fingers in disbelief! That was brilliant!

To me what stood out about this OS, was how accurate it is! There is possibility that this might happen tonight in the show and if it does I wouldn't be disappointment!

Keep writing! Though study at the same time!😆

~Pari

Conundrum?! ( I search it in my little brain but answer is NOT FOUND🤔) Pari help out here😆
I wrote this yesterday night so I might not have been in my senses. (Am I ever in my senses???)
Kya karoon, MaNan are haunting me 24/7 and then my crazy mind comes up with these weird ideas and I write them down.
yeah I had a possibility that it might happen in the episode well it kinda did and it kinda didn't
we got Nandu removing a paper instead of her pink scarf 🤣
I need to get my butt back into studying otherwise I'm gonna be in trouble😆
Pari why do I love you????🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res 😃 Unres
This was really good.. and this seemed like a thing that could have happened in the episode yesterday.. its really nice to read how much he is affecting her and I loved it that they both discussed about Rishabh-Dhruv too😳
lol it seems that Manik has no control over his fingers they have a life of their own 😆
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Originally posted by: JAAN19

Too good yaar! absolutely love it❤️... What i like the best about your OS is that you really get the essence of Manik and Nandini's characters!

It is an absolute cute adorable OS. ...i love the way he dropped the tissue and started touching her face himself!!!! Ufff! the "feels"

Awww your such a sweetie yaar!
Thank you so much 😳
glad u enjoyed it!
Manik and TOUCHING go hand in hand lol😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank You!😃
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Originally posted by: apardh_ba

nice and manik has fin started questioning himself. Very nice

Thanks!😊
I can't wait until Manik starts questioning himself. It would be great to watch

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