drabble|| deny [nandini centric] - Page 2

You leave me speechless Mais!

Originally posted by: infinity_

Mais! 🤗

As I always say, your stories/drabbles never fail to amaze me!

The drabble is spectacular, it showcases Nandini's feelings beautifully. And I love the way she comes to a slow but sure understanding that Manik is the one for her! <3

These two are meant to be and they are like the a firefly and the darkness surrounding it, but Nandini is definitely gonna light up his world too!

Like how I can't deny that after the stolen moments in the secluded corners with no promises for a definite future, his eyes follow me around the room with a wish sparkling in them. A wish for the seemingly impossible. The wish to take this feeling which consumes us and show it to the world.

'Why him?'

Why not him?

I will not deny that if it's not him, it can be no one else.

I can not deny that he has set me free in so many ways.

Deny him and I deny myself.

Deny myself, that I shall never do.

These lines. . .. ufff! 👏

Wonderfully penned down!

P.S Are those lines in your Sig box from Arrow? :D Please tell me they are. . , what with such perfectMaNan and Olicity moments. . I'm just dancing in heaven atm! 🤣

Yesterday's epi did it for me man! I have been so out of touch with writing and then comes Nandini's realization...a woman acknowledging the effect a man has on her, and I just couldn't resist! This came up and wrote it down in like 20 minutes xD

YES!!! OLICITY!!!

Originally posted by: TheShipWeirdo

Goddamn it Mais. I hate you and your gorgeous writing.

... Okay fine, just kidding. You know I love you completely :* But seriously though, I held my breath while reading this. Just... wow.

The way you've pinned down Nandini's thoughts is absolutely spot-on. And after today's episode; the same one where she's started to develop her feelings towards Manik! What, are you trying to kill me now? Because you're succeeding and I hate it.

Or maybe I love it. I can't exactly complain when the piece of work in question is so absolutely stunning. And just the way you've written is so perfect. I can completely imagine these being Nandini's thought. I'm sure these are Nandini's thoughts. She's so in love with him (or will be :P) and she can't deny it. Gah, now I'm obsessing over the title!

But that's exactly what you've done to me; you've made me obsessed over your fabulous writing and this fabulous drabble. And I'm complaining, because it's way too fabulous for me to handle.

P.S. That was long; be proud!

P.P.S. I have been waiting forever for the sequel to 'intimacy' and if you say you've forgotten all about that then I'll kill you.

P.P.P.S. Write the sequel and post it when you can (better be soon).

Waaah! Suha posted a lamba comment 😆

Don't blame me! Blame Nandu for having such a WONDERFUL realization! What she experienced was in the broad daylight, I just took her in the privacy of her room in night and just put these words together and tried for it to make some sense xD

In my head, and in this drabble, she's not in "love" with him. She's just not denying that there is something special going on between them. Just the two of them. Like we've seen them in the show...

...your avi is distracting me 😳

oh wait, I made that 😳

We are getting better moments than I planned in the sequel in the actual show xD It doesn't help me in writing xD

Originally posted by: TasmiaFaye

Wow! This is really stupendous! What a remarkable os u wrote! I luved it! Nandini thinking so maturely... Awesome!

thank you! <3

We finally saw Nandini become a woman from a child, with that realization. Such realizations do bring this kind of maturity in people :P

Originally posted by: Catatonic_Cat

Mais, how do you write so well? you make me feel emotional about these babies of mine😳

Catty! Sometimes words just flow and they come out well so maybe that's why I write so well? Idk 😆

Babies be giving me so many feeels! Main kya karoon?!

Originally posted by: shelly_08

Uffoohh...tujhe daantke bhagaun ya seene se lagaun?? 🤗 🤗

Lame comment, I know...but fantastic OS! ❤️

It's been long since I've written an OS from my darling Nandu's POV. You inspired me to write one! 😃

Seene se laga le 😳

I really don't like writing from 1st person POV but this idea just had to be told by no one but Nandini!

Originally posted by: gujjupari

You leave me speechless Mais!

Absolutely speechless! Like I don't even know what to say right now!

The way you have portrayed Nandini's inner turmoil, her denial and her chaotic feelings, all flowed so smoothly!

I still have no words!

Your biggest fan

~Pari

PS: When are you updating Intimacy

Aaahh! Thank you Midnight Pagal! 🤗

Ek aur fan? I really need to start taking my fanclub idea seriously 🤣

Because of the uber hot scenes we be getting in the show itself, Intimacy sequel has been postponed for a while xD
*runs away*

Originally posted by: lostmymusic.

Aaahh! Thank you Midnight Pagal! 🤗

Ek aur fan? I really need to start taking my fanclub idea seriously 🤣

Because of the uber hot scenes we be getting in the show itself, Intimacy sequel has been postponed for a while xD
*runs away*

Finally!! I can comment 😆 Stupid restrictions on number of posts/day