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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: -MyMy-

RESSS

UNRESSS

Oooh! So super cute Uditiii!
I loved this!
It was sweet, and Nandu was so cute!
Manik's last line! Hayee!
Loved it! Write more <3

Thank u so much Maya😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: dewcute

wow,uditi...i loved it...


i loved the words of nandini,but what made me fall

in love with the os was the words of manik..

he thinks nandini is a star...,he himself is not afraid to be a moon then...

amazing work uditi👏

will wait for more from you..

jiya

Thank u Jiya for reading.. I am so glad that u liked the OS 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: MuguetDScorpion

Res otherwise I will forget 😆


Your writing is really nice. 👍🏼
So Manik is Nandini's moon and Nandini is Manik's star. How romantic. 😳
I am eager to see that happening to the show too.

It was really nice to read. 😊

Thank u😃... I think it will happen in the show because MaNan will always be there for each other and complement each other Embarrassed
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: ArchanaRM

It was Good... specially that swing wala part.. . (I imagined Manik & Nandu sitting together...)

Thank u, I really like when couples sit on swings so yeah that's why I added that touch.. glad u liked it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: zaya-firdose

Soo cute

Aww
Lovely manan

Thank u so much😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Parud26

A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!!!!!!!!!

nandini's 'manik and the moon analogy': how on earth did you come up with that!??!?😲😲👏
you wrote this is such a way that I practically pictured the whole story while I was reading.
it was really nicely put!
and its something that we can expect Nandini to say to Manik 😳 especially now that she's certain that he's not a monster!
simply put, this is a beautiful piece of writing 👏👏👏
waiting for your next update 😛

Thank u it means a lot that u could imagine everything, the Manik and moon analogy the idea came randomly into my head and I immediately wrote it 😳 Thanks once again for ur lovely comments
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u 😃

Originally posted by: babita_14388

nice one,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Thanks 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: angel_7

beautifully written 👏
I could actually visualize every single thing in your writing
loved how you showed manik's sarcasm side...the last line was too cute..loved it

I would love to read more of your writings
keep writing and stay blessed

Thank u so much 😳... I am really glad that u could enjoy reading it, I love writing Manik's sarcastic side 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Sparks-galore

Super Cute OS Uditi!!! 🤗 Under the moon and stars, they sat and poured their hearts out!! Love it!❤️

Thank u 😳, true that they sat and dealt with their unknown feelings under the moon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Malika.Dua

awww this was cute 😳

I really loved the way you compared Manik to a moon. Very true his rudeness and anger identifies the dark side of him and the helpful and caring side represents the light side of him.
"And it's so good to have Professor Nandu back, is there any point to your science lesson?"
@BOLD
I can totally imagine Manik saying this 😆
Beautifully written 👏
I enjoyed reading it!

Thank u for reading.. haha Manik and his lines I love his sarcasm 😆 I am glad u liked the moon analogy 😳

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