MaNan OS ~Addicted~ - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This story is addictive so much that i ve read t again and again.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its really gud...omg...I liked it so much...lol..i'm getting addicted to it😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Uff Shelly, seriously? As if all those recent MaNan scenes weren't enough, you just come and give me this awesome OS! Gahhh I love you but I hate you.
This was just great. Loved how you pinned down Manik's emotions, and so perfectly at that! Absolutely spot-on.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was amazing👏.. I loved reading Manik's mind
The title is so perfect he does seem to be wholly addicted to Nandu 😳.. really loved reading it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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god this is so good.i was smiling like a fool throughout the os.you are an outstanding writer.loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Last lines
"She was there present in everything he owned. Right from his car to his house, his room, his clothes, his bed, his couch...even his cupboard!"
It's damn true... 👍🏼

Beautiful OS ❤️ed it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Manik finally accepting that he is obsessed over nandini. Its really awesome. Btw i want to ask when manik said to dhruv that he will take that punch any day over that kiss.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Messi2

very nice dear 👏 cant get my head out of d before last sentence truly nandu owns everythng of manik well written


Coming up with the last sentence of an OS like this is kind of a challenge for me as this is not a scene but an insight! I'm glad that it is appreciated by you all. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheShipWeirdo

Uff Shelly, seriously? As if all those recent MaNan scenes weren't enough, you just come and give me this awesome OS! Gahhh I love you but I hate you.

This was just great. Loved how you pinned down Manik's emotions, and so perfectly at that! Absolutely spot-on.


You love me but you hate me? LOL...there's a new-found Maanik Malhotra for me! 😆 😆

Thank u sooo much! 🤗 Seems like I'm becoming an expert with Maanikism these days. 😉 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArchanaRM

Last lines
"She was there present in everything he owned. Right from his car to his house, his room, his clothes, his bed, his couch...even his cupboard!"
It's damn true... 👍🏼

Beautiful OS ❤️ed it.


Heyy...long time no see?? 😛

Glad that you liked it! 🤗 I got some inspiration from Chandramukhi's dialogue from Devdas for that line. 😆

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