MaNan OS : Shower Scene (Manik POV)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys. This is my first OS based on one of the scene where Manik entered his room and saw Nandini fast asleep. It is my take on what was going on inside Manik's head. Hope you like it😉. Apologies in advance for any mistake or varying opinions.


Comments and criticism are most welcome. Hope you enjoy it😛



Manik was pissed off. It was already past ten. The day has been really long. For the first time he felt that somehow he was responsible that Fab5 lost the competition despite their brilliant performance.

Today Fab5 lost the competition, all because of that Silly Nandini Murthy. Didn't she pick up my phone when I really needed her? Had it be Dhruv or Harshad, She would immediately picked it up. Besides why should I bother if she is so smiley with other guys and seem to reserve only her frowns for me. F*** hell. Why I am even thinking about that commoner. She means nothing to me!

Manik dropped his guitar on his bed and texted Cabir concerning their impending meeting. No reply.

Shower time.

Manik pulled out his shirt and was getting some fresh clothes when he noticed a shadow on his couch. He took a step back. There she was,on his couch,sleeping soundly, innocently, almost like an angel.

Speak of the devil. Huh! She always appears at the least inappropriate time, but damn she does look hot in white top and even hotter when she sleeps. Hmm almost like she belongs here.

Lost in his thoughts, Manik slowly approached Nandini and saw that her head was slipping off the back of the couch.

Oh shit, she would sprain her neck.

He immediately attempted to set her right but froze realizing what he was doing.

Dude. What would she think if I touched her in her sleep.

But then he could not stop himself.

Like Hell, since when I am bothering myself with what she thinks about me .I am just helping out and she should be grateful but God she does look beautiful in her sleep.

He was straightening her face when she slowly turned and rested her cheeks against his palm. Her skin was so soft and for a second Manik was lost in the sensation of this innocent skin contact was doing to him.

Why does she have such an effect on me? Why is she playing with my mind like that? Why I am even allowing myself to be influence by her touch? Damn it

Manik sharply removed his hand and this sudden movement zapped Nandini out of her sleep. Nandini was surprised to see a shirtless Manik infront of her, glaring her. She immediately shielded her eyes and tried to avoid Manik as he started questioning her of her presence in his room at this time.

Why is she even hiding her eyes? Has not she seen me shirtless before? This commoner never fails to intrigue me.

He kept turning towards her face and she kept looking away.

Damn it Nandini. What is wrong with you. You are driving me crazy.

After her endless babble on the question of why she was here, she finally answered that she came to say thank you.

The day has been really long and for the past few days Nandini had been haunting his thoughts.

Monster Manik. Huh. Manik almost laughed internally at the nickname that Nandini gave him. This girl has no idea of the type of havoc she is playing in my mind. She is almost like an obsession. I can't get her out of my head. All I keep thinking is taking her in my arms and kissing her. Those soft lips, There are driving me crazy. Seriously, why the hell is she in my room at this time! I am tired and my self control is already running low.She has no idea of what Monster Manik wants to do with her right now. 😈

Manik Malhotra has always been impulsive and has always done what he wants. He never thought twice. And right now he really wanted to taste her delicious lips and he would make sure that he do tonight.

Whatever. "Fine", Manik snapped. "Then thank me properly". With emphasis on the word properly.

His eyes, dark with the devilish desires that he has been restraining for the last few days, he bent towards her as Nandini's eyes widened at this growing proximity.


He could feel the temperature soaring for every millimeter his lips was approaching hers. His internal demon was already rejoicing. He could feel her warm breathes against his face. And Bang!

"Thank you" she uttered as a matter of fact.

Damn the girl. She totally killed the mood. Is she dumb or what ? I really cannot believe that she could not get my hint. Girl, your innocence really amazed me. ufff if you knew how much I am craving for your touch. Nandu you really bring the beast out of me. Calm down Manik. Calm down.

Manik pulled away and started putting some distance between them. Nandini completely oblivious of the turmoil Manik was going through followed him. She
went on blabbering about how thankful she is to him for saving Rishabh, and accidentally knocked against Manik's back, her lips briefly touched his back. Manik was already having a tough time controlling his urge but this accidental contact was spiking his desire even more. For a fraction of second he was lost in the moment but then she went on that she'll go to Raghav and tell him the truth. Etc. Etc Etc

Manik could take no more and dragged her to the bathroom.

This girl need to get her head clear. In what kind of world is she living? Does she think i give a F*** what others will think of me? Let me shake her up out of her stupid illusions.Wake up Nandu!!!

Manik opened the shower on her and started giving his piece of mind on how he doesn't care what other think of him. He was happy the way he was. He was happy being the bad guy. But then Nandini questioned why was he hiding behind Monster Manik. This question really took him off guard. How can he tell her about the incident that altered his whole perception, how can he explain to her when he himself has so much difficulty even thinking about it. His thought was broken by the sound of Cabir's voice.

Shit.shit. Shit. Cabir. Now? Damn it. If he finds Nandini now in my room. Err shower, all wet, he would probably think that I was...Damn...think Manik... Manik fast. If Fab5 finds out... what about Nandini's reputation? damn it. Shit, the bathroom is opened, no time to put the lock!

Manik did the first thing that went through his mind. He hugged Nandini tightly and purposely positioned himself to the door so that Cabir would not see her, even by accident.

"I am having a shower Cabir". Cabir closed the door and went away.

Thank God Cabir stopped on his track. I would be totally dead if he saw Nandini here. God, thank you as well as that Nandini is so petite and fits in me so well.

Suddenly Manik's mind zapped back to reality. The whole world came to a stop. Nandini was in his arms, completely drenched and her whole body clenched in his as if it was the most natural fit.

If earlier the touch of her skin against his palm sent an electric current in his body
, now her whole body pressed against his and her soft hand touching his bare chest was a pure delight. The tension of the body to body contact was so electrifying and palpable. He never thought a girl could make him feel so tensed yet so weak with desire.😈







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Posted: 10 years ago
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You completely left me hanging! But great job nonetheless :) I loved your take on this scene! Please do write more on MaNan <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheShipWeirdo

You completely left me hanging! But great job nonetheless :) I loved your take on this scene! Please do write more on MaNan <3



Am glad you like it😃... I would write more as and when i have time. Cause supposedly i am very busy with preparation of exams 😆

Anyway, I needed a suggestion. Should I update the post for new scenes or should i create another thread.

Let me know 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: noorjahan30



Am glad you like it😃... I would write more as and when i have time. Cause supposedly i am very busy with preparation of exams 😆

Anyway, I needed a suggestion. Should I update the post for new scenes or should i create another thread.

Let me know 😳


If you're going to post your take from all scenes, then you should do a new thread where you can post all of them at once :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NICE JOB👏😳

Jiya😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you all 🥳

I hope to come up with more. but all will depend on availability of my time😛... by the way suggestions are most welcome. I will like to know whether you think it is really want was going through Manik's mind. etc

And you can also suggest which scene you think I can rewrite from Manik's Perception 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow you nailed if! Amazing self thoughts
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was really awsum...
I really enjoyed reading all this
Manik se control nai hota 😆
I'm loving it
Bohat maza aya yaar... Thanks
It was beautifully penned
Take care
Stay blessed
Love
Dua...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was... too gud I must say
I loved it.
Beautifully written.
It was so much fun
Pm me if possible plsss
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow awesome...
Thnx for manik's pov..
Luved it...

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