Cliche Attempt || MaNan SS (ch. 3, pg. 15)

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Suha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: zohasad2.0
please continue...ur writing style is beautiful<3 please do continue

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Aw, thanks <3 I'll try my best to continue, but honestly I'm quite lazy 😆

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ArchRM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

It was superb... good start... continue...

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Suha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: ArchanaRM
It was superb... good start... continue...

Thank you! I'll try to do so :)

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ForeverForU

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

this was just the intro right?? there is more..you have to write more
their first encounter was like "hate at first sight"...you wrote their interaction really well..waiting for more😳😳

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Suha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ForeverForU
this was just the intro right?? there is more..you have to write more
their first encounter was like "hate at first sight"...you wrote their interaction really well..waiting for more😳😳

Thank you <3 I'm glad, since I was honestly very unsure about this. I might have messed up Manik because, as much as I love characters like him, I'm never good at writing them :S Either way, thank you again! I'll probably continue since I'm actually happy with this, for once!

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Uditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Res 😳 Unres

This was too good, I love how they bickered in the coffee shop it was so cute

Pls do continue it I would love to read more of it 😃

Edited by Desigirl_21 - 10 years ago

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Unknown

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

This was quite something Suha! You be such a kickass writer and I only found out now!

Anyways, this is just something else! OS was fantastic and your writing made it even better! Though the fiesty-ness you portrayed in both Manik and Nandini is something that I loved! The cliched cliche😳

Update this maybe?

Please?

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Jia Roh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

wow,amazing👏

you should continue this...😊

i really loved it...❤️

jiya😛

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Uditi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Unresed my comment on page 2 😳

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Suha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Desigirl_21
Res 😳 Unres

This was too good, I love how they bickered in the coffee shop it was so cute

Pls do continue it I would love to read more of it 😃

Thanks so much! I was kind of unsure about that part so your comment really means a lot. I'll try my best to continue :)