MaNan OS: Spending The Night in My Monster's House

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Niya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Amazing! 👏 It lightened up my mood! 😊

Pls do write more OS! 😊

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Ishq-Dua

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Snigs.

I loved this OS!😆

Why everyone come to Manik's house only on this day?😆

This OS is written so beautifully..

I hope it happens this way😆

The closet scene where Nandu was sleeping was written really well.

Even with her sleeping..she won't let him kiss her?😆

Its really cute.

You wrote it so well <3

Snigs! 🤗

Thank you jaan!

I guess they all were missing Manik at the same time lol😆

Looking at the way Nandu is I doubt she would let him kiss her even if she was asleep😆

glad u enjoyed it!😳

if you are interested in a MaNan kiss then help yourself with the (Kiss version)😆

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Ishq-Dua

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: .ishqbulava.
WOW This is awesome ya..I was feeling soo bored and craving for some OS so thankyou for this
Beautiful piece of work..very well written

I would really want Nandini to spent the night at Manik's place..But damn! This girl she won't let him kiss her even in her sleep..poor guy 😆

Anyways do write more.

Hey! thanks!😃

so glad I could lighten up your mood a little😳

I'm also hoping she ends up spending the night in his house but yeah I don't think he is going to get his kiss any soon😆

You can read the (Kiss version) if you also want a MaNan kiss😳

thanks again! =)

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Ishq-Dua

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ap_devika
nice post. please cont ur work.

Thank you!😊

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Ishq-Dua

@Ishq-Dua

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Desigirl_21
Lovely OS, lol Nandu here also wont let Manik kiss her 😆 and I felt so bad for Manik everyone had decided to not leave him alone
I liked how u made her spend the night in ur story 😳

Thank U!

bechara Manik since the day Nandu entered his life everything started to go wrong😆

glad you liked it dear😳

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Ishq-Dua

@Ishq-Dua

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: gujjupari
Even when she is sleeping, Nandini can't help but add to Manik's sexual frustration😆

All-in-all, a brilliant OS! You seem to be updating one very day! Not that I am complaining! Nope! Not one bit! Keep them coming at this very rate😆

-Pari

I don't know what will happen to Manik in the future if he continues to pile all that sexual frustration inside of him. He needs to get a kiss very soon 😆

Thank you dear!

yeah because I have a break from college. But I'm starting college here very soon

I don't know if I can be as much active anymore but will try my best😃

thanks again Pari😳

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Ishq-Dua

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: TasmiaFaye
Wow lovely os! Luks lyk fab4 & nyonika had secretly planned to make nandu stay in manik's room. Bechara manik, neend mein bhi nandu usko kiss karne nahi diya. The lines- 'why r u sleeping next to me' & 'u still haven't woken up after that shower have u? Do u need another one? If u still haven't noticed this is my bed & it is very normal for me to sleep in it. U're the one sleeping next to me' are just what nandini & manik wud have really said if such a situation arrives in the show, & i really hope it does! Ur this os is just as wonderfully written as the other os's u wrote! Really cool!

Thank You!😃

"This must be some kind of joke" As Manik said 😆

Nandu this girl I tell you lol

I tried to keep their characters intact and since you said this I think I succeeded in doing so😳

thank you dear! I love to see your presence in my writings! 😃

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Ishq-Dua

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: nicky13
Nice ... Loved it ... I really hope real mein aisa kuchh ho :)

Thank you!😃

mujhe bhi *crossing fingers* I hope we get some hot MaNan moments on Monday😳

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Ishq-Dua

@Ishq-Dua

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: pickachu
Lovely os!
Poor manik could not kiss her even when she was sleeping 😆

I hope that happens in show too 😳

😆 I know right lol

waise if you want you can read the (Kiss version) I added for all the despo Maniks😆

thanks for your comment

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Ishq-Dua

@Ishq-Dua

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: ForeverForU
aww so cute
Nyonika also came after Fab5...I so want to see this..the way he lifted a sleeping Nandini and slept right to her...OMFG you just made me want to read more on Manan Dua...fab job done👏

Thank you!😃

I hope we get some romantic MaNan scenes on Monday 😳 I'm also waiting for the day Manik and Nandu share the same bed