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Posted: 11 years ago
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HEY,HEY i am the first,i am the first
i loved the update...😊

manik broke the jar...,then he accepted his mistake!!!and gave the jar...to..nandini?😕

uff,i can't believe this,i think dhruv did that...,

continue faaast dear...😊

and thanks for the pm😳

jiya😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the first chp. I was smiling all through the story from nandu's red nose till her smile. So sweet of bloody monster manik malhotra to give her a jar full of fireflies after destroying the 1st one. Nice update dear, continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it !! Isn't bloody monster Manik Malhotra way too cute ?
Continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so cute...loved it totally...sow ant to see what happens next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you for the likes nd comments. .will update chapter 2 soon :)
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Chapter 2


Next day @S.P.A.C.E

"Manik..."Nandini called out for him.

"Ugh,What is it?"He asked.

"woh..I wanted to thank you.You aren't that bad as you try to show."

A totally confused Manik asked her why she was thanking him.

"The Fireflies."

This made Manik all the more confused.

"What?You are so stupid.Because of me your fireflies flew away and you are thanking me.Dumb girl."


"Manik tume hi ek aur jar of fireflies ghar beja tha na."

"What?Pagal ho kya?"He asked her.

"Par Manik.."Before she could finish her sentence he pulled her close to him.

"Ahh,Now i get it,you love talking to me don't you?That's why you come up with this silly reason to talk to me.But let me make it clear to you I'm not interested in talking you."He told and went away.

"Mhuje Bhi koi shauk nahi hai tumse baat karne mein.Ajj ke baad tumse kabhi baat nahi karongi."She told loudly.

He looked back.

"Cool"He told and left.

Someone who was watching them gave an evil smile.

Nandini was all angry.

"If not Manik..Kisne beja hoga?"she thought.

She went Home.

"Chachi!Yesterday some had come home to meet me kya?"

"Haan..Nandu.Mein batana bhool gayi thi..Koi ladki aayi thi with the jar of fireflies and she asked me to give it to you..so i kept it in your room and there was a small letter along with it."Nandini's chachi told and went away.

"Ladki?"Nandini thought.

"Who can it be?Navya?"she asked herself.

"Na..it can't be.I din't even tell her about the incident.And if it was her also why would she write Manik's name in the letter?"


"Uss Idiot ko lagta hai ki meine fireflies beja hai."He told.

"Buddy did you send it to her?"Dhruv asked him.'

"Buddy Pagal ho kya?"Mein kyu aisa karoonga."

"No..i just thought."

"You no na..how much i hate her?I'm her Monster Manik."He told with a little smile.


On the other hand Nandini was busy thinking who that girl was,when she got a message from an unknown Number.

Better stay away from my Boyfriend.

He belongs only to me.




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Here you go.Chapter 2.

Hope you all like it.:)

waiting for your comments and views.

For PM's please Buddy me.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing job👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was cute i wonder who is she may be alia or someone else wating for the next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great update. .wonder who the girl was ? Maybe Alya? But why wld she do that? Or maybe Dhruv sent some girl and wrote Manik's name ? Confused//
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Beautiful both the chapters... Love them ... Wrote really well 👏
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