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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh well this is likely to happen a few months later! *fingers crossed* and I definitely want Dhruni to hook up first and then Manan! :D :P

Anyway! UPDATE! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Okay here I am with part two. I was so happy to read all your encouraging comments. I really like the prospect of Cabir/Navya together, but I don't want Cabir to fall for Navya the way she is now. I want her to become less obsessed with boys and more herself, her beautiful cute self, and for him to fall in love with that version of her. But that's just what I want. So there is going to be a lot more Cabir/Navya in the part because well it is a Cabir/Navya story. Also this part is way longer and will have a few DhruNi scenes too, so I hope you enjoy them. Hope you enjoy it.
PLEASE DO COMMENT AND LEAVE YOUR THOUGHTS. Give long-ish comments, more than just a few words, because it really encourages the writers. Not just me, but all the IF writers. I know I hate it when people comment saying good', nice update' or nice post'. Give some feedback on what you liked and what you didn't like. It really helps the writer and encourages them. I try to do the same for other people's stories. But just getting a comment is great, so please do leave your thoughts.
WARNING: Harshad bashing. RATED PG13...only to be safe...it isn't too bad...just some bad language and a some intimacy...don't want anyone to blame me later.
OH AND BEFORE I FORGET. I HAVE GOOD NEWS. I'VE CHANGED THIS STORY INTO A THREE-SHOT, BECAUSE I WANT TO ADD AN EPILOGUE, JUST TO END IT ON THE RIGHT NOTE!
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"That better be an empty threat Harshad, otherwise you might not be able to threat anymore, once I'm done with you," said a voice from behind Harshad. They all, including Harshad who turned, looked to where the voice was coming from. Navya was surprised, but happy.

"Oh, I'm really scared," Harshad mocked. Cabir clenched his fist.

"You better leave, Harshad. Before things get out of hand," Manik told him.

"Navya, these people can't protect you forever," Harshad said.

"Try us," Cabir said.

"What is your problem? She's not your girlfriend," Harshad said.

"Yeah right she isn't," Cabir said, shocking everyone. He went up to Navya, and did what Navya only dreamt about. He kissed her. Navya froze. She didn't know what she was supposed to do. Soon enough she found herself melting in to the kiss. Everyone gasped. Navya suddenly realized what was going on, and pushed Cabir away. She saw that Harshad had gone.

"What the hell?" Navya exclaimed.

"It got him to leave," Cabir said. The girls shook their heads, while the boys almost started to laugh.

"Got him to leave... Cabir ki bacche. What the hell were you thinking? Kissing me like that, in front of everyone" Navya said.

"It's not like you never wanted to do that," Cabir said. Navya slapped him. Everyone looked at them shocked.

"Not anymore!" Navya exclaimed stomping off.

"Normally, I would have been so against someone slapping you, but you deserved that," Mukti said.

"Mukti!" Cabir said.

"She's right. You better go apologize, before I tell Navya bad things about you," Nandini said.

"How would you know bad things about me?" Cabir asked, suspiciously.

"Please, who's girlfriend and best friend am I?" Nandini said. Dhruv smirked and put an arm around, her while Manik laughed.

"You guys are the worst friends ever," Cabir said.

"Aww Cabir, you know we love you...now go apologize to Navya," Alya said. Cabir sighed and walked off. He went to find Navya who was standing on the roof, near the edge.

"A stupid kiss is seriously not worth killing yourself over," he said. Navya almost fell forward.

"First you kiss me with my permission, then you try to kill me. Wow Cabir, you're really out doing yourself," Navya commented. If Cabir didn't need her to forgive him, he would have laughed.

"Look I'm sorry for kissing you without my permission, but I did it for you. I didn't want Harshad to bother you anymore," Cabir told her.

"There could have been another way. I can't believe you took my first kiss from me. It's almost as bad as Nandini's first kiss," Navya said.

"Hey, I'm not that bad of a first kiss. Anyway, I know that you know I like you," Cabir said. That was true, she did know that. After everything had been cleared up, Cabir had been much nicer to her, and eventually he had told Mukti that he really liked Navya. But Navya refused to believe it, as he always made fun of her. Everyone knew that Cabir and Navya liked each other, but wouldn't admit it.

"So what..." Navya said, as he moved closer towards her. He trapped her against the wall. "Cabir...what are you doing?"

"I'm going to make you admit that you like me. We both know it's true, so why are you avoiding it?"

"Because you're Cabir, and I'm your black and white madhubala. You can't like me, you've always made fun of me," Navya said. Cabir leaned in closer to her, their faces just a few inches away from each other.

"Navya, I like you. I really do," he said. Just as he was about to kiss, Navya's phone rang. They both sprung apart.

"This phone always rings at the wrong time," Cabir said. Navya quickly took the phone and ran away from there. She picked up her phone.

"Hello?"

"Navya, are you okay? Where are you?" Nandini's voice called through the phone.

"Yeah, I'm fine. I'll meet you in class," Navya said. She walked to the classroom and joined Nandini. She filled her in with what happened.

"But it's true. Why can't you just accept it?" Nandini said.

"Because, it can't be that easy. I've waited so long, so it can't be that easy," Navya complained.

"It is. Just let it happen, he's been crazy about for so long now, and you about him for EVEN LONGER," Nandini told her. Navya thought about, all these different situations and answers going through her head.

"Anyway forget about that, think about what you're wearing to the party tonight. It's at Alya's place, and Mukti and I are going over to get ready together. You should come too. We'll meet you outside the academy," Nandini told her. But Navya's mind was stuck on Cabir, and what happened on the roof.

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Top-Left: Alya, Top-Right: Mukti, Bottom-Right: NANDINI, Bottom-Left: NAVYA

The girls helped Alya set up for the party, and by the time the guys had all arrived it had already gotten noisy. Dhruv and Nandini were quietly dancing/talking to each other in the corner, while Alya and Manik danced together in the middle of the crowd. Mukti was dancing with some guys, and Navya stood with some girls eyes scanning the crowd for Cabir. When she found him, she couldn't believe her eyes. There he was, dancing with another girl. How could he? He expresses his feelings for her, then goes and dances with another girl. How dare he? Who does he think he is? Navya could feel tears welling up in her eyes, so she ran out of there. She walked away from the crowd and towards where the pool was. She sat on a chair, trying to wipe her tears. Suddenly she felt a presence next to her, she looked up and saw Harshad. She quickly stood up and made to escape, but he grabbed her arm.

"Come on Navya. Don't do this. I know you want me," he said.

"I don't want you," she said, speaking loudly so that maybe someone would hear.

"Don't even bother, no one can hear you over the music," Harshad said. Navya was getting worried now. He kept coming closer to her, while she tried to back away from him. Unfortunately she only found herself backed into a wall.

"Don't worry, I'll make sure you have a good time," he said, trapping her. Navya closed her eyes, expecting the worst to come, but nothing happened. Instead she heard a splash. She opened her eyes, and saw Harshad in the pool, while Alya, Mukti and Nandini had come to check on her.

"Navya, are you okay?" Nandini asked. "Did he do anything? I'll kill him. I swear to god, I murder him and make sure no one can find his body."

"No you won't," Dhruv said.

"Like hell I won't. He tried to molest my best friend, let's see how he breathes when I'm done with him," Nandini fumed. If Navya wasn't still in shock, she would have burst out laughing at her best friend.

"Okay, you need to calm down," Dhruv said, trying to calm her down.

"Navya, are you okay? I'm so sorry I didn't reach here sooner. I should have," Cabir said, checking her over for any injuries. Navya flashed her eyes over to his worried face, and remembered what she saw before all of this.

"Why do you even care?" Navya said, before pushing him away and walking off. Everyone looked at her in surprise, and all the girls eyes narrowed on Cabir.

"What did you do?" Mukti asked.

"Nothing. I swear, I haven't even seen her the whole night...well of course I saw her. I mean she's gorgeous, who can miss her. I've been dancing with other...oh shit," Cabir said.

"What?" Alya asked.

"She probably saw me dancing with other girls," Cabir sighed.

"You really suck when it comes to girls. You're almost as bad as Harshad," Mukti said.

"Cabir!" Harshad yelled, getting out of the pool. He came up to them and grabbed Cabir's shirt. "What the hell do you think of yourself?"

Cabir pushed him away.

"You better stay the hell away from Navya. Understand?" Cabir threatened.

"And if I don't..." Harshad asked.

"IF YOU DON'T I WILL MURDER YOU AND NO ONE WILL BE ABLE TO FIND YOU bas***d! STAY AWAY FROM HER AND US YOU CREEP!" Nandini yelled pouncing on Harshad. Both Dhruv and Manik ran forward to pull her back, which ended up being so much harder than they thought it would be.

"Nandini! Leave him! Nandini," Dhruv exclaimed while prying her off Harshad. They all looked back at where Harshad was now sporting bleeding lip.

"You stay the f**k away from her you bloody creep. Otherwise, a bleeding lip will not be the only thing you're sporting!" Nandini yelled at him, while Dhruv held her. Harshad stomped off angrily.

"Oh my god! Nandini, you are my hero!" Mukti exclaimed.

"That was bloody good man," Manik said.

"Remind never to get you mad," Cabir said.

"Well then you better go manofy Navya before I do..." Nandini threated, which led Cabir to get scared and run away.

"You are the scariest girlfriend ever. We haven't been together one day, and you've already beaten someone up. What am I going to do with you?" Dhruv said, wrapping his arms around his girlfriend.

"Love me forever," Nandini said, wrapping her arms around his neck.

"That I already do," Dhruv said leaning forward. Everyone else cringed.

"You guys are sickeningly sweet," Alya commented.

"Please, we all have to live with you and Manik, so you can live with me and Dhruv," Nandini retorted.

"Touche," Manik said, nodding his head. They all laughed.

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Cabir walked to where he realized Navya would be. The guest room, or also known as Navya's new room. Whenever the girls slept over, Navya and Nandini would always take this room. He found Navya sitting on the bed.

"Please, let me explain," Cabir said. Navya sprang up and turned. She made to move, but Cabir trapped her in his arms. "No I won't let you leave. We have been playing this cat and mouse game forever, and I will not let you escape again. I want you Navya, no one but you. Yeah I was dancing with those girls, but that's just to make you jealous. I don't like anyone but you, and I've liked you for ages. I want to be with you, I want to be the one to make you smile, to make you laugh, to make sure no one makes you cry. I want to-"

He was cut off by Navya's lips on his. To say he was surprised would be completely...WRONG. His responded as soon as her soft lips touched his. He tightened his hold on her, and she wrapped her arms around his neck. As the kiss deepened, the space between them become nothing. He brought her to the bed and lay her down. She started to take his shirt off, while he pulled her dress down. He pulled away.

"Are you sure about this? I don't want to force you into anything," he asked.

"I'm sure."

And with that he captured her lips with his, and they spent the night becoming one.

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Okay, so there is part two and yes there will be a part 3. It will be an epilogue just to end the story in a better way. It will be short, sweet and cute. Hope you enjoyed this. Please leave a review!

Epilogue
!Maya!
Edited by -MyMy- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsme update... Luved their romance... Update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really nice update... Good wrk
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was freaking awesome!! The last part was like smoldering lava.. God!!
Pls update soon otherwise I will die imagining what will happen next..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great one
i can die for Ky2 if this happens...on DhruNi was the sweetest 😆
Edited by malavikajoshy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was cute Nandini was a tigress beating Harshad really hilarious
Glad to see friendship of Fab 5 and Nandini navya
Dhruni again were super cute
Cabir Navya Hero heoine of the story they were awesome all the i dont like u i like u game was lovely and fun to read
waiting for part 3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Hot update Harshad ke tu watt lug gaye :p

Awesome.., looking forward to next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was cute oh this darn harshad but cabir is a hero...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So here it is. The final part. As I said before, it's going to be super short, but I still hope you enjoy it. Thanks for the support, everyone who liked and commented. Make sure you do leave your final thoughts and comments on this as it comes to a close. I loved writing this, it was super fun. Hope you enjoy this little epilogue.
EPILOGUE

Navya woke up to rays of light shining through the curtain. She smiled remembering last night. As she want to move, she felt and arm around her waist. She carefully pried Cabir's arm off her waist and went to get up, only to be pulled back towards the bed. She fell against Cabir's chest.

"Cabir, we need to go and see if the rest need help cleaning up," Navya said.

"They won't need help. There are like five people, they can handle it."

"Cabir..."

"Navya..."

"Cabir, get your ass out of bed," yelled Manik from outside the door. Navya burst out laughing and got changed. She wore a huge t-shirt and a pair of shorts she found.

"I do not want other guys seeing you in that," Cabir said, dressed in a t-shirt and shorts.

"What other guys? Manik & Dhruv? They have their own girlfriends to ogle yet," Navya said.

"Well let me ogle at my girlfriend."

"Am I your girlfriend?"

"Well I hope so...unless you want last night to just be a fling."

"Shut up Cabir," Navya said, exiting the room, with Cabir behind her. They went downstairs and saw the living room trashed. Dhruv, Nandini, Mukti, and Manik were helping Alya clean up.

"Don't just stand there, get your butts moving. We need to clean this up fast," Alya said. Cabir and Navya rushed and helped them. In no time the room was back to normal. They all sat in the living room.

"I love that you are all happy with your little relationships, but I'm feeling very seventh wheel-ish," Mukti commented.

"Don't worry Mukti, we'll find a good guy for you," Alya said.

"Or girl," Cabir joked. Mukti tossed a pillow at him, but it ended up hitting Dhruv.

"Oh sorry Dhruv," Mukti said. Nandini cuddled up to him, and made sure he wasn't hurt.

"Well I'm happy that everyone those two are finally together," Manik said.

"Me too," Navya and Cabir said together, in each other's arms.

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So there you go. That's it. I really hope you enjoyed this story. Leave your thoughts.
!Maya!
Edited by -MyMy- - 10 years ago

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