am writing for the first so please bear with me
My story begins with how Angad humilates Kripa and they are seperated
Six months pass by
Angad packs his bags and goes to the airport
Angad sits in the plane and is sad and lost in his thoughts
After a couple of hours, his plane lands in Mumbai and he boards off
Angad looks around him and is sad to think about what had happend here
His eyes are fillled with tears and his face shows pain
His heart still pains to think about what he had done to Kripa
He remembers when Kripa had come to him and told him she was pregnant
Angad had insulted Kripa in front of the whole academy and revealed to everyone that she was an unmarried pregnant woman, had no character
and was trying to trap him in her plan to become famous
Angad closes his eyes in mock pain
Angad: batha nahi woh kaha hogi, kisse haal mai hogi, mujhe... mujhe maaf bhi kiya ya nahi, nahi maine Kripa ko bohoth dard diye hai aur mai Kripa ko poori izzat ke saath apnaonga
Angad goes to dadi's house first and is shocked to see a lock on it
Angad wonders why the house is locked
Angad then goes to Khanna house
Angad sees his mom
Angad: HI mom
Naina: arre beta, tum kab ayye mai tumhara hi intezaar karahi thi
Angad: mom, dadi kahan hai, unke ghar par lock kyu hai?
Naina avoids the topic: woh sab baad mai, humne yehi faisla kiya tha na
ki world tour ke baad tumhari sagaayi Mishti se kardi jayegi, so now is the time
Angad looks at his mom irratated: mom please!!!
Angad: Kripa??
Naina looks angrily at Angad: batha nahi
Angad walks out of the house
Angad: there is one person who will surely know where Kripa is
Angad drives off to Bose house
Angad enters Bose house
Angad yells: Prithvi
Prithvi comes down
Prithvi: oh tum, kya lene aaye ho yahan
Angad: Prithvi kahan hai woh
Prithvi looks at him suspiciously: kaun??
Angad in great pain: Kripa
Prithvi: kyu koi thakleef baaki thi usse dene keliye, tumne jo kiya wo kaafi nahi kya?
Angad is now begging Prithvi: please
Prithvi looks away sadly: mai kya bathao, mujhe kudh nahi batha ki woh kaha hai, laukhon ka kehna hai ki....
he hesitates
Angad looks at him worriedly: lokhon? laukh kya kethe hai
bathao Prithvi
Prithvi: laukhon ka yeh kehna hai ki Kripa is is is
DEAD
Angad's world comes tumbling down
his soul is broken into tiny pieces
his life has no meaning left
Angad: nahi tum joot kehre ho, essa nahi hosaktha hai, meri Kripa... meri Kripa mujhe chodkar nahi jasakthi
Angad has tears rolling down his cheeks
Prithvi: looks at Angad and reazlies that Angad loves Kripa a lot
Prithvi tries to control him
Prithvi: kuch paka nahi hai lekhin abhi thak Kripa ki body nahi meeli hai
Angad trying to drown in this hope: umeed hai, umeed hai
Prithvi: lekhin Angad isse baath ko huwe che mahine beeth chuke hai
koi bhi suraag nahi meela hai abhi thak
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Prithvi: agar thum jaho, tho hum usse jaghe par jasakthe hai, jaha par woh geeri thi
Angad: geeri thi??
Prithvi: haan, Kripa bridge par se geeri thi aur neeche pani tha aur kuch bhi nahi meela tha, phir bhi jasakthe hai agar thum chaho
Angad: chalo
Prithvi takes Angad to the bridge and Angad looks down into the water
and cries badly
Angad doesn't want to go from there
Prithvi forces him into the car and drives him home
Angad can't sleep the whole night, he tosses and turns and still can't sleep
Angad: gets up, mujhe ek boat hire karke, aur aas paas ke gao mai check karna jahiye, shayad, shayad meri zindagi mujhe miljaaye
Par, subha jaonga,
Angad then goes to sleep finally finding a solution, although he took lots of sleeping pills, he still sleeps a restless sleep
Angad goes off very early in the morning
He hires a steam boat and starts off on his mission
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Bose House
Prithvi is going out when
tum?
Tania walks in:haan mai, i'm sorry i'm late Prithvi
Prithvi softens cuz it's not in his nature to be short tempered: it's okay, chale
Tania looks at him and smiles: let's go
Khanna House
Naina looks angrily at Karthik,: Angad tumhe kuch batha kar gaya hai kya?
Karthik: nahi mom, mai to kal usse meela hi nahi
Naina is very frustrated now: Yeh Angad kaha hai??
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Angad looks around and spots a small village from afar
Angad checks with the village people but no one knows of Kripa
Angad is going back to his steam boat with lost hope and lost life
Suddenly he spots someone, he turns and sees someone smoking a cigarette and lots of beer bottles are around the person
That's it for today
A suspense in the plot
Who is this person smoking and drinking?
I thought, why is Prithvi always left out (eventhough
A-k have to be together)
so i decided to make his role bigger, keep guessing it might be a love story or it might turn out unexpeted
as i'm always knwon to my friends to do the unexpected
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Angad sees a girl shaggily dressed sitting on the ground, with many beer bottles around her and smoking a cigarette
Angad knows in his heart who it is, he can never forget her face, never
Angad runs towards Kripa and hugs her
Kripa is taken by shock with Angad hugging her and does not know how to react
Kripa pushes him back, and looks at him angrily: yeh kya natak hai
Angad full of pain is and holds her hand: Kripa mai jaantha hoon jo maine kiya woh maafi ke layak nahi hai par phirbhi mai maafi mangna jaatha hoon, please
Kripa lets go of her hand: kya bakwaas kehre ho, agar sharaab jahiye tho jakar kareedlo mere peeche kyu padhe ho,
Kripa mumbles, waise bhi mere paas zyada paise nahi hai
Angad looks at her astonished, Kripa yeh tum kya kehri ho, sharaab?
Angad then looks around and realization strikes him, that Kripa was drunk looking at empty beer bottles
Savni oh Savni
Angad hears a voice he turns around to see a very old woman staring down at him
Old lady: tum kaun? savni ke saath kya karahe ho?
Angad: Savni, nahi koi galath faymi hai apko, yeh savni nahi Kripa hai
Old lady makes a face: Kripa??
haan Kripa che mahine pehle usse pahari bridge se geeri thi aur ab mujhe meeli hai, yeh kripa hai, Angad says happily
Now it dawns on the old lady: tho iska naam Kripa hai
beta, haan shayad yeh wahi hai, kyunki yeh usse bridge se geeri thi aur gaowaale ne usse bachaya tha
par bathkismati se..
Angad worried: baskismathi se kya??
Old lady: bathkismathi se uski yaadash chali gayi thi, aur uska atha na batha tha, tho woh yehi rehne laghi aur isse bechari ko bathanahi kahase sharaab ki rath lagayi aur cigarette thab se iska yehi haal haal
Angad looks at an unconscious Kripa, tearfully he pulls her in his arms and cries
Angad: yeh sab meri wajase huwa hai, na mai Kripa ko badnaam kartha aur na usse ithni badhi chot pohchthi aur na uska yeh haal hotha
Kripa ki haalath meri wajase essi huwi, tho mai isse sudharoonga
mai Kripa ko wapas waisi banaonga jaise woh pehle thi
saying this he carries Kripa into his arms
Angad: ji, yaha mera rehna ka intezaam hosakta hai, agar apko koi thakleef na ho tho
Old lady: nahi beta, koi thakleef nahi, balki mujhe khushi hai, ke isse ladki ko ithna pyar karne waala meela hai aur ussekeliye ithni fikar kartha hai aao
Angad dreams of him and Kripa dancing to song in the haze and has tears in his eyes
maine dil se kahaa -2, ai deevaane bataa
maine dil se kahaa, ai deevaane bataa
jab se koi milaa, tu hai khoyaa huaa
ye kahaani hai kyaa, hai ye kyaa silsilaa, ai deevaane bataa
maine dil se kahaa, ai deevaane bataa
dhaDkanoN mein chhupi, kaisi aavaaz hai
kaisaa ye geet hai kaisaa ye saaz hai
kaisi ye baat hai, kaisaa ye raaz hai, ai deevaane bataa
mere dil ne kahaa -2, jab se koi milaa
chaaNd taare fizaa, phool bhaNvre havaa
ye hasin vaadiyaaN, neelaa ye aasmaaN
sab hai jaise nayaa, mere dil ne kahaa
maine dil se kahaa, mujhko ye to bataa
jo hai tujhko milaa, usmein kyaa baat hai
kyaa hai jaadoogari, kaun hai vo pari, ai deevaane bataa
mere dil ne kahaa
naa vo koi pari, naa koi maahjabin
naa vo duniyaaN mein sabse hai zyaadaa hasin
seedhi saadhi si hai, bholi bhaali si hai
lekin usmein adaa ik niraali si hai
uske bin meraa jeenaa hi bekaar hai
maine dil se kahaa
baat itni si hai ki tujhe pyaar hai
mere dil ne kahaa mujhko iqaraar hai
haaN mujhe pyaar hai
2nd part coming soon ............
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Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
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