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Posted: 20 years ago

Do we hav any prithivi fans???????

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Posted: 20 years ago
That was a good part 👏 👏 plz continue
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Posted: 20 years ago
awsome not a prithvi fan but still loved the part!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
dat waz gr8 continue soon plz!!!!!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: simplyconfused

awsome not a prithvi fan but still loved the part!!!

loved it

plz cont soon👏

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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: simplyconfused

awsome not a prithvi fan but still loved the part!!!



exactly, especially at this moment, but really did like the part. i was just picturing angad n kripa in this scene the whole time 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago

Part 37


"Order SechsKies!" yelled Angad. "Ooh, ooh," said Josh. "I want some action BABY!" Angad glared at him. Josh shuts up. "Now I want to talk to all of you about Krish. He's only been here for a few months but he had saved my life twice and not to mention, Prithivi's. Prithivi slapped Krish on the back and smiled. "Now," continued Angad. "What do you want Krish?? A car, money, women? Tell us and it's yours." "Yeah," said Prithivi. "Just name it buddy and it's yours."

I thought about it for a while. The only thing I wanted was Angad but I couldn't say that. Since he was suspecting me so much there was only one thing I should ask for. "I want a woman," I told them. They all opened their mouths in shock. "Alright Krish, you dog!" yelled Prithivi, breaking the silence. "At least you're proving to us that you're a man now!" "Okay," said Angad slowly. "Who's the girl??"

"Ms.Harshni," I announced. I saw Harshni's smiling face turn mad. "Who do you want??" Prithivi asked me in disbelief. I repeated myself. "Ms. Harshni" Prithivi grabbed me by the collar of my shirt. "Out of all the girls you could have picked, why her??" he yelled at me. I knew Prithivi liked Harshni but Harshni was the only person that could help me. "I happen to like her too," I answered him. "Besides, you all said I can have anything I want, and I want Harshni" "He's right," said Angad softly.

"We can't go back on our words." Angad clapped his hands for attention. "So, Harshni now belongs to Krish. Anyone from SechsKies who touches her, the penalty is death. Dhruv and Mannan had to hold Prithivi back from attacking me. "I thought you were my friend!" he yelled as they took him away. I sighed and headed for my room. Angad looked at Krish as he was walking away.

"Krish." "Yes Boss?? "Are you sure that's what you want??" "Yes Boss, I'm sure" I've never been more sure in my life. Then Krish left. When I made it back into my room, Harshni was in there waiting for me. "What the hell is going on??" she asked me. I knew it was time to tell her my story.

When I finished, she was bawling like a baby. I handed her a tissue. "Th..that is s..so..romantic, Harshni said, sobbing. I patted her head as she leaned on me. "No, it's not." "So you're not going to tell Angad who you really are?? I shook my head. "It wouldn't matter anyways." "How do you know? If he knows you're still alive, who knows? He might fall in love with you."

"Maybe," I began slowly. "But then he'd love me out of pity and not out of love. I don't want that." "Oh." Harshni stared at the floor. "I wonder if Mickey really likes me." "What??" I asked in surprise. She looked at me sheepishly. "Oh, I forgot to tell you that Mickey and I are beginning to fall for each other." "Why didn't you tell me??" "I didn't have a chance to. Besides, it just happened." "I'm sorry Harshni." "It's okay," she said as she hugged me.

"We'll just have to put our little romance on hold for a while. You're more important." "No, I'll go tell----" My words were cut off by my lack of air. This time my attack was worser than it ever had been before. Harshni stared at me frightened. "Kripa! What's happening??"

"C..can't breathe" I managed to say. She lifted me up. "Come on, I'll take you to the hospital." "Don't let the others see me," I said to her before I collapsed into total darkness.

Preview: What will happen?? Will Kripa die?? Will Angad finds out???

Edited by su_x3 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
that was amazing
i really liked the part when angad asked wut she wanted
plz cont soon 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
nnnnnoooooooooooooooooooooo nonononono dont let her die.pls pls pls. pls harshini do something good in this fanfic if not the actual show. go n tell angad the truth 😛 come on 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
awsome awsome!!! and such suspense out of all three wuestions i choose the last one angad finding out!!! 😆

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