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hi guys i've posted this fan fiction long time ago and u guys really liked it and i am posting it again for the newies to they can enjoy it too😃

ok guys this is just my thoughts of how angad will propose kripa so dont take it seriously okay

its starts with angad he goes to dadi's house when he finds out where kripa is so the sense starts with agnad knoking the door and dadi was in the bathroom she was putting her make up on so she tells kripa to open the door. kripa opens the door and she is shocked to see angad so she trys to slam the door on angad's cute little facebut our great angad dont let her do that and says with angry face "this is not your house so stop playing with my dadi's door otherwise tumhare liye yeh aacha nahi hoga." and now the PROPOSE

angad-kripa mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai

kripa- as usal mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karnii chale jaao yaha se

angad - yeh tumare baap kar ghar nai meri dadi ka ghar hai samji tum

kripa - thik hai to phir mein hi chali jaati hoon

angad holds her and says tum kahi nai jaao gi mujhe tumse baat karni hai samji

angad - agar tumhe lagata hai ke mein ne tumari maang mein lipstick lagake kuch galat kiya hai to mujhe maaf kardo plz mein ne jaan buchke kuch nahi kiya tha. pata nahi mein ne aisa kyon kiya.

kripa - tumne aisa is liye kiya kyuki tum Prithvi se jalte ho tum nahi chate ke meri koi bhi help kare ya koi bhi mujhe support kare

angad ( with angry face) haan haan mein yeh nahi chahta ke koi bhi ladka tumhare aas paas rahe chahe woh prithvi hi kyon na ho because mein hoon darling then he starts singing " kiska hai yeh tumko intazar mein hoon naa dekhlo idhar to ek baar mein hoon naa"

kripa is like oh plz shut up and get lost

angad - dekho kripa mein sach much tumse pyar karne laga hoon yeh jaante hoove bhi ke mujhe pyar ka matlab bhi nahi malumlekin mera vishwas karo mein tumhe puri zindagi khush rakhoon gaa.

kripa is about to leave

angad holds her duppatta and says plz dont go i cant live with out u

kripa chodo mera dupptta nahi to mein chikhu gi hindi film ki tarha

angad is like no plz agar dadi aa gai to?

and now the really romantic sense of angad and kripa

angad holds her face in his hands and says kripa kya tum mujse shadi karogi?

kripa is like whattttt mein aur tumse shadi kabhi sochna bhi mat samje

angad starts singing "kab tak jawani chupao gi raani kawaro ko kitna satao gi raani kabhi to kisi ki dulhani ya bano gi mujse shadi karogi mujse shadi karogi

kripa starts getting mad as usal

angad- dekho kripa aab tum mujhe gussa dila rahi ho tum aachi tarha jaanti ho ke mein jo chahta hoon wohi hota hai agar mein ne kaha hai ke mein tumse shad karna chahta hoon to woh karke rahoon gaa. chahe tumhe aacha lage yaa bura

kripa - tum aapne aapko samaj te kya ho

angad -mein aapne aap ko angad samaj taa hoon

and now the climax

prithvi comes there to propose kripa

prithvi sees angad and kripa together and says angad what the hell u doing here?

angad is like hello dont u know that this my dadi's house not your papa's house

angad - mein yaha kripa ko propose karne aaya hoon lekin tum yahaa kyon aaye

prithvi- mein bhi kripa ko propose karne aaya hoon

angad gets mad aur prithvi ka collar pakadta hai

prithvi - plz yaar collar mat pakdo. kal bhi tumne collar pakda tha aur mera shirt kharab ho gaya thaa aaj plz mat pakdo

angad - ok collar nahi pakdta tumahara gala pakadta hoon. how is that?

and now the big climax

angad - kripa mein tumse aabhi shadi karna chahta hoon tum chalo mere sath

kripa - mein kahin nahin jaane wali

angad -to phir hum yahi shadi kar lete hai

prithvi - kripa mein tumse bahut pyar karta hoon plz tum mujse shadi kar lo

kripa smiles at him

angad with angry face

prithvi is shy

angad holds kripa's hand and picks her up and trys to put her in his car. just then dadi comes there

dadi - angad yeh kya kar rahe ho chod do kripa ko

angad puts her down

kripa runs to dadi and says dadi angad mujse jabar jasti shadi karna chahta hai

prithvi - dadi mein kripa se sacha pyar karta hoon

angad -to mein kya jhoota karta hoon

dadi looks at kripa and says tum kis se pyar karti ho? angad se ya prithvi se

kripa is confused

angad -dadi yeh kaisa sawal hai ofcourse mujse karti hai right kripa

kripa is like whatever

prithvi - kripa tum mujse pyar karti ho right

kripa bit of confuse

kripa is like ok meri ek shart hai mein shadi karne ke liye raazi hoon agar tum dono mein se koi bhi pehle meri maang me sindoor bhare gaa wohi mera pati hoga.

angad - lekin kripa mein ne to tumhari maang mein pehle hi bhar liya tha sinddoor.

kripa is like tab mein raazi nahi thi tumne zabar zaasti bhar liya tha lekin aaj ki baat kuch aur hai aaj mein raazi hoon is liye jo pehle meri maang mein sindoor bhare ga mein usi se shadi karoon gi. and tum dono ke pas shirf 5 min hai sinddoor lane ke liye

angad and prithvi both are confused

kripa starts counting the seconds

angad and prithvi running around trying to find some red color for the sinddoor.

angad goes to his dadi aur dadi ko puch ta hai dad aapke pass hai sinddoor

dadi is like beta i am vidhwa

angad is like oh ya thats right

prithvi running around trying to find red color

just then angad gets an idea about the lipstick woh dadi ko puchta hai dadi aapke paas lipstick hai?

dadi - mere pass to sab color ki hai kaun si chahye beta

angad -kaha hai?

dadi - mere bedroom mein

prithvi also gets the same idea aur woh sun leta hai angad ki baat.

phir dono dadi ke bedroom mein bhag te he lipstick ke liye

dadi ke dressing table pe 6 or 7 lipstick hoti hai

both of them trys to find the red lipstick but dadi ke pass sab black lipstick hoti hai lol

angad is says meri dadi bhi naa is umar mein bhi gothic lipstick lagake phir ti hai.

both of them are looking for the red one but cant find it

both look depressed

suddenly angad ke dimag mein ek aur idea aata hai" kyon naa mein aapna hath kaat ke aane khoon se kripa ki maang bhar doon. but then he thinks agar jyada hath kaat gaya to khama kha hospital jana pade gaa aur prithvi faida utha lega so he changes his mind

both of them comes out with a face like this

then kripa says sorry guys aab sirf 20 seconds bachi hai aur mujhe nai lagta ke tum log aab kuch kar sako ge

just then angad looks at kripa's lips with red color

he runs toward her aur bahut hi pyar se uske lips ko aapne thumb se touch karta hai

kripa is confused and says what the hell r u doing?

angad is says shut up aur kripa ke lips to touch karta hai aur kripa ki red lipstick uske thumb par aaja ti hai aur phir woh apne thumb se kripa ki maang red lipstick se bhar leta hai

kripa is kinda like shock

prithvi par to jaise pahad hi tut pada ho he is also shocked

angad smiles when he sees kripa's maang with red color and he sreams jeet gaya mein jeet gaya

prithvi says mujhe yeh idea kyon nahi aaya

angad says to prithvi " ise ideas shirf unhi ko aate he jo meri tarha smart or dashing ho" samje mr.looser

dadi is happy

angad is happy

kripa kinda happy

prithvi is sad aur woh kirpa ko bye keh ke chala jaata hai

then dadi starts giving them lecture

dadi says kripa aab tum angad ki wife ho uski life ho. and says saada suhagan raho

angad is smiling at dadi then looks at kripa and says lets go home bady

kripa is like okay

aur dono angad ki sexy red kar mein beth ke chale jaate hai

end

2nd part coming soon