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Posted: 20 years ago
#51
  • rabba mere rabba rabba-Mujhe kuch kehna hai (in the show they did this song together)
  • Tumse Mil Ke Dil Ka Jo Haal-Main Hoon Na (i know this is not a disco song)
  • Gori Gori-Main Hoon Na (i know not much of a disco song either)
  • Aja Soniye-Mujse Shaadi Karoge (🤔)
  • Gela Gela Gela-Aitraaz (hmmm...)
  • Woh Tassavvur(love is forever mix)-Aitraaz (slow in beginning but then gets fast)
  • Yeh Dil Tumpe Aa Gaya-Aitraaz (🤔)
  • Achi Lagti Ho-Kuch Naa Kaho (??)
  • Kuch Naa Kaho-Kuch Naa Kaho (??)
  • Meri Chaandi Tu-Silsilay (🤔)
  • Koi Mil Gaya-Kuch Kuch Hota Hai (hmmm..)
  • No No-Kyun Ho gaya Na (😕)
  • Kambakth Ishq-Pyar tune Kya Kiya (😕)
  • Angel Eyes-Raghav (hmm??)
  • Do you only wanna dance(Dirty dancing:Havana Nights soundtrack)-Mya
  • Saanwali Si Ek Ladki-Mujse Dosti Karoge (ermm..slow dancing song)
  • Nikamma Kiya Is Dil Ne-Kya Dil ne Kaha (ughh..)
  • Tere Bina-Khushi (hmm..)
  • Dil Dhooba-Khakee (ermm..)
  • Kahin Pyar Na Ho Jaaye- Kahin Pyar Na Ho Jaaye (slow dance number)
  • Pehli Baar Dil Ye-Hum Ho Gaye Aap Ke (another slow dance number)
  • Aja Ve Mahi-Fida (erm.)
  • Go Balle Balle-Dil Ne Jise Aapna Kaha (??)
  • Chayya Hai Jo Dil-Dil Hai Tumhara (slow dance number??)
  • Mere Khayalon Ki Malika-Josh (slow dance??)
  • Mehbooba Mehbooba-Ajnabee (??)
  • Hum Deewane-Deewaanapan (ughh..)
  • Tauba Tauba-Kaal (😕)
  • O Makhna Ve-Dil Maande More (erm.)
  • Bardaasht Nahi Kar Sakta-Humraaz (ughh..)
  • Ek Pal Ka Jeena-Kaho Naa Pyar Hai (??)
  • Stolen-Jay sean (??)
  • Dance with you-Jay sean (??)
  • Tumhe Aaj Maine JO Dekha-Kuch Naa Kaho (hmm..)

I HOPE I WAS OF SOME HELP!!

if i find more and you still need them then i will give it you sry if some of them were not good😭....

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Posted: 20 years ago
#52
the songs were awesome!!! thnx sooo much!!!! i will pick 3 songs now!!! thnx once again!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#53
no problem i enjoyed doing it cuz i got to listen to music!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#54
i will post the nxt prt arund 4:00!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#55

just kidding take ur time

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Posted: 20 years ago
#56
im still writing it n will post it in a while!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#57

Part 5:

RECAP:

K: oh so ur the heartthrob Angad Khanna!!(she putz he hand out) nice 2 meet u!!

A:(he stares at Kripa n then her hand n finally shakes it) same here!!

The camera focuses on their hands n their happiness on their face!!

NOW:

Angad n Kripa both feel something in body n mind!!!

Angad n Kripa r still shaking their hands wen Aaliya cumes n disturbs them!!

Aa: Kripa chalein!

K: (getting her hands out of his n little embrassed)ya letz go! (sweetly) bye Angad!! C u on Tuesday!!!

A: (getting out of his thoughts) bye!

Kripa, Aaliya, n Anari go inside the disc while Angad is smiling as Kripa leaves n Prithvi doing the same but at Aaliya!!

Ka: Mishty, lagta hain kise ne yeh dono ka dil churaliya hain!!

In the background the tune"Churaliya hain tumne jo dil ko" is playing!!! (itz not the song only the music)

M: Kathick, I was thinking the same!!!

Then they both laugh n Prithvi n Angad realize they both r being laughed on!!!

A: (confused cauz he hasn't heard wat they were laughing at) kya hua?

While Angad was talking a big truck came so only prithvi culd hear him as he was standing nxt 2 Angad!!

P: (confused as Angad) lagta hain yeh dono paagal ho gaya hain!!

Mishty n Karthick have stopped laughing now n Mishty is really mad!!!

A: yeh kaunse nayee baat hain!!

Now Angad n Prithvi r laughing at those 2 n Mishty is really mad while Karthick is busy doing something on his cell!!

M: (boiling in anger) cahla?!

P: humne kab mana kiya tha?

Then they both start arguing while Angad n Karthick just leave!! Prithvi cs them leaving n so dose Mishty n they both starting walking!!!

The club is really rich type!! Lotz of rich n spoiled kidz go there!!! The DJ is playing "Aaja ve Mahi" 4m the movie Fida!!!! There r lotz of couples dancing 2 tis song!! Kripa n her company is sitting at a table tat is in the middle but on the right side!! While on the opposite side itz Angad n his company!! The space between is the dance floor!! Kripa n Angad can't look at eachother cauz of their seatings!! The table is round n from clockwise it goes like tis!!

Mishty, Angad, Karthick, n Prithvi!!

Kripa's table goes like tis:

Anari, Kripa, n Aaliya!!!

Angad can only c the back of Kripa's head if there rn't any dancers in his way!! Kripa nos tat Angad's table is across 4m hers but just ignores it!! New*yz the song going on is "Dil Di Nazar" 4m Maine Pyaar Kyun Kiya!!(srry if any1 dosen't like it)

Kripa's table:

K: so guyz, kaha hain mera surprise?

An: (little xcited) darwaza par!

Aa: (turning around) kya?!

Kripa looks at the door n runs 2 it!!(not at the door but the surprise) The surprise is none other then Josh!! Angad's eyes r following Kripa n he cs Kripa n Josh hugging!! He feelz something inside of him but dosen't no wat!!

A: (thinking) mujhe kya hoo raha hain?? mujhe yeh aajeb si feeling kyun hoo rahi hain??? (guyz he hasn't fallen 4 Kripa but his feeling is like a crush) Angad just brushes it off!!(guyz im gonna start another luv stry in tis fan-fic so plz bear w/ me) On the other side Kripa n Josh r walking 2wards the table!! All tis while Anari was sitting there wwatching Josh n Kripa!! Suddenly she xcuses herself n leaves!! They both reach the table but he is surprised only 2 c Aaliya as he was also xpecting Anari also!!! He hugs Aaliya n sits down but the whole time Josh's eyes were searching here n there!! Aaliya notices tis!!

Aa: kisse ko dhoond rahe ho??

J: (stooped searching n looked at Aaliya) who Aanri nahee dhikirahi!!! (meaning: I don't c Anari anywhere!)

Aa: who either baar gayee yah bathroom gayee!!

J: (giving ^) ok!!

K: go n get Anari Josh!

J: (a little happy) main kyun javoo?? (meaning: y shuld I go?)

Aa: ok to main jaati hoon!!! (getz up)

J: (making Aaliya sit doen) main he jaata hoon!!

K: so sweet!!

Aa: I no!! yeh dono ek dusara se kitna pyaar karte hain lakin ishaar kabhi nahin!! (shaking her head in disbelief!!!)

Angad was looking at them the whole time n was a little relaxed wen he saw Josh leaving!!!!!!

M: Angad!!

A: (w/ attitude) kya hain?

P: (sarcastic) who check kar rahi thi kit um zinda ho ya maar gaya!!!

K: (laughing) nice 1 Prithvi!!

They both give eachother high fives while Angad is just annoyed!!

Josh goes outside n he seez Anari sitting on the sidewalk crying!! Josh walks 2wardz her n sitz nxt 2 her!! Anari dosen't no tat Josh is nxt 2 her until he intervenes his fingers w/ hers!! She hugs him n he hugz her back!!! They both r lost in the moment until Anari letz go!!! She runz 2wards a pole n startz crying!! Josh is confused n he goes 2 where Anari is standing!!

J: (shocked at her behavior) kya hua hain tumko??

A: (turned arund n wiping her tearz) I'm fine!!

She is abt 2 go but Josh stopz her by holding her hand!!! He spins her arund!!

J: (voice breaking) kyun? Kyun tum nahin kate kit um bhi mujhe itna pyaar karte ho jitna main tumhe karta hoon!!!

An: (shocked yet stern) I don't luv u!!

J: (still angry n heartbroken) to tum meri aakhon mein aakha daal kaar kaho ki tum mujhse pyaar nahin karte!!

An: (looks at him n sayz) I don't luv u!!!

Josh letz her go!! Anari is just crying n walking 2wards the disc!! Josh is totally heartbroken n he just cries his heart out!! Anari is just cursing herself n is really mad at the happenings!! Josh turns around 2 c Anari but he only cs her head!! He turns back around n Anari turns around n at the same time so dose Josh!! He cs Anari n putz his arms out n Anari just runs n hugs him!!

Ok, I no the last prt was a bore but I culdn't think of anything so had 2 put Josh n Anari's luv stry!! Next epi I promise 2 put more of Angad n Kripa scenes!!

Also in September I will cont omly on weekendz as skool startz again n tis yr will b difficult!!!

Edited by Indian101 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#58
niharli cont soon it was good👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#59
hey Indian awsome job on your fan-fic!!
Can you check mine out and tell me what you think:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=72960

the promos and character analysis are on the first post and the first part to the fan-fic is on page 2!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#60
will do simplyconfused!! n call me Nirali!!

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