Dil Kya Kare-AK ff pt20@pg40

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Amnu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: stubborn
I BET ITS SHABBIR AND THERE GOIN TO MAKE ANGAD JELOUS LIKE IN KYUN HOGAYA NAA!!!!! HES SO CUTE WEN HES JELOUS AND THIS IS BY FAR THE BEST FAN FIC!!!!

its nothing gonna like that but still b tuned and thanx

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Amnu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#132

yiiiipppee i m a senior member now i m so happy 😃😃

Edited by amneet89 - 18 years ago

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armaghan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#133

well i also think its shabir really cute con asap

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armaghan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: amneet89
yiiiipppee i m a senior member now i m so happy 😃😃

congrats😛

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komal1

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Posted: 18 years ago

#135

hey guys i am 1st time talking to u i like this ff very much and ur comments too 😊

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Shina

@nsheena

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Posted: 18 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: amneet89
yiiiipppee i m a senior member now i m so happy 😃😃

Congrats!!👏👏

Gud going!!😃

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Amnu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#137

recap-angad sings a song in party.kripa and angad are lost in eachother's eyes when a person comes krips goes and hugs that person

Part-14

kripa is still hugging that person and starts crying.we now see that person's face its shabbir(s)
s-kripa...

there is lots of warmth in shabbir's voice.he seprates kripa and this gave relief to angad.angad was not liking the situation.kripa was crying badly and is exploring the ground.shabbir is now holding kripa from shoulders and makes her face him.he speaks in very convincing tone
s-kripa i m sorry,mujhe voh phone wala mazak nahin karna chahiye tha...stop crying atleast for me(naughtiness in his voice)u look like a monkey when u cry.stop crying i have an image to maintain

kripa get furious at him.she is smiling at same time.she starts hittig him after some time they hug again.shabbir wipes her tears.everybody is admiring that scene except angad.he was mad and burning in jealousy.angad was not able to take this any more and leaves.josh forwads to follow him but dadi stops him by saying that let him find the solutions himself this time.by the time aaliya goes to sabbir and hugs him.she speaks in a mad tone
aa-voh mazak kaafi ghatiya tha..kripa ki halat dekhi thi tumne.she became pale when sheheard u met with an accident
s-i m sorry jaan...u know i was just kidding(whispers in aaliya's ear)u told angad about us or not

aaliya nods negatively.shabbir gives her what is this look,then he goes to vedh and gayatri and touch thier feet,then dilip and naina's and finally dadi.before he could say anything to dadi,dadi points towards mad gauri.he goes and hugs gauri
g-(angry)u just don't talk to me.kripa is a hopeless case par tum meri shaadi mein kyun nahin aaye.mera bhai aur behen dono meri shaadi se missing.(gave nasty look to kripa in end)
s- are baap re..itna gussa..aap ki to koi chinta nahin hai mujhe but at least calm down for my niece/nephew w/e it is.iss halat mein gussa theek nahin hai.
k- u r right bhai..she is doofus thanx to jiju and angad who take care of her so well

kripa is confused that why she said angad's name.by the time nishant comes in frame
n-will anyone introduce me or i have to do myself
k-i wiil do that.this is shaabir di's younger&my elder brother and ur would b jiju.
n- hai,aaliya ne tumhaare bare mein bataya...lekin how r u related to my wife as a brother...i mean vedh uncle has no son
s-yes.u r rite.i m adopted son of thier family,u know another friend of our parents,mr bose.he was my father,we lived in lodon infact i was born there.mom dad died in a plane crash when i was 9.so vedh papa adopted me

gayatri comes and pulls shabbir's ear.there are tears in her eyes,shabbir realised that his way of giving intro hurted her.he asks apology for hurting them and told everybody that she had loved him more than his own mother.shabbir now goes to dadi.josh is also standing there.shabbir speaks to dadi
s-so how was my timimg
j- awsome man,i m josh,hai
s- oh u r my would b brother-in-law's best friend. glad to meet u.u did reaaly good job.btw where is angad?
dadi- gussa ho kar party chod kar chala gaya.
s- hamara teer sahi jagah par laga hai
j-absolutely

kripa is now trying to find angad.she desperately wanted to talk to angad but there was no sign of him.whereas angad was reallymad.he is heart broken and walking alone on an empty and silent road.

NEXT DAY IN COLLAGE

all r sitting in cafeteria.angad in not there yet.he has not attended any classes till now.there is a usual fight going between kaavya,lakshya,anjali and kt,josh has given dadi at least 50 calls to dai inquiring abot angad .there was no news of him after party and he was really mad

shabbir's intro-
he has completed his studies he is a year younger than josh but he has done two classes together.he and aaliya love each other everybody knows abou it except angad becos angad is reaal protectiveand possesive about aaliya and they plannned it to tell him on aaliya's coming birthday for thier safety.he is adopted by sharma's as told in ff.kripa is really close to him and shares everything with him.vedh never told about shabbir becos he didn't wanted anyone to know about this in india as shabbir's realtives were really mean and wanted his property,he has promised his friend to take care and protect his son from his relatives

well guys here goes the next part i must say my readers are really smart.plz do reply i always wait for them

as ever 😉
amneet 😳

Edited by amneet89 - 18 years ago

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mitali_s

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Posted: 18 years ago

#138

awsum part...lol angad is sooo jealous 😉 😳 ...cont soon

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eternal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#139

thats such a cute part, and kripa and shabbir's parents r so sweet, adopting a child. congrats to them for being super parents, oh and such a nice entry, tumhe angad ka ghussa dekhna chaaye tha, hai ke nahin? 😆

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Amnu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: tweetylicious
thats such a cute part, and kripa and shabbir's parents r so sweet, adopting a child. congrats to them for being super parents, oh and such a nice entry, tumhe angad ka ghussa dekhna chaaye tha, hai ke nahin? 😆

well i think this is my ff and i know that angad ka gussa bhaut bura that after all i wrote it😆😆😆