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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏It's really good esha, ur a great writer. Please continue😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
#12

thnks for liking it guys

but i wont b able to cont for 3-4 days

sorry to make u all wait soo long

lots of love

esha

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Posted: 20 years ago
#13
gr8 part. love kripa's attitude.😛. but cant see prithvi being the smoking-praising-himself type. hehe. post the nxt part soon.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#14

smooth,i liked it .it was interesting but isn't angad supose to the 1st most wanted guy

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Posted: 20 years ago
#15
That was awesome, love Kripa's attitude. Do continue. 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#16
plzzzzzzzz continue with the story
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angel3k

smooth,i liked it .it was interesting but isn't angad supose to the 1st most wanted guy

it was just prithvis thought that he was most wanted guy. well to find out the truth there should b voting done in collage . if u guys want i can do it as it is just a fanfic

i will cont soon

thanks for reading it& liking it

esha

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Posted: 20 years ago
#18

i will cont. sorry to keep u guys waiting for soo long

prithvi takes kripa & introduces her to his group members

there r 4-5 people

rahul-jaya r going toghter . then there is one more pair : shaan- meera

there is a guy name krish which is single

krish was searching for a gf & he saw kripa

kripa: k   ; krish : kr

kr: hey , can i ask the name of the beautiful lady ( taking kripas hand to kiss)

k: (knowing that he is trying to flirt) : kripa , kripa sharma & urs

kr: krish roy. nice meeting u

k: well i think this line is said at the end of the meeting. i m not leaving . r u leaving?(trying to pull his legs)

prithvi who is seeing all this thinks in his mind: ek aur bakra ban gaya

then enters a girl & hugs prithvi & gives a kiss

gal: hi sweetheart

p: oh hi shweta(to kripa) meet her this is shweta. my gf

s: hi kripa. u r the prithvis childhood friend right?

k: yep

p: prithvi used to talk lot abt u

k: (with a confident smile)really? but he never talked abt u to me. y prithvi honey?

p:( knows that kripa is pulling his leg) (well he is not at all serious): kripa just shut up(in low tone)

k:(understands) :oh this is shweta. who used to talk all rubbish stuff & bore u

shweta is now very angry

p: no . (turning towards shweta) u know kripa she is always joking. dont mind

s: ya . so u r comming today na.

p: ofcource sweety(trying that kripa should not speak up)

s: soo see u at 7:30

p: i will b on time(hugs her & she leaves)

krish trying to gain kripas attention

kr: r u free today

k:y ?

kr: can u come with me. i m bored

k(mumbering): now u want to bore me

kr: u said anything

k: no today is not possible but tommorow for sure

kr: ok

kripa(to prithvi): hey now come with me

p: y?

k: due to ur bet i will have to change my dressing style & for that u r comming with me to shop

p: r u gone crazy? i & with u . never

k: ok but shweta has not gone far away i can call her back

p: wait. i m comming with u. anyways i m bored with that shweta

k: i m there na.

p:ok

they both leave saying bye to all

well i know i havent shown anything of angad in this part so angads fan (i m one of it) r going to kill me. but from next part angad will have a good role

plz reply. whether i should cont or not

waiting for it

esha

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Posted: 20 years ago
#19
thanx esha, it was awesome as always. waiting for the continuation.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow cool! looks like Kripa is playing Angad's part in this fan fic! 😆 😕

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