a new fanfic . do read

hey guys i m starting a new fanfic i know it is not too good but then too i wanted to share

in this fanfic no one is completely possitive nor completely negative . all keep changing. angad & prithvi r in same collage. kripa has just arrived from london & is going to join same collage kripa-prithvi were together in london for some time where prithvi had helped kripa a lot

common points abt 3 main charecter :: all r rich very proud of wat they r & can do watever to get wat they want

main charecters ::::

angad: he is one of most good looking boys in collage every girl in collage wants to go along with him but he is not intrested in it . he has a mixed charecter . he plays all pranks does everything but at same time he has his rules & limits like no alcahol no cheating etc etc . he will enjoy life but with in limits . he loves his family. he is a scholar & always top collage

prithvi: even he is one of the famous boys of collage . he had & has many affairs . there is no limits for him he does wat ever he want . he just want to enjoy life at cost of anything. his parents r dead in car accident . he loves his dadi & is the only person who he obeys

kripa:: she is very very proud & feels she is the best & can do anything till now she must have atleast 20-30 affairs . she had done a mistake which only prithvi is aware . she has a crush on prithvi. she has a loving family but isnt close to them . she loves her sis mishty

other charecter::

mishty: she is typical ekta sati savitri type . she always obeys her parents & help kripa every time she gets scoliding from her parents(which is too frequent). she too loves kripa . she is 23 & her parents r finding some one too marry her

....... sharma( can some one tell me the name of kripas father in serial) :he is a rich fellow but sweet at heart . he loves both his daughter

gayatri sharma: she is just like tulsi . typical ekta type

karthik : angads big bro . he is too sweet . he loves his bro angad & can do anything for him . he is also finding someone too get married (ofcourse it will b mishty)

dilip khanna:: he is also good at nature . not much to describe abt him . but he & naina love each other & their children

naina: she is completely possitive . good caring etc etc

it was just intro & so borring but i will try too post 1st part soon

plz write ur views abt it

wud b waiting for ur opinion

lots of love

esha

please write more fast i cant wait

Originally posted by: deepey

esha it was good. you better continue before I start bothering u.😉

that is my work no one can do it as perfectly as i do it & u know it

i will cont soon

thnks to all for reading it

lots of love

esha

so here i m cont it . hope u will like it

1st day of collage::

kripa is all dressed . her dress is like amrita dress in main hoon na during her entrance . she has tied her hairs& is too confident . she has a look dare to touch me & i will kill u

she enters the collage & finds a big gang sitting to rag new student . she isnt affected

she walks towards the collage building

one boy just jumps . as he jumps all sand & mud r comming up due to his shoes pressure. he has wore sports shoes which r black . completely dressed in black . it is ofcourse angad he speaks out

a: r u new to this collage??

k: ( knowing they will rag her has a smile on her face): ya do u have any prob???

a: no . but before entraing collage u will have to sing something so start it

k: actually it should b ur part time job to sing & collect chillars from railways

a: stop ur nonsence & do as we say

k: i wont

a: u r challanging me??

k: no how can i ? i cant challange a looser like u . dont waste my time & get lost

kripa starts leaving while angad catches her hand

k: leave it or u will pay for it

a: oh really how?

k: how? wait she just turns his hand & is planning to kick him(well she knows karata) some one calls her::: kripa

she let goes his hand & turn the boy is wearing blue jeans with blue jacket & white t shirt . he was smokking it is prithvi

k: (to prithvi): just a sec prithvi

prithvi comes down & stand just by side of kripa placing his arm on her waist

k: ( to angad): stay away from me or else u know what

angad is just smilling as this was 1st girl who didnt do as he said . he was a bit infactuated

kripa-prithvi starts leaving

p:(to kripa) is everything fine did he do something?

k: no yaar wat can he do to me? he was just starring me as if not seen any one like me before. u know every boy on this planet wants to b with me

p: stop praising urself he is the 2nd most wanted boy of this collage 1st is ofcourse me . he is never with any gf .

k : there is difference between any girl & kripa sharma u know it dont u?

p: ya but this guy will not have any effect of u

k: if i make him in love with me than?

p: any thing u want but if not than?

k: any thing u want

p: sure it is a deal

they shake hand

p: let me introduce to my gang come

k: ok chalo

this is the best i cud give

thanks for reading & plz do comment

waiting for ur suggestion

lots of love

esha