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Posted: 20 years ago
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Maay peenay ka nahi

Jaam bharnay ka maza zidah hai

Nasha chaharnay ka nahi

Nashay main rahnay ka maza zidah hai

Tum say milnay ka nahi

Tumahain soochnay ka maza zidah hai

Zakham khanay ka nahi

Zakahm sahnay ka maza zidah hai

Maar janay ka nahi

Jee ka rahnay ka maza zidaha ha

Izhar karnay ka nahi

Ishara samahjahnay ka maza zidah hai

Tumahain sirf chahnay ka nahi

Dil say chahnay janey ka maza zidah hai

Angad Kripa ko dil se chata hai

Izzar bhi kar diya hai

Ab bas Naina ke rukhsat ka intezaar hai.

Khuda hafiz

mink

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Posted: 20 years ago
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very nice but need lil improvement in the words like "tumhey sirf chahney ka nahi,dil sey chahey janey ka maza ziyadah hai. and other nasha not naash.Dont mind please cause I changed some words otherwise its really good.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Oh Muniza, I can't thank u enough for correcting me. See this is what happenes when you don't speak Urdu. That why i love u all so much. I have fixed it now.😊

Thanks & love

Mink

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Thats ok, but u really tried good I cant even try it 😃.

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